Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 24)

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Megha

@MarriedLove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#461

really very sweet and sexy...

the way khushi was fumbling...with answers...

thats kind of so apt with the first timers...not tht i have knowledge...but i think so...

its all very nice...

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meem17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#462

loved every bit of it

it as awesome

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segad

@segad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#463

just came back to IF and caught up with your story. Gorgeous as ever.

wonderful!

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Pyewest

@Pyewest

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Posted: 11 years ago

#464

Was waiting for so long. Loved every bit of it. 😊

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Sindhu Ramakrishnan

@Sindhuramakrish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#465

that was romantic!!😉 but u have given it without hurting anyone's feelings. i like the way u write the intimate scenes between the protagonists . it is neither vulgar nor too abrupt. regarding the update, kushi has completely submitted herself which shows that she has trust in arnav. but arnav is still wallowing in distrust? what has happened to him that he has asked her whether she is regretting it or not? understood that he is weak in trusting people. but again to this level when she is ready to give her life too? k kushi should be atleast vocal in loving her husband. she should tell him that she loves him and only him. but i am happy that atleast both have understood each other to a certain extent. i appreciate kushi's patience . hope it pays back. lovely update

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tanvi_arshi

@tanvi_arshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#466

Finally got awaited update...it's so nice..romantic...finally dey r husband & wife in true senses..n one step forward in their relationship... Love the way arnav teases khushi.. Waiting for next post eagerly...

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premdewaani

@premdewaani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#467

Wow that was just pure Romance and love.,, beautifully written update dear.., finally they have managed to cross that biggest bridge in their relationship.. Can't wait to read the next part.

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please6

@please6

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Posted: 11 years ago

#468

Loved it and finally they have became one and Arnav feels so insecure anyways loved it and plzzz update soon

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Sharmila

@ongongong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#469

Wow..that was beautifully written. One of the best chapter.

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anu1017

@anu1017

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Posted: 11 years ago

#470

That was awesome, romantic and blush worthy all in one 😊 I think I might be getting redundant by saying every update of yours really exceeds all my expectations!!!!

Coming to the update at last Arnav's heart is winning his mind versus heart fight, boy am I glad about that!!! He is still struggling with his trust issues but it is a big step for him to seek any kind if intimacy from other person especially Khushi as he is very afraid of his heart breaking into million pieces if she betrays him!!!!!

You showed Khushi's emotions too well too she is a novice and that did show as Arnav is the master at this game he did talk to her like he was a teacher teaching lol!!! Happy that she did not feel like Arnav was doing it out of obligation and he truly really sees her as a woman and the child that she thinks that he sees as as!!! Which woman does not like to be admired, loved and adored by her husband right 😳

She is really accepting and assuring Arnav as she knows about his past and she is getting to cajoling him and handling his mood swings very well now!!! I think the ball is now in Arnav's court to tell her about his past and let her in a little bit and make it easy on her...

Aww poor Khushi was subjected to Buaji's almost Khaada disguised as tea and her inquires into her tired and modest look lol!!! Could almost see her blush like every shade of red in the world!!!!!

At last I see that Arnav is enjoying the perks of being married to Khushi as she easily gets flustered and shy which he is using to his advantage 😉

Loved how he is at last in bliss that Khushi is his property mind, body and he doesn't know it yet but her soul too. Hopefully he will see the light soon and get to the realization that he is totally in love with the child woman who he thinks he owns, insecurities be damned lol!!!!

All in all loved the update and it was anniversary worthy update!!! Congrats on your baby turning one, hopefully you will have many more stories to come in the future!!!!😃

Wo that was the longest comment ever for me, what have you done to me A!!!! 😆

Edited by anu1017 - 11 years ago