Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 24)

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chits21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#441

Finally. So happy for arnav that he is finally happy.beautiful update;

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Throne

@Throne

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Posted: 11 years ago

#442

*EDITED*

LOVED it!!
This was one of the Best chapters so far!!
From deciding to stay out of her way to being borderline obsessive about the same girl, Arnav Singh Raizada has sure come a long way.

Of course the Devil was at his casual best when it came to answering the family and of course the poor, innocent wife was left feeling like a stuttering fool, much to his amusement!!

I absolutely loved reading the chapter and enjoyed it too!!
Trust the man to begin questioning about her regretting everything even after she clearly gave her accent right in the beginning!!

A milestone definitely has been reached in their lives but tensions and insecurities will cease to exist only when he begins to trust her implicitly!
Love might be just around the corner in her life but then since when did loving Arnav Singh Raizada come without consequences!

What with his pessimistic attitude, his insecurities and inability to trust simply anybody in his life, Khushi has a long fight ahead of her!
But fight she will, for her husband, his love and most importantly his trust!!

Next chapter eagerly awaited!!
😛

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

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Posted: 11 years ago

#443

That was just beautiful, romantic, exquisite and everything that their love making should be!! I really, really hope Arnav will truly feel more secure now...I doubt it, but I do hope so for Khushi's sake.

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saakhi01

@saakhi01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#444

Awesome update anon...
It was sooo romantic 😳
Sorry anon bt i am always at loss of words describing such romantic updates...
Poor khushi she got caught by buaji n had to drink that kadha tea while arnav got through it easily 😆
Why is arnav always asking for words?? Apni baari mei he dosen't speaks anything n our poor khushihas to decipher this enigma called ASR on her own everytime..
N others shud always express themselves in words for him even wen they r most uncomfortable n shy 😡
I knw he is insecure n all thats why he does so bt now is high time he understands khushi's some unsaid words n feelings...
Thanks for d update...

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va21

@va21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#445

Res...🥳🤗

Unres!!

Sry anonji for commenting late!! Bt my like n edit buttons wer not working!! 😕

Coming to d chapter...u cn only write this delicately n classily abt intimate scene!! Absolutely lovely!! Without explicit details u potrayed thr bcmin 1 so beautifully!! I was all smiley n blushy throughout!! 😳

Arnav's eagerness n khushi's being naive so apt!! Lovely!!👏

Being possessive n being obssessive... These r 2 diff thngs...i suppose our arnie is at their junction!! N m sure khushi is goin to suffer coz of it!!

M more n more in love wid ur writing anonji!!

Hv re-read d chapter atleast 10 times atleast!!😃

Vibha.

Edited by va21 - 11 years ago

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anu

@anu17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#446

Arnav is still little insecure but can understand the point why he is...

any way slowly everything will be in correct place for sure

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Aruni.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#447

I will come back after i am done blushing.

☺️ ☺️ ☺️

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Arshi67

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Posted: 11 years ago

#448

That was super intense *phew fanning myself*

Loved the way they both dealt with the family's inquisitiveness so differently.

Khushi willing to drink the 'nearly kadha' with Arnav nonchalantly shrugging.

That's so them!

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shruti

@shruti46

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Posted: 11 years ago

#449

THIS IS IMPORTANT-

friday 10:00 am..

new msg-

from tanu di-" shru update ho gya"

10:02 am-i rushed to open comp.

10:07- msg sended to-tanu di.

sender -shruti -i cant belive anon wrote this much..

10:08-new msg

from tanu di-its nt much

10:10- msg sended to-tanu di.

sender shruti-haan end main thoda aur hota 😉phir bhi itna likha kafi h..

10:12-new msg

from tanu di- haan so toh hai.

so moral of the story is anonji-me and tanu di will get never satisfy,no amount how much you write ,it will be short for us.:P

coming to comment*- 1st of all "this"

This chapter has mature content. Use your discretion.

i mean seriusly,this advice in your story,truly speaking i never even thought,u know wat i was thinking.."pata nai kya kya hoga chapter main😃

but i was l.itt.l.e disappointed.

well but how described yet maintained the beauty of love making was mesmerizing.couldnt belive she asked what are you doing,in whole story i never thought khushi a kid like thinks,but this chapter :P

vaise who says it requires graphic detail for such scenes..lines ,words you used was enough to imagine much more it said...pure seductive ,sensual lines,yet not crossing limits.

i have read in another story,about something :"post coitus glow"😛

but alas here also it was tiredness..

obviously khushi is arnav's personal ladoo. he is diabetic but he can have this ladoo.as this is special ladoo-

Body of a nymph, scent of roses, lips like two glasses of liquor, wet silk for a mouth, softness of cotton, warmth of cashmere and spirit of an eager lover. He might have just become a believer.

i am with khushi no on wants to drink such a kadwa tea,after such a AMAZING EXPERIENCE OF LIFE..

arnav can be flirty too...!!!!

but he is right,why tire your brain ,when already your body is tired to search ans for stupid question...neend aa gyi toh gyi...simple..!!!

Oh yes, she was sure that Love was just around the corner in her life now.

wat is this,some sought of signal for future,well yeah too many rosey -rosey things going on ,not that i m complaining,but surely time for some thorns too..

P.S-I dont know why after using "full stops"arnav belives them ,not before,i have seen many times..

for eg-

'WHAT?' she nearly shrieked as she turned in his hold. 'GOD NO Arnavji. I do not regret anything' she held his face in her hand and made his sullen eyes look into hers.

he didn't belived her here.

His stance remained rigid.

'I.do.not.regret.anything' she repeated looking into his eyes.

he belived her here...y??

P.S-2-what's she going to wear for the evening,as v know she cant SARI right nw so...😆,huh 1 disadvantage in front of so many advantages didnt matter...

Edited by shruti46 - 11 years ago

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Drkk

@Drkk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#450

wat a beautiful update
lovd it
u realy wrote a little bit of mature content
I thought u'l ditch us lyk last time
detaild review vl b given later
lovd d chapter

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