Sunn Leyna 2........Rajeev-Aamna....Sharim-Visaal FF - Page 3

Originally posted by: VishakaGal12

Hey Imane!!

I'm extremely sorry for updating late as I was quite inactive in I-F lately due to my work commitments so hope you didn't mind off course not as well as u didnt forgoted me.😛.anyway what can I say dear as always it is a very nice part and really love the way you wrote the characters emotions..so well done..and the update is extremely sweet and specially loved the bonding of the characters..and aww..😳..i dont think so hurry me likha aur hai bhi bohot chota but glade u liked. loving Sharim and Visaal already ,and the married couple is so much in love so that's the best part about them..can't stop loving them😳. Thanks. now from here their journey will start from here..wishing all the very best for the married couple..looking forward to read more😃..so can't wait to read it..the twists, and of course their sweet romance😳..so please do update the parts sweety..and do pm me😃

dont worry i will try and write usually this season...and try to not disapoint u guys i ll surely pm you you dont have to worry for that

P.S.: im sorry guys pata nahi IF ko kya hua cant write in big
N i personnly dont like to read stories in small it pain my eyes as im already myope and i know u peaple also dont like...and as i quoted the comment of vishaka its isnt clear sorry

Originally posted by: binimoti

Interesting, lovely

Welcome to my ff and Thanks

Importan question!!!! I need to know for the story that which cuople do you prefer or like more betweenBR]Kavyanjali

Angad Kripa

Recap: Both SV go on a picnic with Imraan n Rubab and enjoy a lot
Part 3:
Morning:
Visaal' s alarm ring she first ignore it but the next second as she realise they have to leave for honeymoon she get up in hurry and then try to wake up her handsome sleepy beaty urff Sharim(who if you remember used to make his dad angry because of not waking up n his 5mins used to change into 30mins)
Visaal: honey... (shakes him) get up hurry Sharim...uff utho naa...
Sharim (in sleep ): baas panch mins papa
Visaal: papa ke bache its Visaal we have to leave baby
Sharim pulls her on him and hugs her tight
Sharim (sleeping tone): to tum bhi so jao naa jaan
Visaal (trying to get free): hey leave me...
She angrily free herself and then go to the washroom pick a glass pour it with water and throw on Sharim
Sharim get up in shock looking so handsome bare cheasted with water drop falling from his hair
Visaal burst out laughing
Sharim(sarcastly): hahaha...yeh kya tareeka hai sauba sauba hansbund ko jagane gha
Visaal: look you were not waking up so i...by the way i have a flight to catch so...
Sharim: Flight????? Oh god its already 7:15 cant you wake up me before
Visaal: hey now stop yelling at me Okay
Sharim: to kya khud ko dantoun
Visaal: off course its you who dont wanted to wake up
There is a knock on door
She opened it
Visaal: papa aap
Afzal: haan maine socha romance karte karte tum dono time bhool jaoghe jaldi se breakfast table pe aoo flight miss ho jaye ghi
Sharim: jee papa hum abhi ayye
Afzal go
And Sharim and Visaal both go on with usual hurry to get ready in the morning both take a quick shower then get ready ek bar jaldi me Sharim ne apni tshirt ulti pehen li Visaal laugh at him, he wear it correctly
Then they both came down with their suitcase jaldi se kuch khaa lete hai and goes to airport
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Rubab: bye Visaal take care and call me usually Visaal: Okay dont worry...dont tell anything to Madiha anty and take care
They hugs
Later on Rubab take her flight to Pakistan and SV take their flight to Paris
In the plane they both were sitting next to each other with Sharim in side of window
Annonce: (ok donno which language they speak in malaysia so im annoucing in english and french) you re attention please the plane 24Dag-R from malaysia to Paris is going to air up passengers are requested to lock their belt/ Votre attention SVP le vol 24 Dag-R en direction de Paris(Roissy-Charles de Gaule) va bientt dcoller les passagers sont prier d'attacher leur ceinture...
Sharim hold her hand
Visaal smile
Visaal: dont worry I m ok
Sharim(nervous): umm haan woh... i know with me u ll feel ok
Visaal notices he seems scared
Visaal: then leave my hand sweetoo
Sharim leave her and closes his eyes
Visaal: its the first time you take plane??
Sharim: No but usually apne kisi dost se chipak jata houn im a little scared you know aaj kal kitne planes crash ho rahe hai
Visaal laughed
Sharim: haas lo...aur hasso
Visaal: uffo do you think if plan have to crash then it wont if you are scared??? If it has to crash it will if not then it wont
Sharim: yeah you are right
He relax a bit
Then Visaal smile and took her hand in front of him
He holds her hand and both smile while in backroung(uuuhuuhu sunn Leyna music ring)
9 hours Later they finally land i Paris
And both sits somewhere on a Relay caf in airport(ok guys i know every single area of that airport its a long story)
Both were drinking hot coffe(nescaf;)
And now wearing coats as it was arround -4,-5 degres in Paris
Visaal: jaanu hum raheghein kahan
Sharim: metros stations me...(he laugh)
Visaal: Verry funny i mean kause hotel me
Sharim: nahi no hotel dekho Visaal maine socha ke hum sirf Paris ko visit nahi karne aye hum yahan parisians ki tara rahege so no hotel and all we ll stay in banlieue parisienne like all parisians mera ek dost hai Iqbal(Iqkbal khan) Visaal: nice idea...but Sharim ek shart pe we ll write an article about how parisians live and all for next month news paper of SV compagny
Sharim: you know sometimes you have even better ideas than me off course
Then both walk out hand in hand they stop a taxi
Ok so 15mins later in banlieue (ok in 95 not 93 i dont wanna make Visaal raped or Sharim kiddnapped its verry dangerous city ek baar wahan raat me apni car park ki when cope back arround 11pm found it burned come back in metro)
So 95 ki thandi khubsurat hawa we can see separates cite(mohalle) har mohalle ki ek apni bulding designs separates by roads it seem like they all have their on space...Taxi leave them in front of some hight HLM buildings(so a cite)
Sharim get down and take her suitcase seeing she is verry exited but tired because of the journey
Visaal: main utha loonghi
Sharim: no you are tired chalo
Visaal smile
They both walk and come to see all teenagers and kids are playing in the cite Visaal smile
Sharim notices Iqbal playing football with his team(3 gals 3 boys) all wearing Zlatan's t shirt from marche
So he goes towards him
Sharim: hey Iqbal
Iqbal come towards him
Sharim: hey yaar itni tand me tum saab loog bahar kya kar rahe ho woh bhi t shirt me
Iqbal: arre yaar first yahan ek kahavat hai that chahe barish ho toofan ho baraf ho we all do what we do usually and second think im playing football yaar hot lagta hai passina chut tha hai and we have to beat these Marseillais phir kabhi shakal naa dikhaye mohalle me waisse yahan hai "cite des pakats" so as you can see the buildinds are white and greens and there is 70% of pakats here
Visaal: pakats??
Iqbal: arre pakistanis yaar. Tum yahan betho match dekho phir main tum logon ko flat dikhata houn
Sharim: but..
Visaal: rehne do naa wanna enjoy with them
Sharim: tum thakhti kabhi nahi
Visaal: no wanna see who wins hope its psg
Iqbal gives her a peck on cheeks(ok here its a symbol of hi or a friendly symbol when someone kiss on cheeks you have to give the kiss back)
Iqbal: hayee meri behen!!
Sharim: behen??
Iqbal: haan behen nahi to kya biwi bulaoun
A gal: Iqbaall!!
Iqbal(to her): j'arrive Neha bebe(i m coming Neha baby)
So the girl is Neha bamb <img src="http://auto.mgl.skyrock.net/art/PRIP.86298079.5412.2.jpg" alt="" />Iqbal's gf thought he has lany but thats another story
Iqbal SV ko bithake come down towards where they are playing saying "nike l'OM!!!"
So off course parisians wins the match and throws Marseillais out
While this Visaal talked with some gals of there asking that why are you peaple outside they respond that parents are at work till late nite and there is no one else at home so all bache in pari. From 6years old to 17 years old stay outside after school/college/lycee because there is nothing to fo alone at home so they spend most of time outside with friends...Visaal takes this not(honeymoon par bhi kaam ki pari hui hai lol)
Iqbal come towards them it was now 7pm means time for all bache to go home eat dinner and sleep
Iqbal: chalo hum baguette leke aate hai phir flat me chalte hai
Sharim: Baguette???
Iqbal: to kya parossi se khanna lega yahan ek parossi dusre ko janta tak nahi hai ok its not the bled
Visaal take the note
Visaal: ok par baguette hai kya
Iqbal: arre meri behena Pakistan me loog roti khate hai har meal sath to isi tara yahan lunch aur dinner ke waqt loog baguette me white chease lagga ke khate hai for entry...aur yougourt bhi yahan hum loog milk waali cheeze bohot passand karte hai aur khaate bhi bohot hai issi liye to parisians marseillais ki haddi pasli tor dete hai
Visaal taked the note
So they go to the nearest boulangerie(its like a coffe shop u find everything u can have in a coffe shop plus all sort of pains(its like rotis for you peaple its french traditional) including baguette) who was between some others shops like pharmacie, sweets shop, and it was near a college so they can see last students going home and everyone taking baguette from boulangerie
Boulangerie me enter hue to dekha ek hot gal with col V t shirt and jean
Iqbal: wesh Natasha passe une baguette et demi(hey Natasha gimme a baguetre plus half anothere)
Ok Natasha is my boulangerie friend she is at my college but as her sis and she lost her parents she need to work after college to complete her bourse like her eldef sis work as surveillante in my bro's shcool
So Nat give him his baguette(ok guys main kuch pic post karti houn.) He pay
Natasha: salut et oublie pas de venit a la fete demain( bye n dont forgot to come at the party tomorow)
Iqbal: Tkt (dont worry)
They finnally arrive in the flat
Iqbal: ok aab main chalta houn
Sharim: kahan??
Iqbal: apne ghar i live near the SNCF station and ofice in "croix blanche" mohalla yahan to aisse hi flat kharida apne pakats ka mohalla hai naa
Visaal(smiling): yeah bye!!
He leave Sharim and Visaal were eating in dinning area(ok so here usually dinnings areas are near the window or i say balcony so that the only two meals we have at home(breakfast n dinner) we eat seeing the sun going at dinner n coming at breakfast)
Sharim: sorry mera dost naa pagal hai
Visaal laughed
Visaal: nzhi baas true parisian hai kya cool hai yahan look the wiew
Sharim: yes we can see Eiffel tower, Montparnasse tower and La defense's grattes ciels(from this pic we can see La defense its the buildings behind who make the city)
Visaal: how do you know???
Sharim: i have stutied here 2 years
Visaal: oh yeah (tasting the baguette-fromage dish) its tasty yumm
Sharim: yeah i love it (eating another) Yeh loo daye khao traditional liegoise hai...Iqbal se specially tumhare liye laya houn its tasty
Visaal eated and loved
Sharim notices some mousse at the corner of her lip
He gently wpipes it off with his finger and then put his finger in his mouth to eat the mousse
She blush a little and he smile
Later on Sharim was washings the plates while Visaal was wacthing tv some serial on tf1 it in french off course but she try to understand lol
Sharim come and sit near her on the sofa
She lifted her head to his cheast as he held her close
Sharim: I have made a list of the most beautifull places of Paris and we ll visit one by one
Visaal: okay...tum mujhe shopping nahi karwao ghe?
Sharim:off course karaoun gha jab hum Montparnasse tower visit karne jayeghe tab wahan ek bohot bara shopping mall hai "Gallerie Lafayette" wahan
Visaal: yahan kyun nahi
Sharim laugh
Sharim: seem like you liked banlieues...yahan par ek mall hai wahan(pointing throught the window) but yahan as parents are in Paris the whole day they live like there do shopping there they just come here to sleep and the sunday...to yahan kaun reh gaye bache and teenagers so yahan ke mall me tumhe jeans, T-shirts aur sports cloths ki ilawa kuch nahi mille gha jaanu i wanna buy you some mehenghi dresses and all
Visaal: you are cho sweet (give him a peck on his lips) love you
Sharim kisses her too on lips
Sharim: JTM dear
Visaal: what??
Sharim: love u too
Visaal smile slowly lie on him kissingh him passionately
Sharim separate: arre babes lets go in the room naa yahan kahan sofe par churu ho gaye
Visaal blushed
So he carried her in the nearest room as there are three
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Ok so now to be clear with french tradition 😆 😛 :
this is a tipical parisian boulangerie

but i prefer this company one

so in u can find all things u can find in every coffe shop plus french traditions:
Baguette(lunch/dinner):



(i know u cant read french but bare with me)
Pain au chocolat(traditional breakfast):

Croissant(traditional breakfast):

Pain au lait(traditional breakfast):

And a traditional parisian breakfast is:


(one rule here on breakfast and gouter eat only sugary food)
Ok hope its clear 😊
I just had Pain au chocolat and pain au lait this morning 😛

Originally posted by: Imanezara

Importan question!!!! I need to know for the story that which cuople do you prefer or like more between

Kavyanjali

Angad Kripa

i love Angad Kripa...

Recap: SV go to honeymoon and there they meet Sharim's college friend Iqbal
Part 4:
Sharim was making breakfast in the kichten
When Visaal came her hair messy and still sleepy
Sharim: hey honey (give her a peck) had a good sleep?
Visaal (sleepy): hhmm? yeah...
Sharim: you look cho cute like this all messy
Visaal smile hearing the compliment
Weather was all foggy and wet outside
Sharim: its so cold naa
Visaal: no its nice...cool
Sharim: if u think
Sharim takes two hot cafe and some pain au chocolat with croissants
Sharim: come
They both sit on the table and start eating
As it very cold in the morning less than -10
Visaal was shivering
Sharim noticed
Sharim: take a coat baby
Visaal: no ist ok
Sharim: as you wish but you ll get sick
Visaal: no problem tum ho naa meri care karne ke liye
Sharim smile
Sharim feed her
She smile and take the food into her mouth
She feed him back
And he taked the food slowly brushing his lip on her fingers
She shiver at his touch
They both got lost in their eyes for a while
Visaal get up and come towards him she sits on floor putting her head in his lap and taking his hand in hers
Visaal: ek baat kahoun Sharim
Sharim( slowly rubbing his hand in her hair, in a verry loving tone): kaho naa honey mere kaan tumhari hi to awaaz sunne ko taraste hain
Visaal: main bohot khush houn ke hum saath hain...lekin usse zayda daar lagta hai mujhe
Sharim(worried): daar?? Kiss baat ka daar hai meri jaan ko?
Visaal: tumhe khone ka...tumse...tumse bicharne ka daar(she look up ag him) Sharim...tum kabhi mujhe chor ke to nahi jaoghe naa??
Sharim(take her face in his hands): promise that jab tak main iss duniya me houn tab tak main har paal tumhare saath rahoungha...lekin agar main naa raha to...
Visaal(cut): shut up!! Jab dekho bakbak karte rehte ho
She hugs him and he hugs her back
Visaal: if something happen to you to i will not bare it Sharim...( a tear drop from her eye)
Sharim: hey baby...(he feel the tears on his shoulders) Visaal... are you crying baby???
Visaal separate from him and wipe of the tear
Visaal: no...
Sharim: I love you honey i feel like its pierce my heart when you cry...
Visaal smile
Visaal: love you too
They were about to kiss when they hear the main door opening and somone coming in
It was Iqbal...he throw his college bag on the sofa and sits there comfy
Iqbal: abhey hey romeo julliet zara yeh saab room me karo ok
Sharim: tum???(looking at his wacth 8am) itni subba subba
Iqbal: uffo its tuesday not sunday all...abhi main ullu Cesam ka itezar kar raha houn bus leke yahan aya aur aab woh ready nahi tha to socha upar char aoun waisse bhi lycee se pehle ada ghanta rehta hai abhi
Sharim: acha aaj hum dono Eiffel tower jaa rahe hai
Iqbal: to jao maine kab manna kiya uff purely tourists
Visaal: what
Iqbal: abhey gaali me kabhi koi raasta puchta hai kabhi koi...aur kisi ka koi accent hai kisi ka koi aur...aur kabhi to kisi ko french aati hi nahi hai
Sharim: Visaal lets go get ready yeh to pagal hai
Sharim wear a shirt, a jean and a doudoune coat and Visaal wear the same cloths she had while her entry in SLN purely tourist style with a doudoune coat also
While later as they get ready they take the bus and arrive SNCF station and take the RER to gare du nord who pass in front of the tower:
Ok so at Eiffel tower (2rd floor) Visaal was enjoying the vue and taking pictures(she loves that)
Visaal: Sharim please yahan khare hona
Sharim go and stand there smiling Visaal take a picture
Sharim: comon now lets get down verry cold here
Visaal: your so boring...cold cold cold...let me enjoy
Sharim(he hold her up in his arms): chal rahi ho ke main lejaoun
Visaal(giggles): tum lejao
Sharim(rubs his noze on her): acha
She giggles again
Later they were having their lunch on the grass in front of the tower
Sharim: yeh loo youre sandwich...eat baby
Visaal: thank you
They both eat fidding each other and giggling
Visaal takes some pictures again she really love that
Then they go on the "bateau mouche" boat and were "sitting hugging"
Visaal: woow i love Paris its so beautifull
Sharim(smiling): but less than you
Visaal: hhmm
Later on he help her to get down and they sits near the "louis XIV" bridge
They both were having coca drink
Visaal holds Sharim's arm
Slowly hidding her face in his arms to not feel the cold
Sharim: hey baby feeling cold?
Visaal: hhmm
Sharim: lets go back in banlieue phir pointe hours ka waqt hone wala hai aur hamari khair nahi
Visaal: tum meri itni care maat karo
Sharim: maine apni care kari Vissu..
Visaal: liar...
They were in RER and Visaal fall asleep on his arms
While backround music "thora sa pyaar" ring
As he was looking at her cute face sleeping he smiled
Sharim(thinking): she look so cute...she is full of life yet too innocent...i love you baby..you are my most precious diamond...and i promise i will give you all the happinees you deserve..(he kiss on her forhead) and wrap his arm arround her
Finnally when he came back home it was already dark outside
He pick her up and go up down the stairs with her in his arms(i know how much are thses metros n rer stairs)
He was getting tired but still dont wanted to disturb her sleep...when somone pat his shoulders
It was Neha
Neha: hey why dont you wake her up
Sharim: i dont want to
Neha: how sweet you are...you both make a lovely couple
Sharim: thanks...and what about you and Iqbal?
Neha: you know its college we are having fun nothing more...
Sharim: yeah!!
They finnally arrived on the ground
Sharim: aab main isse bus me kaisse soiye lejaoun dont wanna wake up her
Neha: Iqbal lives just here (she point a building) tum wahan lejao I m sure he wont mind...bye
Sharim: ok thanks but where are you going??
Neha: my house i live in vingt-quatre
Sharim: oh the most populat cite thats good
Neha: yeah bye i ll miss my bus
Sharim get Visaal in Iqbal's flat
He lie her down on the bed(it what kind of Aki's house in kth)
He remove her hat
Her hair was disturbing her sleep so he slowly place it behind her ear
he remove her shoes, her coat and her Gloves
He cover her by the bedsheet carefully so that she wont feel cold
He was about to go when his shirt's button get stuck in Visaal's hair
She moan as its hurt her a bit when he tried to go
He Slowly remove her hair making sure to not hurt her even if his button break he doesnt care
Then khud bhi paas hi let jata hai hugging her in his arms...he realise he had spend only three nites with her but now ge cant sleep without being close to her
The next day:
Visaal wake up and first she doesnt reconise where she is and get scared but then as she sees Sharim is sleeping behind her she got relived and she rest her head on her cheast feeling so comfortable
He woke up by her mouvement
Sharim: uth gaye sleeping princesse
Visaal: i got to sleep in the RER??
Sharim: yes baby
Visaal: and u didnt wake me up?
Sharim: no
Visaal: to phir main yahan kaisse aye
Sharim: its Iqbal's house while you were in my arms i met Neha she said she ll inform him that we are staying in his house at its near the SNCF station for the night so he goes another place
Visaal: where?
Sharim: I dont know...he has many flats and many friends...
Visaal: hhmm so sweet of you ghat you didnt wake me up thank you honey
Sharim: youre welcome
Visaal: i love you Sharim
Sharim: I love you too
Visaal: two??? Who are the 2rd
Sharim: Visssuuu
She laugh
He smile seeing her laughing
Sharim(in his mind): I want to see you always happy like this Visaal...
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Originally posted by: MysticRiver

good update...

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

good update...

thank u 😊