Ek He Khwahish...SK...Pt-82(Pg:123)Imp Note Pg:124 - Page 7

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wow please contin 👏 👏 ue it was great
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tooooooooooo damn gooddddddddddd..........wonderful..very very intresting.. 👏
continue soon.. 😃
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thanx 2 all of u 4 likng the part...iqbalneha1,rachandeep,kash,honii,golu n surya..thank u all... 😊
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Part-9:
Its v late in the night now...we see nandas house frm outside..all the lights r off..n evryone iz sleepng soundly in their respective rooms..except one person..
n now lets see who tht person iz..we enter the room..where its v dark..only the lamp iz on...n we see a grl standng by the window..yah its kashish...
lets see whts she doing...
kashish iz standng by the window..n lookng @ the darkness of outside...shez thnkng abt sumthng..n tears r fallng frm her eyes.. 😭 😭
K(thnking):mein ne usey kuch zyada he suna diya...mujhe bhi na..kya tha phele dekh lete..magar pata nahee kyun mujhe itna ghussa ata hai..mama sahee khete hain..mein bhi bena kuch dekhe samjhe shuru hojate hoon..
par mein ne usey sorry bola tu tha..magar us ne mujhe maaf he nahee kiya..i dono..kya karoon..sorry phir se tu bolna he hoga..i know mere he ghalti thi..n kya howa ..woh tu sirf tang kar raha tha..aur mein ne tu..
aisa karti hoon..kal kripa ko sab bata dete hoon..phir woh jo kahe...han yeh sahe rahega.. 😊
n then she move 2wards the bed..
now its nxt morning n all @ home r busy..as it the wedding day...kashsih wakes up n founds tht kripa iz nt in the room..she gts up soon..n iz in search of kripa..so 2 gt any solution frm her..
she comes downstairs..bt kripa iz nt there...she iz abt 2 go..when charu tells her 2 do sum work..she doesn't wana do..bt she cant help..she goes n completes the work..n after tht strt her search 4 kripa...bt shez nowhere n @ last she comes 2 her room tired..
K(2 herself):yeh krips bhi na pata nahee kahan hai..ab kya karoon..kis se poochoon..kaise bhi kuch tu karna he hai.. 😕
jus then we hear a voice..
Kr:kya howa..kya karn ahai..humein bhi tu pata chale..?
K:tu..kahan thi..mein kabse tujhe dhoond rahee hoon..pata hai.. 😡
Kr:arey wah kya baat hai..log humein dhoond rahe the..app ko kabse humare yaad satane lage.. 😆
K:shut up krips.stop jokng..m serious..
Kr:acha chal bata..kya baat hai..
K:woh actually na..ik prob hai..n i dono wht 2 do..tu hi kuch bata ab..
Kr:acha..phele bolo tu baat kya hai..
n then kashish tells her all wht happened yesterday..
kr:hmm..tu na kashish..sab tere ghalti hai..mein ne tujhe kaha tha..woh aisa larka nahee hai..aur tu.. 😡
K:ab kya karoon..jo hona tha..woh tu hogaya na..ab kya karein..
Kr:look aj jab hum uske ghar jayenge..tu to us sey sorry bol dena..
K:woh tu hai..par agar..kal ki tarah..us ne maaf na kiya tu.. 😒
Kr:karde ga..kal tu ghusa buhat tha na..aj theek hogaya hoga..tu baat kar lena..
K:ok sahee hai..par plz...tu merey sath rehna..mujhe us ke ghuse se buhat darr lagta hai..
Kr:arey wah ghalti tum karu..aur ghussa suney ke liye sath mein aoon..na baba na..
K:plz..tu meri achi dost hai na..
Kr:achi dost apni jagah..aur yeh mamla apni jagah..
K:sahe hai..dekh le tere dosti.. 😒
Kr:now thts black mailing mam..
K:mein khud karlonge..ab koi aisa bhi khunkhwar nahee hai..ke mein darr jaoon us se..
Kr:hmm..shok sai..i don mind..
n then its time 4 all of them 2 head 4 anjalis home..there iz a lot of hustle bustle in the house..evryone is doing last minute prepration..
we see dida standing ..
D:arey bhai sab kidhr ho..chalo dair ho jayege..muhrat nikal jayega..yeh kavya kidhar hai...rasam bhi karne hai..
b:arey woh araha hai..mein abhi use ko bulane gaya tha..lekin yeh baki sab log kahan hain..bachiyan..nitya..arey nitya putar..kithe hai tu..
n we see nitya comng with thals in her hand hav sumthng in it 4 rasam(guys i dono..sum sehra rasam iz done so thngs 4 tht..)
N:bauji..mein bas yeh chezein laney gaye thi..
d:oh..bara acha kiya putar..tu sab le aye..mein charu ko ise liye dhoond rahe thi ke usey kahoon ke saman le aye..waise yeh larkyaan sab hain kahan..
jus then we see kavya comng down frm stairs..so see whts dulhe raja wearng...



d:nazar na lage merey bache ko..aj tu chand ka tukra lag raha hai..
b:lag kya hota hai...bilkul chand ka tukra he tu hai humara putar..
Ka:dida..bauji..app bhi na..
n then takes ashirwaad frm three of them..
we see the grls then comng downstairs..n now look h they r lookng..
charu:



kashish:



kripa:



n then when evryone reached downstairs..they did all the traditional thngy...n then kavya set on horse..yah no car..he was 2 go on a horse..n then the song started..
n all danced on it..


Chhote Chhote Bhaiyon Ke Bade Bhaiya,
Aaj Banenge Kise Ke Saiyan,
Dhol Nagade Baje Shehnaiyan,
Jhoom Ke Aai Mangal Ghadiyan...

Bhabhi Ke Sung Holi Mein,
Rang Gulaal Udayenge,
Aayegi Jab Jab Diwali,
Milkar Deep Jalayenge,
Chunri Ki Kar Degi Chhaiyan,
Aayegi Banke Purwaiyan,
Chhote Chhote Bhaiyon Ke Bade Bhaiya,
Aaj Banenge Kise Ke Saiyan...

Jhilmil Ho Gayi Hain Ankhiyan,
Yaad Aayi Bachpan Ki Ghadiyan,
Naye Safar Mein Lag Jayegi,
Pyar Ki Inko Hathkadiyan,
Jachte Hain Dekho Kaise Bade Bhaiya,
Ramji Bihane Chale Sita Maiya,

Chhote Chhote Bhaiyon Ke Bade Bhaiya,
Aaj Banenge Kise Ke Saiyan...


n then they all reached anjalis house n then all the welcoming cermony was done by veena..(tht arti n all..i dono much abt tht)
then kavya was sitting on the mandap..n his eyes were continosly in search of anjali...when sumone pressed his shoulder ..lets see whoz it..oh..its aki ji..whts he wearng....



A:itni bhi kya jaldi hai kavya bhaya...abh tu sari zindagi ap ne unhein dekhna hai..tuhra sa sabr kar lein.. 😉
Ka:nahi woh tu main.. 😳
A:nahi woh mein kya..ab hum se kya sharmana.. 😉
Ka:tum bhi na akshat.. 😳 buhat bolte ho..
A:han bhaye..ab mein zyada bolne wala lagoon ga he..kyoun..
Ka:lagta hai..tumhara mujh se kuch sune ka plan hai..
A:arey nahee nahe..mein tu aise he..app karye wait...mein chala..
n kavya was abt 2 respond when he sees anjali comng downstairs wid sujal...n he jus gts lost in her beauty..
herez now anjali the bride...



shez holding sujals hand n iz comng 2wards the mandap..shez lookng v nervous n sits near kavya..
both smiling n glancing @ each other..n then pandit starts the cermony..
frst they hav 2 exchange the malas..so they stand...n sujal n aki r standng near anjali..n charu krips n kash r @ kavyas bck..
lets see how r handsom hero iz lookng..ofcourse sujal yaar..



n then after viewing sujal...the mala cermony strts n there iz kinda fight anjali mala phenae ki koshish karte hai..bt fails as kavya iz movng bck n foward..she looks helplessly @ both her bros..n
then sujal gts a idea n says sumthng in anjalis ear..she smiles...tht victory smile..
n then 2 kavya astonishment anjali usey ankh marte hai..n kavya iz jus in shock..n doesn't understnd why she did it..n stops @ the place..n @ tht time sujal n aki help anjali 2 pt mala..n she did it..
kavya @ last understands the trick(yaar bare budhu nikle..hehe)..n smiles bck..
n then he tries 2 pt..bt now our anjali ji is nt ready n iz moving back n foward...now kavya tries 2 do the same trick wid her..bt shez intelligent yaar..nt lik u...
n he loses the chance..n @ last when veena says tht muhrat time will be gone..the mala cermony ended...
n they both now sat down 4 the other thngs 2 gt place...
n the musik in the background iz played..


Tere maathe ki bindiya chamakti rahe(we see anjali's bindya)
Tere haathon ki mehndi mahekti rahe(mehndi on her hand is shown)
Tere jode ki raunak salaamat rahe(whole dress is shown)
Teri choodi hamesha khanakti rahe(the red chooryan shez wearng r shown)

Mubaarak mubaarak mubaarak mubaarak

Mubaarak ho tumko yeh shaadi tumhaari
Sada khush raho tum dua hai hamaari
Tumhaare kadam choome yeh duniya saari
Sada khush raho tum dua hai hamaari

Mubaarak ho tumko yeh shaadi tumhaari
Sada khush raho tum dua hai hamaari
Tumhaare liye hai bahaaron ke mausam
Na aaye kabhi zindagi mein koi gham
Hamaara hai kya yaar hum hai deewane
Hamaari tadap to koi bhi na jaane
Mile na tumhe ishq mein beqaraari
Sada khush raho tum dua hai hamaari

Mubaarak ho tumko yeh shaadi tumhaari
Sada khush raho tum dua hai hamaari
Aa aa aa aa, aa aa aa, aa aa aa aa
Ke janmon ke rishte nahin tode jaate(both r shown..holding hands..)
Safar mein nahin hamsafar chhode jaate
Na rasm-o-riwaajon ko tum bhool jaana
Jo li hai kasam to isse tum nibhaana(phiras r shown)
Ke humne to tanha umar hai guzaari
Sada khush raho yeh dua hai hamaari
Tumhaare kadam choome yeh duniya saari
Sada khush raho tum dua hai hamaari

Mubaarak ho tumko yeh shaadi tumhaari
Sada khush raho tum dua hai hamaari
Jaa maine bhi pyaar kiya hai
Haan maine bhi pyaar kiya hai


n @ last the pandit ends the mantar..wid end of last phera..n the both gt married..
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ok ppl..tht was up 4 now...hop u liked it..do comments..
nxt part:will kashish say sorry 2 sujal..wht will sujal do...4 knowng all tht keep readng..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i send this now post next part Plz YaaR
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posted..jus check..n hop u lik it... 😊
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hav fun....😊

Edited by **-**Guriya**-* - 19 years ago
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thnx kash,iqbalneha 1 n golu 4 liking the part..nxt part..m postng soon.. 😊
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Part 10:
ok now as kavya n anjali gt married...we see them seated on chairs n r lookng happily @ each other..
suddenly we see akshat came in b/w the hall..now lets see wht hez up2..


Ruk Ja O Dil Deewane(pointing 2wards charu)
Poochhoon To Main Zara
Ladki Hai Ya Hai Jaadu
Khushboo Hai Ya Nasha
Ruk Ja O Dil Deewane
Poochhoon To Main Zara
Ladki Hai Ya Hai Jaadu
Khushboo Hai Ya Nasha
Paas Vo Aaye To
Chhoo Ke Main Dekhoon Zara

Ruk Ja O Dil Deewane
Poochhoon To Main Zara

Dekhe Vo Idhar Hanske Bekhabar(charu..in shock..lokng @ aki)
Thaamke Dil Hum Khade Hain
Gumsum Si Nazar Uski Hai Magar
Honthon Pe Shikve Bade Hain
Baat Ban Jaaye To
Main Baat Chhedoon Zara

Ruk Ja O Dil Deewane
Poochhoon To Main Zara
Ladki Hai Ya Hai Jaadu
Khushboo Hai Ya Nasha (goes 2wards kavya n anjali n brngs them in b/w)

Sharma Vo Gayi Ghabra Vo Gayi (kavya says lookng @ anjali..)
Maine Jo Usko Pukaara
Ye Dil Le Liya Usne Kar Diya
Aankhon Hi Aankhon Mein Ishaara
Jaan Bhi Jaaye To
Gam Na Karoon Main Zara (anjali shyng..@ wht kavya said)

Ruk Ja O Dil Deewane
Poochhoon To Main Zara
Ladki Hai Ya Hai Jaadu
Khushboo Hai Ya Nasha (even now aki calls krips n kashish 2 dance)


Mehfil Mein Haseen Tu Hi To Nahin(lookng @ krips n kash..n pointing 2 charu)
Roothe Tu Kis Liye Akeli
Jis Pe Yoon Fida Ye Dil Ho Gaya
Vo To Hai Teri Ek Saheli (charu gts shock)
Maan Vo Jaaye To
Baahon Mein Le Loon Zara

Ruk Ja O Dil Deewane
Poochhoon To Main Zara
Ladki Hai Ya Hai Jaadu
Khushboo Hai Ya Nasha
Paas Vo Aaye To
Chhoo Ke Main Dekhoon Zara (evryone iz enjoyng dancng on the number)


n all of them r dancing n havng fun..bt...sujal iz nt there..we see sujal standng by side..kashish..saw him standng n goes 2 him 4 sayng sorry..she thnks it might be good chance as he iz alone now..
sujal sees kashish comng 2wards him..n he gts angry thnkng wht she did yesterday.. 😡 n iz abt 2 leave..when kashish comes n block his way.
K:i m sorry sujal..jo mein ne kal kia...i no it was all my fault bt plz..don gt angry @ me lik tht n 4give me..
S:4give u..u wht i thought abt u..n u... 😡
K:plz sujal...i really mean..tht i was wrong..ab plz chordo na yeh gussa n..m sorry na..comon..lets be frnds.. 😊
S:frnds ..n we both..neva tht will neva happen.. 😡
K:(abt 2 cry)sujal..ab mein ne itni bari bhi koi ghalti nahee ke..ke tum aisa karoo..aur ab jab ke mein bar bar sorry bol rahein hoon tu.. 😭
S:oh..tu tum yeh kehna chate ho..ke sorry bol ke aur frndship ka haath barha ke tum mujhpe ahsan kar rahee ho tu let me tell u Ms.Kashish basu...i don need u sorries n ur frndship...m good widout it.. 😡
n sayng this he leaves the place...n kashish iz shock..n has tears in her eyes.. 😭
K(thinking):tum mujhe ghalat samjh rahe ho sujal...i really wana apoligize..par tum..kyoun mujhe nahee samjh rahe..i dono..bt even after wht happened yesterday...i m feeling so guilty..n wana say u sorry anyhow..bt u..tum kyoun aisa kar rahe ho mere saath....mein tumhein aisey naraz..mujhe nahee pata par tumhare yeh narazge mujhe khaye ja rahe hai...oh God mein kya karoon..kaise manoon isey... 😭
jus then kripa comes n pats @ kashish's shoulder.
Kr:kya howa..tu aisey..aur yeh kya..tu rooye thi..
K:nahee woh bas...
Kr:waise aj tu anjali bhabi ke vidae hai..unhe roona tha..aur tu roo rahee hai..koi prob hai kashish bol..
K:nahee krips bas vo..
Kr:i thnk sumtng iz wrong chal bahir chalte hain..n mujhe tu aram se bata...yahan so much noise..aram se baat nahee ho payge..
kashish nods head in agreement n both leave..
Kr:ok..ab bata kia huwa..?
n then kashish all tht happen b/w sujal n her..
Kr:hmm..yaar waqai..tu sahee kehte thi..bara he kharoos nikla..samjhta kia hai..kitne sorry bole tu ne..aur janab hain ke akar dekhyae ja rahein hain..hota kaun hai woh..ab koi itni bari bhi ghalti nahee ke thi tum ne ke..u wait,..now i will talk 2 him had hogaye merey frnd ko kuch bhi bole ja raha hai..ab mein ise batoon gi..n no need of sayng him sorry again.ab mein isey baat karoongi..tu chup rehna.. 😡
jus then kashish says cuttng kripa..
K:nahee kripa..tu usey kuch nahee kehna..
Kr:arey wah kyoun na kahoon.us ne..
K:nahee krips..woh aisa nahee hai..i know hez sweet..n phir jo mein ne kiya woh..sahee hai i know..
Kr:tumhein bara pata hai..woh kaisa hai..aur sweet..aur woh..abhi kal tak tu he was no1 flirter kharoos aur ab..kash..tu kya bol rahe hai..
K:i dono krips yaar..myself..bt mujhe nahee pata..tu usey bas kuch nahee sunaye gi,.kuch aur sooch na ke woh mujhe bas maaf karde...i m feelng guilty..aur mujhse aur nahee saa jata us ka gussa..
Kr:sumthng iz really wrong wid u i thnk...
cuts her..
K:don thnk anythng..n jus suggest me a way
Kr:ok..soochte hain..
n jus then akshat comes 2wards them..telng them tht charu iz searchng 4 both of them..
Kr:ok..jus tell her we r comng...
n when akshat leaves..kripa shouts..
K:kya howa tu chilaye kyoun..koi sanp(snake)..tu anhee yahan.. 😕
Kr:i gt an idea lol...
K:really..jaldi bata...
n then she tells her the idea..n both of them enter the house..
inside evryone is busy..in havng fun..n all r enjoyng 2 the fullest..the wedded couple r greetng the guest..n welcomng them..
kash n krips enter..n r lookng 4 charu..they see shez standng wid aki..n lik always..both r havng fight on sumthng(lolz kab sudhrenge dono)
they head 2wards them..
Kr:haan charu tu ne bolaya..
C:aur kya kidhar reh gaye thi tum dono..mein kabse dhoond rahe hoon..tum nahee thein tu is bandar ke saath time spent karan para mujhe..
A:acha mein tumhein bandar dekhta hoon..aur tum khud kya ho..churail.. 😡
C:akshat tum..h dare u? 😡
A:oh..m so sorry..ghlat bol gaya..churail tu tum make up ke saath dekhte ho..waise tu dayan ho dyan.. 😃
C:u... 😡
n iz abt 2 kill aki..when krips interrupts in b/w
Kr:tum dono..chup ik dum..kab sudhrogo..jab dekho..bachoo ke trah larte reht ho..comon guys..grow up.. 😡
C:woh mein nahee yeh akshat.. 😕
Kr:bas don need any explaination..aur i wana talk 2 u both..its v imp..
C&A:haan bolo..kya baat hai..
krips then tell both wht happened b/w kash n sujal..all frm strt...n tells them abt her idea..n convince them 2 help her in it..
A:na baba na..i wont come in it wid u grls..tum teno sujal ke gusse ko jante nahe ho.when he iz good...sweet..he iz the best..but when hez angry @ somone..its better nt 2 touch him only...he can be worst..
K:plz..akshat..we need ur help.widout ur help..we cant..do anythng...plz..
A:no ways..sujal ko pata laga mein ne aisa kiya..he will nt leave me..
K:plz..kar dona help..charu..ise keh na plz.. 😭
Charu when sees kash iz abt 2 cry..
C:akshat plz..kardo na help uske..konsa itna bara kaam hai.
A:baat aur tumhare sunoo..us saab ke baad jo tum mere saath karte ho..no neva..
C:m sorry akshat..i wont say anythng 2 u again..bt plz..is ke help kardoo..plz..
kashish looks @ charu..wid expression of thanx..
A:ok f9..mein saath donga tum logoon ga..magar ik shart par...
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ok guyz this part ends here..wana know abt wht is the condition aki has..n whts krips idea..then..chk next part..
nxt part:sujal sittng in her room..n there r tears in his eyes...
now keep guessing why hez cryng..
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nice part. Par aisa kyun end kar diya. Pls jaldi continue karna post the next part soon.

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