Sunn Leyna 2........Rajeev-Aamna....Sharim-Visaal FF - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: spvd

part 4
awesome.thanks 😊 ..
cont soon. It depends of urs comments and for now i have not enought responces to continue...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Imane!!
Hope you are doing very good..first of all I'm extremely sorry for replying late because of my work commitments so finally able to read your FF..and let me tell you that it was a pleasure of reading both of the parts together..and I'm glad that Iqbal and Neha Bamb is in your FF and I don't even mind Eijaz and Anita as well because both of the jodis are equally fav..:)..anyway..as always what can I say..the parts are extremely wonderful, specially loved the way you wrote their journey to honeymoon..and described their journey in Paris as it is one of the romantic place ever..and their conversation made me really blushed..😳😳..they are so much in love..it is very well written..so I'm glad that the pairs enjoyed their journey in paris..so wishing the couples all the very best..and kissi ki nazaar na laage..please do continue soon dear..and thanks a lot for PM me..keep it up the great work!!..:) and do pm me whenever your free..and yes..please don't you dare to close this FF..varna mujhse boora koi nahin hoga..😉..varna main Mansi ko call karungi!!..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Imane!!
Hey dear!!!
Hope you are doing very good..first of all I'm extremely sorry for replying late because of my work commitments so finally able to read your FF..
its ok dear but thats true that was waiting eagerly for ur comment.
and let me tell you that it was a pleasure of reading both of the parts together..and I'm glad that Iqbal and Neha Bamb is in your FF
they are just doing a guest apparence while SV r in paris...
and I don't even mind Eijaz and Anita as well because both of the jodis are equally fav..:)
yes maybe in the future they will be in my FF also because i also like them..
anyway..as always what can I say..the parts are extremely wonderful, specially loved the way you wrote their journey to honeymoon..and described their journey in Paris thanks for liking as it is one of the romantic place ever..
i really donno why tourists n u peaple say that ❓ we have been thinked also with feiends that why the hell peaple say that because we dont find Paris romantic at all 😕 appart from the fact that we always try to stay happy and cheerfull...
and their conversation made me really blushed..😳😳..they are so much in love..it is very well written.
thanks
.so I'm glad that the pairs enjoyed their journey in paris..so wishing the couples all the very best..and kissi ki nazaar na laage..please do continue soon dear.
surely im really verry bored at home as upar se phir se holidays a gaye
.and thanks a lot for PM me..keep it up the great work!!..:) and do pm me whenever your free.
dont worry i pm usually just after writing and updating
.and yes..please don't you dare to close this FF..varna mujhse boora koi nahin hoga..😉
dont worry i wont close it but i get a little disapointed when i didnt get much comments.
varna main mansi ko call karunghi!!
Well im not afraid of her at all i beat some boys of my college..they r afraid of me :P even my dad listen to me he has not any right or control on me to yeh buriya kya hai...she can only make hell nihaal's life not mine :-P..😃 and you also update soon ur FF or else I'll call my ESM team 😆 </font>[/DIV]
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Recap: Sharim and Visaal are enjoying their trip in Paris...Visaal fall asleep and Sharim carries her in Iqbal's house
Part 5:
Visaal was laughing full heartly and Sharim was just admiring her
He laugh with her seeing her cutenees and pich her noze
Visaal look at him lovingly and slowly get into his arms closing her eyes
He wraps his arms arround her while kissing her forhead
Sharim: aaj uthna nahi hai kya
Visaal: no...I wanna stay in your arms forever
Sharim smile again at her innocence
Sharim: baby I love you so much
Visaal: but i love you more much
Sharim: liar I love you the most
Visaal: no its me
Sharim: you are really not my wife but my baby...cho cute sweet and innocent
Visaal: and dangerous and thoke baaz too...remember...
Sharim: ohh...(separate from her) phir to mujhe aapse darna chaiye...kya pata aap to mera rape bhi kar sakti hain
Visaal(hold his collar..pulling him close): haan...koi chak hai
Sharim(acting like if he is scared): please mujhe chor dijiye...warna meri biwi naa bohot dhaadi, dhidh aur sarial hai...apki jaan le leghi
Visaal leave him and act as if she is hurt
Visaal: you really think this of me??
Sharim: yeah!!!
Visaal(still acting) get up from the bed and sit on the sofa putting her head on the arm of it..acting as if she is crying
Sharim get worried and come sit behing her holding her by her shoulders
Sharim: hey baby im sorry i was just joking...(no responce) Visaal???
Visaal(sobbing fakely): you think its a joke...you hurted my feelings Sharim(sobs) i didnt expected this from you..
Sharim(feeling guilty): i am verry verry sorry jaan...dekho main kaan pakarta houn...(holdings his ears) naraz ho??
Visaal suddenely burst out laughing
Sharim got suprised first but seeing she is not crying at all he got that she was fooling me
Visaal: you duffer(she laughed) i said naa i am a big fooler
Sharim: yyoouuu
He take her up in his arms and place her on the bed lying on top of her
She look at him passionately
Sharim was approaching her more second by second and then they both get lost in a deep juicy kiss
After some time he separate to breath
And smile mischiviously
Sharim start to tickles her in the stomach
She start laughing moving here and there
She rolls and escape from the bed
Sharim come behing her
Sharim: you think you are too smart naa
Visaal hides herself on a side of the table
Sharim was on the other side
So when he move further toward her by right side she move toward left and vis versa but getting tired he jump up the table and she escape running and laughing while he come behind

She arrive to the kitchen
He reach there too
Visaal take a knife
Visaal: dont approache or i kill you
Sharim: oh really baby
Visaal: yaa
Sharim: than kill me if is that you want
Visaal: nnooo
Sharim: why
Visaal: because i love you
Sharim: me too(they get lost in each other) buuutt i still hate you
Saying this he catch her and carries her to the sofa she was giggling
Lying on top of her
And then they both again had a deep long passionate kiss
Then he saparate as she move a little so as it was a sofa they both fall on the ground
Visaal on top of Sharim
She rest her head on his cheast as he wraps his arms arround her
Visaal: you know honey, that you are the best
Sharim: no you are the best sweetheart
Visaal: hhmm
Sharim: chalo now lets get ready ek baar ghar bhi to jana hai naa
Visaal: why directly hi chalein naa
Sharim: Visaal we are wearing the same clothes since yesturday lets go home and get fresh up phir chalein ghe ok
Visaal: ok but first i want to eat something i m verry hungry
Sharim: its normal you dont had ur dinner yesturday
Visaal: yeah but yahan hum khaye kya
Sharim laughed
Sharim: dont worry Iqbal ka ghar hai kuch to hoga khanne ke liye
Visaal giggled too
And after having their breakfast theh both go to fresh up in their flat
But as they wake up late it was arround 12 and it was already lunch time so Iqbal come there
SV were wacthing tv as they thoughts they ll go after lunch
Iqbal: hi Everyone
Both: hi
Iqbal: acha its wednesday today
Sharim: so...
Iqbal: so there us no college in afternoon lets go somewhere
Sharim: yes we planned to go Montparnasse
Iqbal: again? Please i'm tired...lets make you visit mlc today you ll go Montparnasse tomorrow
Visaal: i think its a nice idea.we ll got to know peaple and all..kyun Sharim???
Sharim: yes why not
Iqbal: good so lets go to the grec for lunch
Visaal: where
Sharim: its a popular fast food Visaal
Visaal: oh okay sure
Three of them go downstairs
Iqbal: maine aapko cite bhi visit nahi karaya abhi tak
Sharim: pehle khanna kg a lete hai
Iqbal: sure...so this is the parking of the cite so they go throught the parking
Iqbal: so behind these three there is the grec
They were sitting and eating
Visaal: its nice yummy
Iqbal: thats why i like
So Iqbal make them visit all the cites its another story but its really awesome because each cite has his own buildings color...first way to reconise and separate and each cite has his own rules and style of life but when reunite all r good friends...Sharim and Visaal were both amazied and verry interested they taked lot of pics and interwiewed lot of peaples
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The next day they were at the Montparnasse tower where its really cold and where there is a lot of wind...
Visaal: woooww what a beautifull wiew its amazing...as the Eiffel tower
Sharim: yeah but as u can see it has a panoramic wiew...and its more modern and less traditional like Champs-Elyses and Eiffel tower...
Visaal was taking pics
Visaal: bhara jante ho tum
Sharim: tumhe kya lagta hai...woh do saal maine ghar par paraye karte hue bitaye the
Visaal: Sharim look there its like our Malaysia
Sharim: no its not mini-malaysia its La dfense a new modern business arrondiddements...
Visaal: woow yahan kitne areas and arrondissements hai its amazing...and just in Paris...banlieue parisienne id another story...so nice
Sharim: haan but jaab Marseillais, Bretons, normands yaa kisi aur se laraye karni ho to sab, banlieue, paris, arrondissements and cites ek ho jate hai thats their force and their slogant is: Ici c Paris...
Visaal: hhmm to tum ne Paris ko para hai
Sharim: para nahin jana hai...
Visaal's hair was flying in the air
He was amazied by her beauty
He wraped his arms arround her...hugging her by the back...she placed her hands on his which were on her waist
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Later in the shopping mall Visaal was busy selecting clothes while Sharim was looking at a beautifull diamond..rubis and shaphir ring and some others jewelleries...he buyed them secretely
1, 2 hours later Sharim was carrying a lot of bags in his hands and Visaal was walking ahead when he stop
Sharim: are you done now
Visaal laughed and come towards him
Visaal: kyun thak gaye?? Tum ne hi to kaha tha that you will let me buy everything i want
Sharim: haan to channel, dior...sab dukane to kar chuke hai hum
Visaal: ok we ll now go home but ek shart pe
Sharim: what now
Visaal: buy me an ice cream please
He give her a square face
She make a puppy face
Visaal: please..please...please...
He sigh and then giggled at her innocence
Sharim: okay chalo
Visaal: yeess
They reach the ice cream shop
Sharim: which flavour you want
Visaal: italian vanilla ice cream
Sharim: okay...deux glaces a l italienne a la vanille
The gal: oui msieur(ok mister)
They both sit on a table eating their ice cream
Visaal: hey baby do you know french
Sharim: thori thori but i have what Iqbal says "bledar accent"
Visaal: waisse your friend is strange kabhi kabhi
Sharim: to tumhari chinees friends thori strange hai
He smiled and eated from her ice cream as she eated from his
He sees some of it on her cheek
He come close and slowly wiped it out with his tongue eating it
She closed her eyes thought this moment
They get lost in each other
A woman was sitting behing and smiling looking at the cute couple
When suddenely a little girl running come towards Visaal and hugged her
She was first shocked bu then also hugged the gal
Sharim: hey I didnt knewed you have a kid with a french guy
Visaal: shut up..
When a young lady arround 18, 19 come running behind
The gal: Camille queceque tu fait la(Camille what are you doing here)
The little child laughed and then hugged the other gal
The gal: desole elle est folle(sorry she is crazy)
Sharim: C pas grave(its not a problem)
They both goes
Sharim looked back at Visaal who was lokking at the gal going
Sharim: hello tumhe kya hua
Visaal: she is so cute naa
Sharim: first things yahan ke bache bohot hi naughty hote hai cute nahi...and second maybe she was but not more than you
Visaal: hhmm thats a good thing that you find me more cute than Everyone
Sharim: chalein
Visaal: chalo
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Back at the banlieue Sharim called Iqbal
Sharim: hello...kahan reh gaye tum yaar
Iqbal: abaye ullu abhi hi phone karna tha kya i am in the disco with Neha ok bye
He disconnected
Sharim: uff this guy
Visaal: kya hua
Sharim: you was right he is crazy
Visaal laughed
When her cell ringed
She picked up and goes out in the kitchen
Visaal: hi baby
A voice: hi honey kaissi ho
Visaal: i am perfeclty fine and you
A voice: i am bored without you here this stupid univerity is so boring
Visaal: aww i am sorry i know you miss me

A voice: hhmm i miss you a lot dear ok bye baby take care
Visaal: bye take care too love you
The voice: me too bye
She disconnected the call
Sharim heard everything and was wondering to whom she is talking and why the hell she come in the kitchen for talking

Sharim: kaun tha
Visaal: a friend
Sharim start doubting on her but he then
Sharim(thinking): no...You shouldnt doubt on her...she love you so much...we our on our honeymoon after all...no she cant...uska koi friends hi hoga...
Visaal: come honey...lets go to bed
Sharim: haan i am coming baby
They spend a romantic night once again
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
part 5
nice part...
cont soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Imane!
Thanks a lot for the pm yaar..and don't worry I did not forget to read the update😃..what can I say, I just loved the part that you wrote ..it is very beautifully described..the couple is still enjoying their time together..and they are really romantic together which brings a smile on my face😊😳..and I also loved the pictures as they go well with the scenes very well..and I also loving their friendship with Iqbal and Neha..and their conversation is also very nice..awee..Sharim knows how to speak in French..😉..not bad yaar..main bhi bohot hi impress ho gayi hoon😳😳..and the best part of this update is when Visaal got a call from a random guy..and Sharim was wondering that who could it be , and he was kind of suspecting her but from his heart he trust his love which is a good sign..but I can sense that there is going to be another twist..eager to read the twist..and find out that who the random guy is..and also hope that there is no infidelity and Sharim and Visaal always remain faithful because in relationship trust is also very important..so please do continue soon dear and pm me too😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i just love sharim and visaalll awesome update immane:)))))))))))))))👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mehaksabreen27

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">i just love sharim and visaalll awesome update immane:)))))))))))))))👏</font>

thanks alot 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: VishakaGal12

Hey Imane!

Thanks a lot for the pm yaar..and don't worry I did not forget to read the update😃..what can I say, I just loved the part that you wrote ..it is very beautifully described..the couple is still enjoying their time together..and they are really romantic together which brings a smile on my face😊😳glad to hear it..and I also loved the pictures as they go well with the scenes very well..and I also loving their friendship with Iqbal and Neha..and their conversation is also very nice..awee..Sharim knows how to speak in French..😉..not bad yaar..main bhi bohot hi impress ho gayi hoon😳😳.god i wish i can write in french because as its my 1st language its more easy beacause i know my english is bad.and the best part of this update is when Visaal got a call from a random guy..and Sharim was wondering that who could it be , and he was kind of suspecting her but from his heart he trust his love which is a good sign. yes he trust her glad u noticed but this will not be revealed in the 2,3 upcoming parts it will be after :-) but I can sense that there is going to be another twist..eager to read the twist..and find out that who the random guy is.and who said its a guy i didnt write HE, can be her grandmom...no lol jokes apart.and also hope that there is no infidelity and Sharim and Visaal always remain faithful because in relationship trust is also very important.]this is the suspense :-P.so please do continue soon dear and pm me too😃 sure

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