Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 24)

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#451

Well finally they took the next step
I'm so happy for them
Poor Khushi had to drink the kadha and Arnav got away without drinking that
Family dinner sounds good and Khushi already made plans of taking their future children there and tell them their parents' story
Awww
Thanks so much for updating

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lovespell

@lovespell

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#452

Very nicely presented. You handled their intimacy with such delicacy potriated their inner feelings beautifully. Arnav has still a long way to go in the path of trust. He s just like a kid.

Hope this milestone will mark their relation on a newer level

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#453

Wowww my sleep went off the window :) what a sooopar update dear..loving the contrast between their feelings after making love..she is deeply in love and he is more pocessive..loving this

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#454

Awesome update.

This chapter marked the starting of another phase in Khushi's and Arnav's life.

Arnav yet has not realized his so called warm feeling towards Khushi as love.

The way both perceive their relationship about future is slightly different

When Arnav only thinks Khushi as his in all the birth, she envisages a family with children.

May be time is the healer, which can make Arnav open up to Khushi about his feelings

Awaiting eagerly to see how you are taking them forward on their further journey.

Salutes to you

Thx for the timely PMs.

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Meena

@chotidesi

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#455

As weird as it sounds, I'm going to call that one of the classiest love scenes I've read. It wasn't overly explicit and left just enough to the imagination. I really like how you've taken your time developing their relationship and allowed them to grow and change. Well done!

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docs

@docs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#456

Ha ha ha arnav is being playfully naughty with her. . I liked the way u described the whole scenario. . .very well written. .

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#457

Absolutely loved loved it!
Without making it too descriptive n OTT, u made it beautiful!!
It's a treat to read!
I'm too much eager how the things r taking place in their new phase , new relation..
Now Arnav already made a mission accomplished, MAKING KHUSHI MINE!!
Waiting to have some really romantic moments!! Let's c how this change the stone hearted ASR !!

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praj.shrish

@praj.shrish

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#458

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I am unresting the comment after keep it res for many days...not that I did lack the inspiration to do so but i was totally confused about the words to put here.

The chapter is so sensuous, exploring true beauty of nature's primal act and written too intricately that I am afraid my one word more or less, a sentence here or there can harm the trance-like effect it created.

Both Arnav and Khushi's dilemma is mentioned perfectly. Where Arnav's wish and need of taking their relation to next level is prominent, at the same time he is too afraid of another rejection and heart-break and still he doesn't wish to force her in any way. At the other side Khushi is eager too to walk on the path leading her to another milestone. Considering the environment and culture she has grown up into, her shyness about openly reacting to his wish is totally obvious but at the same time she is jiggling with the idea that her husband might take her shyness in other way.

The Arnav's hesitation, Khushi's innocence and their those..ahem moments before they finally became one written beautifully. And aftermath reaction of Khushi to their consummation totally suits to her character.

Buaji-Khushi encounter is cute but I felt Buaji being experienced women, putting two and two together should not be this difficult for her. I felt that part was unnecessarily dragged.

The main highlight of the chapter was the end encounter between Arnav and Khushi. It's there where Arnav's insecurities again cropped up. It's dominant how deeply the man is affected by his flawed childhood. It is so hard for him to believe that he can get happiness too.

Now wish to see how Khushi manages to make him trust on life and love

Thank you for such a wonderful chapter.

Edited by praj.shrish - 11 years ago

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clover

@clover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#459

Just loved this chapter. You are a wonderful writer. The sensual scenes were beautifully written.

😊

After being rejected all his life by the two people he loved most Khushi is the only one that accepts Arnav for what he is, as he is. She hasn't ever said no to him (I think). And her acceptance has become his lifeline, without which he cannot breathe. Arnav, in my opinion, is a wonderful person. When he loves someone truly, he respects them, cares for them, indulges in them, their opinion matters to him, he craves for their acceptance, and he expresses his right over them. If only he hadn't experienced such a bitter betrayal in the past, he wouldn't doubt their intentions and feelings. Sometimes I feel like Arnav strongly believes that he doesn't deserve anyone's love and care and that's why nobody will give it to him. I think he has an inferiority complex rather than a superiority complex like everyone else thinks. With Khushi, he has grown overly possessive of her, to the point that he is ready to do anything to make sure she never leaves him even if he has doubts about her, even if he thinks she might hurt him he cannot let go.

Khushi is such an innocent soul. That was truly a moment you created there when you made Arnav say to her

'It will be fine Khushi. Just go with the flow. Follow your heart' he smiled a little, trying hard to sound reassuring.

Arnav, talking about following your heart.😊

Also, didn't Khushi realise that they will have to undress if she agrees to more than kisses. She seems to have given herself completely to him- mind, soul and now body too. She has completely immersed herself in his love. If Arnav can't let go of her, she can't let go of him either. They now completely depend on each other.

Afetr thier union, Arnav seems more open with her, more jovial, more flirty and teasing. Naturally, Khushi is flusttered after spending an amorous afternoon with her husband, and said husband is enjoying her plight.😳

Oh yes, she was sure that Love was just around the corner in her life now.

Just after the next obstacle they have to face, I'm sure.

Wasn't it him who ate her like she was a real Ladoo all afternoon long?

😆

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter...

Happy 1st MKM II Anniversary 🥳

Edited by clover - 11 years ago