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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi everyone!Thanks for the encouragement friends! here's the next part. Hope you enjoy.
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Camp at Goa
Part 2:New Emotions
Early next morning the five of them set out for their ''treasure hunt''. As was shown in the map, their first destination looked like a forest. But which one??
S: yaar. Hum goa aaye the masti ke liye. Yeh kaha phas gaye? Vardhaan sir bhi naa. Agar dena hi tha toh koi engineering vala task dete. mein khushi khushi kar leti. Par yeh kis bacho ke treasure hunt par bhej rahe hai? R: Phasne ki kya baat hai? dream team ke members hai hum. Sir ne bheja hai toh soch samajh ke bheja hoga naa? Haan yeh alag baat hai ki tum jesi farzi engineer ka yaha koi kaam nahi. Tumhe jaakar hotel mein hum sabke liye sabzi kaatkar khaana pakaana chahiye.(cackles mischieviously)
S: You...MCP kahika!
J: Arre sanyukta ! Randhir bhai! Bas bhi karo. Aaa koi time che jhagadne vaaste?
P: Jiggy sahi keh raha hai. guys yeh clue suno.
''Hariyaali hai har taraf yaha,
Sanaata hota bhi vaha,
Dont waste time,
Use your brains and find the khet(field).
Cross the khet and the river,
To reach the massive green cover!''
K: yeh kya likha hai yaha? What is this?
J: Khet toh hajaar hai yaaha. Iss particular khet ko kese dhoondenge?
S: guys shaant hojayo. Jitna muje iss clue se samajh aaya hai, voh yeh hai ki hume ek esa field dhoondna hai jiske aaspaas ek nadi behti ho aur uss nadi ko cross karte hi hum apne first destination par pohuch jaenge.
R: great. Atleast bhagwan ne itni tu samajh bhari iss farzi ke dimaag mein.
S: Just shutup randhir.
P: Sanyukta chaliye aap aur mein iss disha mein iss khet ki enquiry karte hai. Kaustaki Jiggy, tum randhir ke saath uss taraf jao.
R:(self thought)
~What? Mein iss looser ke bharose meri sanyukta ko chodunga? Never! Wait a min... meri sanyukta? Meri? yuckk. Yeh ladki ne sahi mein paagal kar diya hai mujhe!~
R: Hey Parth. Ruko. Jiggy aur kaustaki mein akal hai. They will manage themselves. But tum dono gadho ko ek saath choda toh pata nahi kis musibat pe land karoge. Kya pata kho bhi jao!😛
Before Sanyukta could reply to this with an equally nasty comment, they all heard a familiar voice.
Yoyo: Oh Randhir paaji! Mein aagaya.
S: Shit. yeh yaahaan kese aagaya!
Yoyo: Mujhe chodkar hi sab yaha aagaye? maana ki dream team ka hissa nahi hu mein, par app sab pehredar bhi toh hu! Toh dekho. Aagaya yeh handsome bodygaurd aap sab ki pehredaari karne! Kaustaki ji. jab mein aap ke saath hu toh lost hone ka toh koi chance hi nahi!
J: eh. She is my girlfriend. Mein hu uss ke liye.
R: Yoyo. Tu jiggy aur kaustaki ke saath jaa.
they all departed. sanyukta and parth kept talking and smiling while randhir tried to ignore them and focus on enquiring about the field.
----------------A little while later-------------------
P: Guys. pata milgaya. Chalo chale.
But just as everyone was about to leave, Sanyukta tripped over a stone. She shut her eyes closed tightly and waited to feel the ground and get hurt. But instead she felt a strong pair of arms grab her. But wait. This was not the same pair of arms that usually saves her. It was not the same warm breath she usually felt. This was not Randhir... and she could tell before opening her eyes. She slowly opened her eyes and saw herself in the arms of Parth. She tried to stand up and thanked him.
S:(self thought)
~iss baar randhir ne nahi bachaaya mujhe. parth ne bachaya mujhe.~
~Kyun kya tum kuch aur chahti thi?~
~ Nahi. Acha hua Parth ne mujhe bachay. Voh kitna acha hai. Uss sadu ki baahon mein kaun girna chahega jab Parth hai.~
~Oh really? Kya tum sahi mein randhir ki baahon mein nahi girna chahti thi?~
~haan~
~really? Kya parth ke arms mein vahi strong yet soft feeling hai? Kya parth ki warm saahse(breaths) tumhaare heart rate ko double karti hai? kya parth ki baahon mein girne se tumhaare pet(stomach) mein butterflies udne lagte hai? Nahi naa?~
~ Oh god. Sanyukta. Lagta hai teri neend kal raat ko poori nahi hui. Abhi bhi sapne dekh rahi hai.~
Suddenly Sanyukta was pulled back to reality by Parth's voice.
P:Sanyukta..Sanyukta.. kya tum thik ho?
Sanyu suddenly realised the pain her foot was causing because she was standing.
S:aah! lagta hai trip karte samay mera ghutna twist hogaya.
P:Shit. laayo mein dekhta hu.
Randhir who was all this time controlling his rage of jealousy and quietly watching the entire scene play out in front of him, suddenly shouted.
R: hey you. Stay away. Ek loosing team ke captain ki mada ki zaroorat nahi hai Sanyukta ko. laayo mein dekhta hu.
P:Randhir mujhe pata hai ki inke ghutne ka dard kese door kiya jaa sakta hai.
R: Mujhe bhi pata hai.
The both of them stood fighting while Sanyukta sighed and sat down on a stone. As the two of them continued fighting over who should heal sanyukta's wound, Kaustaki silently crept up to Sanyukta and twisted her foot.
S: AAAh!! yeh kya karahi ho kaustaki.
K: Sanyukta ab zara khadi hokar dekho. Dard horaha hai?
Sanyukta tried to stand up and miraculously her ankle's pain had gone. But not entirely. She was still having difficulty in walking.
R: Lagta hai ab iss farzi ko utha kar leke jaana padega.
But before randhir could lift sanyukta up, Parth swiftly lifted her up and told the others to resume their journey.
R:(self thought)
~What the... How dare he. mere aur meri farzi ke beech mein aane vaala yeh hota kaun hai? Pehle toh dream team ki competition haar kar bhi naak uthakar chala aaya humaare college. Fir sanyukta se itni gehri dosti kar li ki ab voh mujhse fight bhi nahi karti. Fir mujhse usse bachane ka haq cheen liya. Aur ab usse carry karne ka haq bhi?~
~Listen to yourself Randhir. haq? kaunse haq ki baat karaha hai? Aur tujhe unn dono se jalan kyun ho rahi hai~
~jalan nahi ho rahi. Its just that sanyukta ese hi kisi ki baahon mein kese gir sakti hai? Ese hi kisi ko bhi usse carry karke lejaane ko allow kese kar sakti hai?~
~kisiko bhi? This is not anyone. This is Parth. her new best friend.😡~
Randhir suddenly snapped back to reality as he heard everyone calling his name. He looked at Sanyukta who was looking back at him. She knew what he was thinking..she was thinking the same. They had a long eyelock. They kept staring into each others eyes. Then sanyu finally turned her head away from him as Parth was asking something to her.
S:(self thought)
~Parth? parth? Parth kyun? randhir ne kyun nahi bachaya mujhe? Kyun nahi uthaaya mujhe?~
~Kyun nahi? Kyun nahi savaal nahi hai. kyun hai savaal? Kyun tum chahti ho ki tumhe Randhir hi bachaye?~
~esa kuch nahi hai. Parth hi thik hai. Atleast voh mere liye concerned toh rehta hai.~
~Concern toh randhir bhi dikhaata hai. Ab uski galti thodi naa hai ki aaj usse mauka hi nahi milraha? Varna vahi toh tumhe humesha girne se bachaata hai, Gundo se ladta hai.~
~Shutup sanyu. Shutup. Dimaag kharaab hogaya hai tera. paagal hogayi hai. get this randhir out of your mind and concentrate on Randhi...No i mean..Vardhaan sir's task instead.~
But no matter how hard they tried, sanyukta and Randhir could not remove each other from their mind.
Something was changing.
Not only had Vardhaan sir planned something interesting but even fate had something special in store for our belove Sandhir. They were aware of the changes in their feelins toward each other, but this was only the beginning.
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Done! Im so sorry guys. I had written a better part 2 but the net went off and my work was not saved. So forgive me if this one is not my best. Hope you all like it.
Love,
Sakshi aka Tanya
Edited by LovetheVlovers - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
this is just simply superb . sanyukta ko randhir ki jalne ke mehek aa rahi hai😆😆
part 2 is awesome.update soon the next part waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Haye...aag lag gayi...lol

Randhir u r gone...

Just awesome update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

Haye...aag lag gayi...lol

Randhir u r gone...

Just awesome update

Lol. Thank you. Hope u got satisfied wd randhir's jealousy now?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Dude! Your idea is AWESOME :D
Waiting for you to continue!
Update soon :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
hey!!!
awesome update!!!😃
randhir totally jealous LOL😆😆
sanyukta and randhir minds aww so sad of them 😉😆
well eagerly waiting ffor further as it is goin to be interesting..very interesting...😛
entry of yoyo is also nice !!!
thanks for the scrap !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Wow.. Amazing update dear...
Loved d way u portrayed sandhir's feeling.. 😃
Dey both r so damn confused.. 😕
I'm happy ki Humare yo yo paaji aa Gaye.. 😃
Aur tht clue was amazingly written dear..
Ur such amazing writer Tanya... 😊
Can't wait for d next update..
Update ASAP...!!:):)
Edited by shalini_shakti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Aur Haa.. Mujhe pm kyun nahi bheja... 😭
Edited by shalini_shakti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
like it yar but pls pm me na when u return pls...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Aha!!! So, vardhan hasnt left the mentorship...nice nice!! N adventure camp!! Interesting, very interesting!! Plz update soon n pm me wen u do...would love to read more😊

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