ArShi FF: Tending The Scorched #1 : Thread 2 added(24.07.14)

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amita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Nice and interesting

we can see Arnav's pain in your words

Love this concept too much

Eagerly waiting for more

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Apoorvarani

@Apoorvarani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Superb Prologue Dear!!! Waiting to read the story...

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mubina_m19

@mubina_m19

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Nice prologue
Waiting for more

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KrishVeer

@KrishVeer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Awe, a new story from you

I'm eagerly waiting for you to start with updating this FF😳

I'm sure it's going to be one awesome ride as usual😃

Thanks for keeping memories of Arnav and Khushi alive through your stories🤗

Thanks for the pm😃

Eagerly waiting for the first chapter

Update soon😉

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Shree Nanda

@Mrs_Darcy_Shree

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

interesting concept

plzz do cont. asap

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-SOBTIAN-

@.LadyHitler.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

*Edited*

That's really a good update..
This update only contained arnav.. I guess he lost his mother 3 years ago.. But his Di has become like this 1 year back.. That means there is lot more to this than just losing his parents and he doesn't even hate his dad.. And he knows shashi gupta.. But the last line sounded so different.. Is there any chance that he knows khushi too??
This is only the start but you covered many things in this update which will be bugging me till you update the next one..
And about your updates, we understand you might be busy.. In fact i am facing the same situation now.. So i understand n its okay even if you update a bit late..
Thanks for the pm..

Edited by Nish_alisha - 11 years ago

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Iman

@ArShiDelena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Awesome Start
Loved It
Can't Wait 4 d Next Part
Continue Soon

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Wow great story please update soon
it's an amazing story to tell
thanks for sharing your story with us.

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-Aurora-

@-Aurora-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Ahh! Finally, after reading the prologue I could'nt help but wait for its update.

The chapter 1 was nicely written - the emotions that Arnav went through were beautifully portrayed. I could'nt really decipher much because so much has happened.

Something happened three years ago - something tragic because Arnav can not sleep since then. What? I can only guess. Maybe something might have happened to Arnav's mom or maybe Khushi - but then why would Sashi call him and then why would Arnav address Sashi as "Sashi uncle"; they might have a good bonding which only means that Khushi can not be the reason behind he 3 - year - old fiasco but then it can also be that Sashi might have called Arnav to inform about Khushi - maybe something might have happened to her - good or bad? I am not so sure of.Oh god! You had to seriously end the chapter at such a bad bad bad cliffhanger!!!!

And then what is the equation shared between Arnav and Anjali - she is angry with Arnav? No, then she wouldnt hug him. Also, something happened a year back? Maybe related to Anjali and her husband ( wont consider him Shyam until and unless you provide us a name).

So many theories and a month wait - thats like killing me without poison.

Awww! The bonding between Arnav and Ahul was a treat to read.

I hope you do update soon. 😊