ArHi TS:'You're the first,the last,my everything|Ch 3, pg33

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Megha. â¤

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Posted: 11 years ago

#211

Im gonna miss this sooo mchhh! :'(
*Water works begin*

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ragvir92

@ragvir92

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#212

Nice TS yaar

Wow Khushi wantd Arnav to ber first though she didn't love him

And glad that Arnav made her realize her love and just didn't sacrifice saying Arjun is a good guy

Khushi never loved Arjun at all.It was Arnav always

Arnav is so patient,loving,caring everything

He is there for Khushi always whatever happens.That was cool

Khushi is really lucky

and the diary part was so sweet

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Pearl_Oyster

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Posted: 11 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: ragvir92
Nice TS yaar
Wow Khushi wantd Arnav to ber first though she didn't love him
And glad that Arnav made her realize her love and just didn't sacrifice saying Arjun is a good guy
Khushi never loved Arjun at all.It was Arnav always
Arnav is so patient,loving,caring everything
He is there for Khushi always whatever happens.That was cool
Khushi is really lucky
and the diary part was so sweet

Anu 🤗

Thank you for reading this..

I am glad you liked this.. 😳

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Smriti

@ArHi55

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#214

Chapter 1: WoW.. Simply WOW..

Such a lovely concept..

I like Arnav in this story.

He's such a darling 😃

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Smriti

@ArHi55

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#215

Chapter 2 was extremely beautiful.

The way you portrayed everything touched my heart.

Huge applauses,

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Smriti

@ArHi55

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#216

Chapter 3
😳 Too hot.
I liked the entries Khushi read in the diary.
So, finally the duo are deeply in love and having a beautiful time together.. 😃
Thank you for beautiful story.

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#217

Loved reading it once again.

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loves_aishu

@loves_aishu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#218

This was just in one simple word,

LOVELY!!

Makes you believe that Fairytales do exist!!

Take Care!!

😊

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jtmbarun

@jtmbarun

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#219

Lovely TS Rashmi!!👍🏼

A short and sweet story..❤️

I loved the friendship between Arnav and khushi..It was so innocent but strong friendship at the same time..Khushi knew she can count on Arnav anytime..She trusted him more than anyone..

I loved the fact that Arnav was thr for her even when he thought khushi loved someone else..He was not like he will force khushi and khushi has to be his etc etc..he was patient with her..and He explained to her very sweetly..

I also liked how khushi was confused about her love..about what exactly love was all about..she was just too innocent..But glad that finally she understand her feelings..

Great work Rashmi!!!👏👏👏