ArShi FF: Tending The Scorched #1 : Thread 2 added(24.07.14) - Page 64

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Posted: 11 years ago
he wants his sister who was the way she was before...
he adores her a lot...
aww..he took flowers for them...
and accompanied them,...
payal s hugs and behavior surely surprises him...
more surprising is the way khushi understands him..the hugs and now the peck...
loved the way rahul is described and all the relationship he shares..
excellent update 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
next update awaited😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
that was an awesome one...
its high time that arnav should have the habit of getting pampered by the sisters...loved the bonding between them and the way they are trying to make arnav comfortable among them...
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Posted: 11 years ago
di seriously it is really difficult to watch kids
hats off to u for taking the responsibility of teen kids
loved the bond between rahul and arnav
i know why he don,t feel akward when khushi hug him
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
First time Arnav felt Khushi kissed him which made him shocked😆
Loved the bonding between Rahul and Arnav
Thanks for the update and pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its really a nice update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved the way described one member's character in each update
Rahul is really a nice and mature man
He really treat Arnav as his own son at least someone is there who can understand Arnav and wish for his happiness
Loved their bonding too much

First part of update was really nice and lovely
Loved the way Arnav went to Anjali's room and loved Arul and get warmth for his Di
Arnav's entry in GLM Bring lots of shock for him
He had expected them to get shocked to see him in morning at their place But both girls were normal as they know he will be here
And then Payal's being so comfortable with him, Khushi's read him in only one look what he is thinking and made him have breakfast all were really shocking for Arnav
But its all make him feel happy and light

Kitchen scene was really cute
Khushi's searching and eating cookies like a kid and Arnav's admiring her from the doorstep was so beautiful
Loved the way Khushi thanked him in front of hospital
Arnav's thought on kiss that why its not feel awkward to him was very well described

Loved the whole update too much
Waiting for Arnav and Rahul's most waited conversation Want to know How will Rahul clear his confusion

Waiting or next update eagerly But you take your time read your note and can understand from which situation you are going through
Hope you get time and we get update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
can we get the part B tonight????
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry buddies but I haven't yet started with anything.. Will try to give the update tomorrow.. No, its not a writer's block, you can probably term it as laziness or a bit of wariness..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Will wait Vera. 😊 I specially know the result of laziness. 😆 So don't worry ll wait 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Brilliant that was just bl**dy brilliant
This story is fast becoming a fav
I'm loving Arnavs confusion every time khushi makes a move closer to him or shows how comfy she is with him the poor guy is clueless to the fact that khushi is his whether he accepts it or not love the battle between his inner desire n his mind
Can't believe the poor guy thinks she's too good for him
Can't wait to see his reaction when khushi starts to reveal her hidden talents she learnt for him
Can't believe that witch Piya is responsible for all the hurt their family has had recently first entraping Akaash then spouting Anjali n Rahul up just so she could entrap Arnav in her lust disgusting but now she has decided to mess with Payal n khushi I can't wait as she's bitten off more than she can chew they will make mince meat outta her in no time she's messed with the wrong tag team am picturing lots of plans backfiring n maybe few pranks from khushis side ...fingers crossed
Oh ho all clues flying in Arnav direction but he's still stuck at least now he knows he's met khushi b4 maybe he will try to remember something in that
Hoping his jiju will help him understand his feelings n stop him from avoiding it
Kiss was lovely touch shocked the heck outta Arnav though poor guy is having a teenager moment lol
Feel little sorry for him though this rush of affection from khushi N now Payal too is confusing the heck outta him although u can see him starting to get used to it n opening up more
Looking forward to seeing khushi N Payal mending all in the family n hopefully also giving Akaash the b*lls to admit his mistake n kick her the h*ll out
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin my way n continue soon
Can't wait for next update
Wanna see it slowly dawning on Arnav his wish is comin true
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chav...
Kal to update ka wada tha ...😳
Par yeha to inteha ho gayi intezaar ki...
Chav I am waiting to Res, don't want to miss the update page again😔
Kar rahi ho na aaj update?? *batting eyelashes*

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