Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 24)

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Mani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#421

Originally posted by: shruti46
chap 38 got 986 likes till now,i guess it will also cross 1000 mark😊

yups that would be perfect anniversary gift if 1000 mark is crossed on 8th..

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taniks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#422

Its 20 days since last update

Pls update soon the wait is really

Difficult . the ending of last chapter

Is driving me mad and my imagination

Is working overtym wondering wots gonna

Happen.I have been checking this thread

Every hour this whole Week hoping for an update

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@Seahwak

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Posted: 11 years ago

#423

So...update must be next week...its weekend in Australia tomorrow...

So better luck for us next week.

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Arilip

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Posted: 11 years ago

#424

Aa jaane jaan ...aa mera yeh dimag dhuan dhuan...

Update ke like hai aas lagaey ...oh zaalim aa Jana ...

Aajaa re ab mera dil pukare...dab dab ke refresh button bhi hare...

Bad naam na ho ...intezar mera

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koisk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#425

Hope everything is fine at your end. Waiting eagerly to know what other changes will happen between ARSHI.

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A, Anon, Nony, Anamika :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#426

If you wish to read more of this story, please refer to this NOTE (it's on Thread 30 in case the link does not work).

If you want access to my blog (open for all as of now), please PM or Scrap me. You can also email me at updates.from.anonymous@gmail.com

Cheerz!

Edited by Anony_mous - 10 years ago

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--MISHTEE--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#427

awesome start for d update dear

i loved d way u described Arnav's need

nd Khushi's shyness beautifully 😳😳😳

though their lovemaking was explained

subtly it still managed to make me blush

to d roots while reading ☺️☺️☺️

nd i could not stop laughing imagning

d scene between buaji nd Khushi post

*ahem* moments 🤣😆😳

P.S. THIS IS D FIRST TIME I HAVE RESERVED D FIRST SPOT IN UR STORY HOPE I DID JUSTICE TO IT BY COMMENTING APPROPRIATELY SO AM ...😲

P.P.S. HOPE TO KNOW ABT WAT U FEEL ABT MY COMMENT IF POSSIBLE DO LET ME KNOW 😊

Edited by --MISHTEE-- - 11 years ago

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Anupama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#428

This had been such a big step , howmuch so ever it was high time they give in to the next level, other than that making love to each other , it was monumental for both of them as individuals as well as their relationship. It came out to me as very calm and subtle ofcourse. I have always found strength in their impact that is created by their actions, words and musings. It wasn't the same. Like Arnav s' afterthoughts in this very same chapter? It was perfect!! Or of Khushi s'.. Especiallythe one where she pictures her life now and later, it was so her. Loved that one too.

Though, I was hoping there would be something about her leg. She may not be insecure anymore if that is, but I saw her mental state regarding it at the airport after Shyam leaves.

It was the first time Arnavji made love to her. It definitely isn't something that she won't think about while they were at it or now after , she is sober.

"Oh yes, she was sure that Love was just around the corner in her life now. "

This contains so much hope that it is almost breaking my heart about the very opposite kind of feeling its giving me. Of hopes getting stashed.

And what did she mean by "This too?" What else? The very next moment she is frustrated Arnavji isn't doing anything apart from kissing her neck.

Its so good to read this now on his birthday. This day now means so much to him. That he took his first step towards her. It just had been his last birthday when he had let his guards crumble a little for the budding of a relationship that had been a unique friendship as he had not just seen but felt her smile, in the candle lights that were atop his birthday cake.

This one made me chuckle. 😆

"in his dreams and in that of others as well, she was his. "

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Mani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#429

Beautiful chapter...definitely worth the wait.
And finally they did That!!...i was dying out of curosity. I loved the way u described arnav's insight...thankfully you opened his much guarded skull, and khushi is so naive...seriously 'This too'...it was good that khushi made him undrstand that she did not regret anything or else his meloncholic mind would find more reasons to sink into rejection mode...and his teasing khushi regarding clothes was really good for a change.
Thanks for updating today...will not be active for this month now, xams u see.
And yes HAPPY BIRTHDAY MKM2 .

Edited by sarun22 - 11 years ago

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Srilatha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#430

So atlast they became wife and husband in all sense. Today Arnav marked Khushi as his. I think most of his insecurities must come to end. He once again confirmed that Khushi did not regret what happened in the afternoon. That should have brought some solace to his heart and mind, He did not notice but his heart has won over his mind in Khushi's case. He always followed his heart but sometimes his insecurities ruled him but his mind never ruled over his heart in Khushi's case.

I loved the flirty ASR he is really nice. Amazing update

Edited by Srilathalolla - 11 years ago