Sunn Leyna 2........Rajeev-Aamna....Sharim-Visaal FF - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome job

love how u added pics

Edited by manveerrox - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow!!..That was an awesome start!!..
I really loved the written update..I was really eager for reading the updates by you ..anyways..that was an interesting start. So finally the journey of Sharim and Visaal has began..despite of their hurdles under the circumstances but one of the touching dialogue by Sharim was if you had killed your self ..how will I survive , by almost attempt to kill your self you have also killed me..really it was really touching ..these two love birds finally married..so wishing them a very happy married life!😳😳..aweee..Sharim and Visaal were absolutely romantic together..were very much in love..awee..😳😳..so now from here their journey as an husband and wife will start..so overall it is a superb start..and loved the way you put the picture..keep it up the fabulous work..looking forward..so keep writing and continue to pm me!😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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mashallah n just waaooo zara sweetie just an awesome beging i just loved da updtae...👏👏👏👏👏🤗 well writen keep da spark growing sweetie
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi readers im really verry sorry i know it has been long time and i had still not wrote the part but its cdc periode and im really busy...i had sometime last saturday but due to so much hot my lappy crashed...it got repear and i had time today but at last minute someone invited me to his bday party i coudnt break his heart...wahan mera dil bhi nahi lagga first but then my (ex) baby sitter come there and i goes on n on to chat with her time passed n when i was back from party it was already 6pm n i must take a shower, buy some fastfood for me n eat do homework n sleep to...so verry sorry readers i cant update now before 29th march...verry sorry hope u guys understand...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Imane!
I just read your notes..I completely understand that you've been busy with your work commitments..so please do take your time..we are eagerly waiting for your written updates!!..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So guys i'm really sorry for lllaaatttee posting but it was CDC weeks and i coudnt concentrate on the FF much but this time im very happy because yesturday was PP meeting my prof(professor) really scared me by saying i had BLAME but then she says april fool u have COMPLIMENTS... im verry happy because of this my mom is also proud of me so these days we r working on some Fanfics in college u know with class n profs write story on legendary(we r doin Vassal n Suzerin story n Renart's popular story)persons n then script...scenario...roles ... n action!!! LOL i love this season in th year when we write n plays stories it's really fun but now my prof really want us to be concentrate on dida scally(mean our expressions in the scene) n now she is always saying...no concentrate!!!...retake!!!...start again !!!...uff it's hilarious but now we r in grands classes n we know its not funs n our profs want us to be perfects in every step...But it's a time in which i can concentrate on story and plus holidays of Paques r coming and there is manies feriers in May...
(just noticed i talk alot lol let's start)


Part 2:
Sharim soon come out of washroom(in towel) n Visaal hugs him
Visaal: hey bab's thats so sweet (talking of a tshirt on which he had make draw their wedding picture n manies other designs on...she was wearing it on a jean.)
Sharim: liked it?
Visaal: noo
Sharim: ohh
he make a sad face
Visaal: i didnt liked i loved it!!
Sharim he looks at her then smile
Sharim: you naa always making fun of me
Visaal: okay hurry now we have to go downstairs plus i'm really hungry
Sharim: okay sure(he tkaes her in his arms n make her lie on bed)
Vissal: Sharrriimm...for food
Sharim: ohh...let's go then
Vissal: you are coming in towwweell?
Sharim: huh?? oh haan wait...
Vissal: fed up of doing it...go...
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Later both comes downstairs Sharim's hand on her shoulders and Vissal's on his waist so their new walking style
Afzal was sitting on dinning area with Rubab
as he sees them
Afzal: agaye betta bhari der lagga dhi..
Rubab giggles
Sharim: Papa it's Vissal...you know naa gals the times they take just for getting ready
Vissal: oh heello mister remind that I was ready before you
Sharim(whishpering to her): yooouu I wont leave you...
Vissal(acting as if she didnt hear): kyaa??? says loudly naa cant hear
Afzal look at him
they both start eating as well as Rubab and Afzal they were chatting and feeding each other like perfect couple
Afzal look at them smiling and realising the hapinees they gave to each other
Afzal: acha Rubab betta you are going back to Pakistan tomorrow?
Rubab: haan uncle woh aap jante hai naa maman pareshan ho jaye ghi pehle bhi shaadi ke liye ek month aur ruk gaye...
Afzal: haan acha remember you promise you wont tell anything to you'r mom about Sabia and Visaal okay..
Rubab: jii uncle..
Afzal: Sharim you both are also going tomorrow
Sharim and his Vissal were so busy with each other to hear
Afzal smile and give a look to Rubab
Rubab screamed: SHARIM!!
Sharim was about to put a spoon in Vissal's mouth but being suprised the spoon fall from his hand and Vissal remain her mouth open to take the food
They both soon looked at Rubab
Rubab: I heard you both are going tomorrow
Vissal: going??? Going where?
Rubab give a look to Afzal
Rubab: I dont know I HEARD you both are going...
Afzal laugh
Afzal: betta tum dono ne honeymoon pe nahi janna
Sharim: Don't worry papa we had already gone for honeymoon
Rubab: what??!! kab??
Sharim: you remember dad when you were in Pakistan and I was "missing" aur maine aapse kaha that I was in Lankhavi with some friends...(Afzal nods in yes)...to THAT friend was none other than Vissal...
Afzal: kya?? i dont belive this tum dono bhi naa
Rubab: before wedding??
Vissal: dont worry he is saying rubbish fat as him it was just a romanic trip togheter...
Sharim: what hey im not fat haan
Afzal: acha I had booked ticked for you both for Paris
Vissal: woow really dad...
Sharim: that's awesome and this time dont worry I swear it wont be only a romantic trip baby I had studied two years there...
Vissal: yeah!! I have studied in London
Sharim: to dono me differance kya hai Paris se TGV jaati hai London only 2 hours...
Vissal: yeah but im fed up of London so much like studying working and all wanna go Paris and have fun
Sharim: to we are going naa...
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Later in afternoon as Rubab was goign they decides to go for a pique-nique in a park you know naa it was sun with cold Wind...
They were having lunch and then they four (Sharim, Vissal, Rubab and Imraan) decide to play some games
Sharim: why not Tom&Jerry(mean someone run and other must catch him)
Rubab: do you have four years that you are saying
Vissal: oh please do you you have 80years
Imraan: let's start
Sharim must catch all of them he runned and catchced Rubab first(mean now Ruabab and he have to catch both others)
Sharim run behind Vissal she run too as fast as she could while giggling...he then reach her and holds her by her waist and tickles her
Vissal(laughing): stoopp...baby stop iittt...
Sharim: why???
As she was laughing like hell she fall on him and he fall too they both look at each other then burst out laughing...Sharim try to get up but as he was on ground plus laughing he looses his balance and fall again
Vissal laughed more...
then they both hold each other's hand giving each other support and get up
they came toward Rubab and Imraan
Sharim: woh sorry daudte daudte kuch zayda hi door chale gaye the
Rubab: hmm
Imraan: you both make a verry cute couple
Vissal: thank you
Sharim: okay now let's play volley ball
Imraan: aur ball tere sar ko banate hai aur fillet tumhari body ko
Visaal(raising her finger): shut up huh!!! stupid
Sharim look at him like "look meri bodygard hai naa"
Rubab: hay wo tree fillet ho sakta hai and i have bring a ball
Visaal: cool let's play then
they played Vissal with Sharim vs Rubab and Imraan and SV winned off course it was quite late in eveneing and they come back home
they both were packing in the room
Sharim(carringly): Vissal takes coat and all wahan bohot tand hoti hai
Visaal: itni bhi thand nahi hai honey plus I love cold
Sharim: phir bhi
Visaal: okay (she picked some more cloths from closet put in the suitcase and says: I'm done
Sharim quickly finish too
Visaal: Sharim
Sharim: bolo my jaan
Visaal smile: you know I love when you call me by sweets names
Sharim: acha
Visaal come and sit on his lap: haan
Sharim: hhmm
He smile cutely and hugged her then they both fall on bed...he has Visaal on his top
She kiss him passionately as well as him and he slowly start rubbing his figgers on her back...she turns off the light and then put her hands arround his neck...
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(sorry tried manies times but it's not posting in big charachters i know it's difficult to read in small but do as u can)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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good update..thanku for the pm..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Imane!!
I'm extremely sorry for updating late as I was quite inactive in I-F lately due to my work commitments so hope you didn't mind..anyway what can I say dear as always it is a very nice part and really love the way you wrote the characters emotions..so well done..and the update is extremely sweet and specially loved the bonding of the characters..and aww..😳..loving Sharim and Visaal already ,and the married couple is so much in love so that's the best part about them..can't stop loving them😳..now from here their journey will start from here..wishing all the very best for the married couple..looking forward to read more😃..so can't wait to read it..the twists, and of course their sweet romance😳..so please do update the parts sweety..and do pm me😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MysticRiver

good update..thanku for the pm..😊

your welcome dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: spvd

part 2
lovely part...
cont soon..

thank you, dont worry aaj kal ka shedule its like college se chuti mil gaye

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