Ek He Khwahish...SK...Pt-82(Pg:123)Imp Note Pg:124

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Rachandeep

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Posted: 19 years ago

#81

very goood part.....god veena and dadi gettin on my nerves...why hate sujal so much 😭 hehee angad is funnny 😆 😆 😆

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golu_1677

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Posted: 19 years ago

#82

wonderful part. But veena and dadi behave in this manner with sujal. Will everything ever b normal with sujal or not

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#83

wonderful..very nice... 👏
continue soon.. 😃

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Imaan-Ki-Duaa

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Posted: 19 years ago

#84

thanx rachandeep,golu n surya 4 liking the part...i will post the nxt part a bit lit as m busy...so sorry..bt wait 4 sumtime...n thnx 4 reading... 😊 ...n evrythng related 2 sujal will soon be told..so till then keep readng... 😊

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golu_1677

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Posted: 19 years ago

#85

will b eagerly waiting for the next part but dont take to much time to post the next part

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Hana

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Posted: 19 years ago

#86

nice part great cont...sooon 👏 👏 👏

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Imaan-Ki-Duaa

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Posted: 19 years ago

#87

Part 13:
It the same day..we see nandas house frm outside..n then inside a room iz shown..thts charus room..lets chk it out..howz her room..
The room iz decorated very beautifully...with a wall paint of pink..n huge bed in centre..with white n pink bedsheet on it..all room iz filled with stuff toys(kya karein abhi tak bachi hai..aur upar se ladli)
then focus goes 2 charu whoz sitting on the dressing chair n filing her nails(beauty concious) ..shez thnkng abt sumone..ok lets peek into her mind n see whts she thnkng..
C(thnking):yeh kashish bhi an..masla iska tha..aur leke shamat mere lagwade..ab mein aj dinner karongi..aur woh bhi us akshat ke sath.. 😡 uff..is se acha hota mein marr jate..magar yeh akshat..usey kon tolerate karega..aur uske woh be sar pair ke batein.. 😡
hey bhagwan mein kya karoon..
sayng this she sighs heavily..n kripa enterng the room..heard tht..
Kr:kya huwa charu tujhe...koi prob..?
C:prob aur mujhe..nahe kia hone hai..tum log kya kam ho..mujhe khush rakhne ke liye..aur tum logoon ke hote hui muhe kia problem hogi.. 😡 (says all in an angry tone)...
kr(bit scared):kia huwa...tu itni tappi hui kyoun hai..hamse koi ghalti..
C:ghalti...ghalti nahee gunah..kaho..mein us akshat ke saath..kripa..tu aur kashish jante bhi ho ke h much i hate him..aur uske mere bilkul nahee bante..aur dinner ke baat par razi hogaye.. 😡
Kr:cool down na charu..its ok yaar..kashish ki khatir na..tu jante hai..aur koi rasta nahe tha..aur ab tu backout nahee karsakte ...kyounke u know akshat..woh kuch bhi kare ga...aur agar us ne sujal ko 🤢 ..tu mamla..theek hone ke bajaye..aur he bigar jayega..
C:hmm..woh tu hai..
Kr:tu plz..yaar chale ja..i know woh itna bura bhi nahee hai..n u will enjoy..
C:enjoy my foot aur woh bhi us bandar ke saath... 😡
jus then sound of horn iz heard..n its look likes the person has pt his hand on the horn n 4gt to take away..n kripa n charu r fultoo ghussa..coz they know its none other than aki..
Kr:jaldi ja charu..warna..isne tu lagta hai aj humein behra karney ke kasam kha rakhe hai..
C:jarahee hoon.. 😡
n sayng this she leaves...n kripa gts sumwht relief..she iz standng by the window in charu's room n enjoyng the weather..jus then the thought of angad..n the way he behaved in the cafe..wid her..came into her mind..n she strted laughng on angads..behaviour..as she was thnking..jus then her cell phone rang..n guess who it was..yah its none other than angad..
Kr:hello..kon bol raha hai..?
ang:ji..mein app ka khadim..app ka ghulam..
kr:ji..wht..mein kise khdam.. 😕 yah jo koi bhi ghulam hai ko nahee jnte...so wrong number..
n shez abt 2 cut the phone..when the voice speaks again..
ang:hey kripa..yaar its me angad...
Kr:angad tum..so wht was tht.khadim ghulam stuff u were sayng..
ang:yaar..i ws jus sayng lik tht..n u...
Kr:tu seedha ..sedha bolna tha.i don gt these tere mere talks ok..
ang:ok janab...
Kr:acha..choro..kaho kis liye phone kiya..
ang:aise he..
Kr:aise he matlab...?
ang:come on kripa....cant i call u lik tht..after all m ur frnd..rite..? 😳 (zyada free ho raha hai..)
Kr:frnd..when did tht happen..angad..i thnk u 4gt bt 2day we met 4 the frst time..n h come we becme frnds soon.. 😕
ang:look its simple..kashish made me her frnd..n ur kashish's frnd..so in a way ur my frnd 2 na.. 😃
Kr:u r impossible angad..i dono..h u gt into such weird thngs..
ang:oh..thnku..kripa..4 appreciting my talent..m honoured... 😃
kr:when did i appreciated u..? 😕
ang:look jus now u did..u hav such bad memory..i neva thought..u 4gt...entire thng..
kr:angad.. 😡
ang:ok ..sorry m jus kidding..come on kripa..why gtg so angry @ such small thng...
kr:look..angad..m nt free @ the moment 2 hear ur faltoo talks..if ur then try somone elses number nt mine..n yah..if u wana talk bt sumthng imp..then only call me.. 😡
ang:bt krip..listen..
she didn't wana tlk 2 him..n cut the phone..angad tried again..she wasn't pickng..n gt pissed off...@ him..n switched off the mob..angad..tried again bt mob was off..
ang(himself):bare theri cheez hi..par..hum bhi koi kam nahee..angad..jab..kise ke piche parjye..tu usey itne asani se nahee chorta..wait n watch kripa..
meanwhile lets see..whts happening wid aki n charu..the wholeway 2 the hotel was spent quitely..both of them didn't utter a single word..n they reached the hotel now..charu was abt 2 gt down.when aki came..n opened the door 4 her..she was stunned....
she gt even more shock..when he accustomed her 2wrd the hotel..n in the hall..2 the table..
there was no one in the hall @ the moment...whole hall was decorated wid romantic touch...wid candles...n..roses on evry table..
charu was suprised..2 see evrythng around her..n evn gt more suprize..2 see no one was there..jus then she heard..a slow..romantic music..tune played by the muscian..
aki told him 2 be seated...she was abt 2 ask him whts all this..when he left her there all alone.....
now she was gtg worried..n was thnkng might its sum trick of aki..n he jus left her here...n now she has 2 pay the bills accordng 2 the bet..n she was..gtg nervous..s she didn't hav as much money..as thiz whole would be up2..
she was gtg angry @ aki..n was cursng him...n was helpless..as wht 2 do...jus then the lights went off..
she gt more scared...n even aki wasnt there....in the dim lights of candles...we saw.. person approachng her..she gt more n more scared..n was abt 2 screm..when sumone..pt his fingers..on his lips..n took..her 2wards the dance floor...she was so nervous tht she wasn't lookng 2wards the persons face..
jus then the person touched charus chin with his hand n made her look 2wrd him..she gt the shock of his life seeng aki..n was abt 2..kill..her..4 wht he did..bt b4 tht...he left his hand..bend down on knees..n holdng a red box in his hand said..
Ak:pata nahee charu..mein kab tumse pyar karne laga....maloom nahee kabhi..mere dil mein yeh ehsas jaga..haan..par itna zroor maloom hai..ke ab..i cant keep this secret any more 2 myself..will u be mine charu.. 😳
charu was shocked by aki's word..n gt tears in her eyes..she neva thought..he would say such thng 2 her..
Ak(again):plz..charu..mujhe maloom hai..mein tumhare saath aj tak buhat bura kiya..par plz..uske wajah se don say no 2 me..or i would die..plz..
C(@last spoke): akshat..yeh sab..par woh shart..mujhe kuch..kahin tum mazak.. 😕
Ak:nahee charu..m serious..woh sab tu..i knew u wont come wid me out @ if i would ask u..so isliye mein ne..yeh sab..agar..tumhein bura laga tu even m sorry...
C:tum ne itna sab mere liye... 😳
Ak:haan charu..plz..ab na mat bolna.. 😭
C:aur agar boloon tu... 😉
Ak(wid sad face):tu..mere kismat.. 😔
C(laughing):oh..akshat...zara apna chera tu dekho...itne mein he har man le.. 😆
Ak:har kahan mani hi...shayad kabhi na kabhi...appko is nacheez pe reham ajayee..
C:yeh tum nacheez kabse hogaye..mujhe tu tumhara bandar hona confirm tha..waise yeh nacheez konsa janwar hai.. 😉
Ak:haan..haan..ura lo mazak..tumhein tu mazza araha hai...yahan jaan tu meri nikle ja rahe hai.. 😡
jus then charu pts her hand on his lips..
C:phir kabhi jaan janey ke batein na karna..warna.. 😳
Ak:warna kya charu...
charu relizes wht she said..n jus runs away frm the dance floor 2 the table...n aki goes smiling 2wards the table..coz now he knows evrythng will be f9...he gt his luv..n wht else one needs..when one gts the person he loves..
its now the nxt day...all three of the grls @ nandas r ready..4 the plan...n r waitng 4 aki...2 come...as yt aki n charu hav nt told anyone abt last nite..
we now see whts angad doing...its khanna mension...we jus peek into angads room..n one can jus frm a glance know..wht kind of person angd iz..by lookng @ the messy room..
we see him comng out of the washroom...now standng infront of mirror gtg ready...jus then his cell rings...
ang:hello..angad khanna here..
Ak:angad..mein akshat..
ang:han..akshat bol..kis lye phone kiya..
Ak:tujhe plan ke bare mein yaad dilane ke liye...kahein tu bhool tu nahee gaya..
ang:nahee yar mujhe yaad hai..i was jus abt 2...take the frst move..ab tu band kar tu mein kuch karoon..
Ak:ach ok..n bst of luck..
ang:yah thnx..i really need it now..
n then he cuts the phone..n dials sumones number..the bell iz ringing..no one pickig up the phone..
ang:come on..pick up the phone...
other side no response..angad tries agin thiz time..gt lucky..sumone picks up..a voice..
voice:hello..sujal garewal here..
ang:abay..sujal ke bache...kabse phone try kar raha hoon..kahan mara howa tha.. 😡
S:arey anagd tu..kab aya..woh mein actually office join kar liya na..tu thora busy tha..
ang:busy..wusy hone ko chor..aur mein kal..ka aya howa hoon..aur tu..kaise ghatya dost hai..dost ke khabar he nahee le...tujhe tu mein.. 😡
S:arey nahee angad woh baat darasal.. 😕
ang:bat wat kuch nahee..tu 5 min mein merey gahr par araha hai..n thts it..
S:par anagd office.. 😕
ang:tujhe mein azez hoon ke office...
S:acha baba araha hoon..tujse bhala..koi jeet paya hai..
ang:ur rite..jaldi a..m waiting..
S:ok boss..
n then sujal leaves the office..wid cute smile on his face..n reaches khannas mension...
both angad n they meet..n exchange frndly hug...now they r sittin on sofas..
S:tu..ab bol..kisa tha..tera trip..
ang:mind blowng..2 good..par tujhe miss kiya kafii..
S:arey wah..tuney ur mujhe miss kiya..i don believe..tu magan hoga..apni...un ayashyoun mein..mere yaad kahan..bol..
ang:nahee yar..ayashi kahan..u know...mom dad saath the tu...
S:yani..no fun.. 😆
ang:ab aisa bhi nahee... 😉
sujal laughs @ him...n says..
S:tu kabhi nahee sudhre ga.. 😃
ang:arey agar mein sudhar gaya..tu...is duniya ka kya hoga..
jus then we saw..few ppl..entrng khannas mension..yah u guess it rite..its the grls wid aki..now see wht these r up2..
Ak:hey angad..hum agaye...
sujal sees all of them n is shocked..sees kashish gts angry..n looks @ her wid anger in her eyes...
S:tum sab yahan..akshat tum..yahan angad ke ghar par? 😕
ang:woh in sab ko mein ne bulaya hai..
S:tumne..par kyoun..u don know them..yeh tu..
ang:i know kavya bhaya ke mehman hain...aur kal akshat mujhe mila..n he was wid them..showng them mumbai..n i gt 2 know them..so we decided....tht we will go 2dy together...out somwhere..
S:ok...i leave then..u ppl..go n enjoy..
ang:arey tum kidhr chale..even ur gng wid us..
S:no..main nahee...i hav office... 😕
ang:phir office..mein ne tujhe kya kaha..no office ..infront of me..mein ne keh diya tu ja raha hai..humare sath tu bas..
S:angad..tum bhi na..wht wil i do..i have seen ll places..tum in loogon ko dekhaoo..(lookng @ kashish..wid anger 😡 )
ang:no behas..chal gt up..we all ready so will go now...
n sujal has no way of escape..n he agrees 2 join them...
they all gt out 2 the parking lot...n r abt 2 gt seated..when angad shouts..
ang:arey mein apni jacket tu bed par he bhol gaya...plz..sujal tu upar se ja kar ladega..jab tak mein car check karleta hoon...ab we r gng on a long drive tu..
sujal andar jate jatee murta hai..
S:long drive...hum waise ja kahan rahein hain..
ang:kuch khas door nahe..yahein simla tak..
S:yeh simla..door kabse nahee raha..no ways..its v far..tum log jao..mein..
ang:tu apni bar bar band kar aur ja jakr jacket le kar aa..
sujal is in fultu ghussa..bt goes inside as he knows...angad will nt leave him..he has 2 go anyhow..
when sujal returns...he was shock 2 see both aki's n angad's car wasn't there..he thought..angd might hav thought so tht i don wana go..so he jus left..n he turned 2ward his car wid relief when gt a shock by seeing kashish standng near his car..
S:tum yahan..tum unke saath...i mean.. 😕
K:woh actually..mein pani pene gaye the aur jab wapis ayee tu woh log nahee the..phir i saw ur car..so is liye yahan..
S:so..tumhien lagta hai..ke i will take u...tu yeh tumhre ghlat fehmi hai..i won't m gng 2 my office...tumhein jo karna hai karoo.. 😡
K:plz..sujal..u cant do this 2 me..mein kise..ur yahan..mujhe tu kise raste k bhi.. 😭 (n strted cryng)
S(gts frustated):acha ab yeh ron band karoo..aur chaloo.. 😡
they both sit in car..n sujal speaks 2 himself..
S(himself):ajeeb musibat hai..yeh..angd bhi na..isey tu mein dekh loonga.. 😡
K:kuch kaha.. 😕
S:nahee kuch nahee..
jus when the car leaves khanna premises..we see both akis n angad's car..comng..
aki n angad..both talk..side by side..being in car..
ang:plan accomplished...wht u say..? 😃
ak:ur..2 good..ab dekhte hain..sujal kaise..maaf nahee karta.. 😉
n wid sayng this they all laugh..n move there respective cars 2wards the destintion...
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ok guyz...sorry 4 the delay..so this one iz a long part 4 u all...hop u liked it...n do comments..
nxt part:its raining....sujal...kashish..wht will happen....4 tht keep readng...

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Kia

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Posted: 19 years ago

#88

👏
gr8 part YaaR
now i can't wait any more plzzzzzzzzzz post next part plz
gr8 YaaR
its raining....sujal...kashish..wht will happen OMG plzzzzzzzzzzz post next part
i hope Sujal tell Kashish about him n all n they fall in Love n get marry. 😉
post next part

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#89

tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
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the part totally rocked..i loved it... 👏
please post the next part soon..me will be waiting for it eagerly... 😃