*TRIANGLES*--Pg 127---PART 32---THE END - Page 39

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sahr_8

Well den i better get started😆

Here is wat i have so far...One upon an ugly day dere was a ........ AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.....HELP HELP SOME1 PLZ HELP ME....MERI IZATH!!!!!AAAAHELPPPPPPPPPP

nxt scene u c a naked guy running down da hall of his apartment building (he ony has his underwear on) everyone is watching him .. all the gurls are laufin and some throwing tomatos and w*e dey can fynd in dere fridge at him........itz PRITHVI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

bechare ka balathkar ho gaya!!! he thought he wud rape his so called LOVE but it turned out dat his LOVE raped him....the poor thyng didnt no that his LOVE was a SHE/HE😆😆

datz wat i gotz so far...brief UPDATE😛

cudnt thynk of nun msn writing a ff even a mini one is HARD😆

I have got no words except:

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: munizaaa

I have got no words except:

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😆.....ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwww prithvi is disgusting hope angad will beat him black and blue🤢

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: dostokedost

😆.....ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwww prithvi is disgusting hope angad will beat him black and blue🤢

ya and red and purple and orange and yellow.....😆😡

well then i guessed u guyz enjoyed my SHORT ff!!!!😛😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Part 17


Angad sat on the rocks looking out into the lake, it was such a beautiful starry night, reflected in the lake with trees surrounding them, and there was no soul in sight. If he had been in the mood he could have looked up at the sky and yelled and no one would have heard him.

He looked back at the hotel, there was so much of a difference b/w the two places one filled with real joy and the other so fake, everyone had smiles on their faces but no one could know what was in their hearts.

He thought of kripa, she must be somewhere very happy probably with Prithvi, telling him that he(angad) wasn't her boyfriend for "real", enjoying and laughing. His heart twinged at the thought, he hastily removed it from his mind he did not want to think about that now.

He just wanted to lay here all night undisturbed, Casey would probably be looking for him but he didn't really care. He was different then her and all her friends, he just did not fit in the "rich group". Maybe god had mistaken and accidentally made him rich.

He saw an approaching figure at distance he couldn't really make out who it was, except for the fact that it was a girl, she went and sat on the sand her head hidden, as she hugged her body. He observed her closely so he wasn't the only one alone today. He got up to go closer to her but stopped in his track when he saw her get up.

She walked towards the lake. She was talking a bath in the lake in the middle of the night how weird? Angad questioned himself. He decided to go down to the lake to find out what was going on, he stepped down the rocks there were quite a lot. By the time he got down the girl had 3/4th of her body already in the water.

Angad remembered what the life guard had told him about there being a sharp drop in the lake after a few distance. He hurried running through the sand he had to warn her.

"Hey!!!!" he called out to her, she was quite far into the water and if it had been day she probably would not have heard him because of all the commotion, but it was night and his voice echoed, enabling her to hear it.

She turned back to look at him, it was KRIPA!! His heart stopped beating for a few seconds, what was she doing here. She turned around fully to face him, her face was expressionless, she started walking backward. Angad put out his hand as though to stop her. The water was up to her mouth.

Angad thought no more he ran forward blindly, she put all of her head inside the water. He jumped in swimming as he had never swam before. He found her, she had fainted and was water logged, he carried her in his arms. He laid her down on the sand.

"Kripa" He wanted to cry when he looked at her as a whole she did not look right her shirt was ripped, at different places; all of the buttons except for the ones in the middle were missing there were mark, and bruises all over her body.

Her lip was bleeding; he was just hoping nothing of the sort that he was imagining had happened. He lifted her face slightly to feel weather she was breathing all right or not. She slight choked on the water and got up suddenly as though from a bad dream.

Angad didn't even give her time to recover he slapped her on the face, "What the freaking hell were u doing? What if u had drowned? What if I had not been there."

She laughed and when she spoke her voice was cold and empty, "Just my luck I don't even have the power to kill myself."

Angad suspicions were confirmed, "What happened kripa?" It was the weirdest question he had ever asked anyone. He already knew what had happened, and he couldn't believe he was asking her to relive what was probably the worst moment of her life. But what was he suppose to do, what was he suppose to say, he had never felt so help less in his life.

She laughed like a maniac this time; she did not answer him, after she was through laughing she collapsed on the sand crying. Angad wrapped his jacket around her, and hugged her as she cried on his shoulders.

What had he done!! He knew who had done this and he swore to god that he was going to make him pay for every, tear that kripa had shed tonight. Prithvi Bose, he would be destroyed!!!

Entry of a new character next part of the part after that!! The real story is just starting!! Think of the parts before this as background.






Edited by munizaaa - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 part!!!!

so thys was a trailor eh!!! da actuall movie is styll aheadd !!! omg im too goodddd 😆 😛
prithvi 😡 😡 ur goan get it ... no panga with angad aite....tiz just a warning i n our not gona listen but u no im jus sayin 😃 😛 😆
P.S PRITHVI DONT TAKE IT SERIOSULE!!!

thinkin*** i want u to get hurt 😡 😡 😡 after wat u did to a INNOCENT GURL hu lets a guy in in her hotel room wen she is ALONE in the middle of the night 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow!!!!!!
lol real story is gonna start!! lol i wounder how it can get ny better then it already is!!!
continue as soon as ui can
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Hina
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great part! 👏 👏 👏
It was a nice way to make them meet. Continue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
OMG that was great! I can't wait for Angad to get revenge on Prithvi! That dude is freakin beast! This fan fic rocks! Plz cont. soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow.......... that was an amazing part! and has been an amazing story so far and I also hope the very same for the story comin ahead. I love ur story line. Excellent job! Good Luck and I can't wait to read ahead. Yea and Prithvi must watch his every step, cuz Angad is coming through. 😉 baby.......... hehehe 😆 Love it. Good Luck and continue when u can! Bye!!
Divjot 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow that means its just the beggining yeyyyyyyyyyy prithvi run for ur life 😆 ca'nt wait pls pls conti soon

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