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javeria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

CONGRATULATIONS ON NEW THREAD 🥳

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Hello!

Due to asli duniya commitments, I will be inactive on the forum from July 2014 onwards.

I have moved all my stories (including this one) to an open blog, where everyone including silent readers are welcome. Since IF rules forbid me from posting the blog link here, I am posting it on my profile page instead.

You can still reach me by PM/scrap for a few more weeks, or on twitter @patronus31.

Thank you so very much for staying with me on this journey, and I do hope to see you on the blog!

Much love and best wishes,

Juhi.

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EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Hello!

Due to asli duniya commitments, I will be inactive on the forum from July 2014 onwards.

You can still reach me by PM/scrap for a few more weeks, or on twitter @patronus31.

Thank you so very much for staying with me on this journey, and I do hope to see you on the blog!

Much love and best wishes,

Juhi.

Edited by EXPELLIARMUS - 11 years ago

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Did u just rees for update 😲

Will d hand go inside d pants or it wil be a way to tease to us 🤔

Holy mangoes it was hot ☺️

OR should i say

ufff i was sweating badly 😆

~~Back to update~~

I was so badly waiting for dis update

Aman is a selfish man😡 how could he khushi for evrythng .. He cnt keep his company talks scrts nd balme oder for losing evrythng

But onethng happnd for good ..

Khushi saw some good things abt MR.Raizada😃😃

He cares for her like no one😳😳 not even khushi mom nd sis 👏

Gosh he undrstood in a stance dat she is upst nd smthng is botthering her😉

Nd den followeed d sanka devi mind

Hayyyee i soo lovd it wen she first tym allowd her desiree to think

He wasnt any less he kept in mind to nt let her mind get free so dat she thinks of dose ppl

Truely a jhappi wala update

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LooneyLuna

@LooneyLuna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Bhaag Ek

To quote Khushi:

"While I had been hoping for exactly this result, the speed of the unfolding events still astounds me."

This is how I feel about this update and story.

I love that there are no secrets, apart from maybe where arnav sees this relationship going, what lavanya is upto and who the hell is sheetal, a dog?! But I am loving all these secrets coming out like the nurturer, the OD episode. I also enjoy the secrets coming out casually instead of in the usual dramatized way. Its sooo much fun, and yet you can feel and understand the characters!

Then there is the speed with which the "pheelz" are moving ahead. HOLYMOTHEROFZIPPERS. I CANT EVEN. And I think you are KILLIN' (in the cool rad hipster way, not in the murder way) the first person narrative with things like this. I love just how aware Kay is of him, and obviously vice versa. And from the temperature on this screen, doesnt seem like Arnavji will have to wait long enough? Or will he?! Dont u dare save it for the epilogue like you saved the curse solution for the last story. I will have to ask for more clauses to be put in this 'challenge'.

Oh BTW NK seems like he is going to be interesting hereee. I love smart PA's that match ASR's wit. Its like sherlock and watson (joootis are going to be thrown at me). I cant wait to see more of him.

"Don't you get tired of all the innuendo?"

NO NO NO NO NO NO NON NO NO NO. So keep them cuming!

And they are moving to their shaaantivan?! SO EXCITED.

Except why is this Aman being such a jealous BF? Its fun to read nonetheless. Love the twists in characters heer!

And BioSys isn't owned by Arnav is it?

UPDATE SOON.

Damn u between the parts wale cliffs.

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THIS WAS REAL?!

Or WAS I DREAMING?!

She just asked THAT?!

This chapteeer.

I have to read 69times, get thanda pani and than comment.

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Bhaaag Do And All the Other Jazz I missed! 😃

ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA is one bold man.

His story was so intriguing, how he reached to the position he is today, in his typical ASR way.

And the security guard image just makes me think of a buff rugby player!

He seems so open and ok with the person he is, no insecurities as such. So self-assured. I mean if he wasn't he wouldn't just tell khushi why he hates being "Chote'd" or that his mum had an OD episode.

And whats more! He is so open about the fact that he has HOTs for her! There are the open insinuations, the being kissed and kissing right back, the pants and the zips.

So yes he is one bold man.

OH AND THE CHALLENGES ARE HERE. I forgot to say that in part 1. I love it, he knows exactly how to wind her up!

Wait Aman didn't know about her married to a millionaire status yesterday, no? To aaj who told him?! And BioSYS kiski company hai bhai? I was looking forward to more aman and wondering if he had a crush on khushi and stuff. Par yeh toh daal me kuch kaala hai! Inbhestigation kari ka padiii! I dont know why I suspect NK. And why the eff do I blatantly trust his "eyes clear of deceit"?! And I am even thinking Shyam has something to do. WHAT IS WRONG WITH ME. This is your fault expel, itni mysteries ki aadat daal di hai, ki cant just take things for face value anymore!

Khushi's world is slowly falling apart, or rather she was just having one of those days of insecurities perhaps? I loved reading about it. Dont judge me! Its nice to know she is human tooo...and SELFISH. Oh and what better selfishness than the one that starts in the BEDROOM?? 😉

So it seems Arnav is one of those genies, or like a lottery price. Gives you every single thing you want, but doesnt want anything in return. He is super considerate and not even an emotionally closed off person or anything. IS HE FOR REAL?!?! Is this too good to be true? Sure feels like it.

CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE!

ALSO I didnt talk about the kiss, because ovaries haven't RECOVERED at all.

And Sheetal. Cant wait to meet her.

but mostly for the "PARTY" and for them to hit second base, at least!!!!

HURRY UP. And get that blog running already!!

One last time.

Jphanki4life!

Luna

Edited by LooneyLuna - 11 years ago

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Is 'res' considered spamming please tell me ?

Or should I say I am looking forward to Khushi

And Arnav enjoying the benefits of their Shaadi

Or should I write a spell to keep away jealousy ?

For those people reporting threads with envy

Maybe they have in their hands time plenty ?

We have all assembled here so very eagerly

To read about passion & the sizzling chemistry

Between Khushi and her husband so sexy

Written brilliantly this very witty love story

Juhi, it's no wonder you have people who are envious of you..have you read your own stories...we all knew what to expect but you have the ability of turning a simple scene and situation, a conversation between two people so interesting, intriguing and delicious...

Right from him apologising about the outburst ..I like that he wants to explain his behaviour, I like that he understands her, he wants her to be happy,...he does care for her as much as possible within the limitations and boundaries of their marriage which as times feels invisible and it requires one of them to say something to make them realise...

I love that this is her point of view and she is a blushing bride but bold enough to admit to herself that she desires him and he makes her feel something sexually that she is surprised at feeling and having for him.

I loved the part where even though there is so much space between them physically she feels the proximity ...her dilemma about coming across as a wife, conscious of being too caring and concerned I loved how she understands the way he feels about wanting to be the one to look after and he understands her need to feel concern for others. The sensitivity, wit and humour as always brilliant.

I think NK is going to play an important role, he seems to respect her and now that they have had this talk and in the future when he sees and observes the role she will play and how her being affects him...

The part where she is undressing him, and he loving her being uncomfortable and teasing her and she rising to the occasion without letting him get the pleasure of letting him know what she is feeling ...it was so sensual, sexy and sweet..., the touching and the surprise of seeing his aroused condition her embarrassment and her fantasising leaving them both unable to sleep...and his rather cheeky question the next morning unsettling her further...loved it.

Am sure Arnav has something to do with the entire fiasco at work with Aman...now for the next part you have to read my mind which will tell you I am waiting for the next part as I am not meant to ask you for an update...ha ha !

Sami: Banner looks perfect! Festive and fitting so well!

Disclaimer...not to be quoted, appreciated or commented on...😉

Edited by vandana.sagar - 11 years ago

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Skyfall

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Congrats on the new thread! 😃

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

J, I know that I sound like a broken record here even as I say this I know that I am being repetitive but what to do woman, you do kinda rock and you show this time and time again not only with that wonderful attitude of yours towards everything but with your brilliant writing too! (Clarification for the reporters of Shaadi thread 2: This ain't Spam this is my opinion about the writer of this story, however you may report this if your insecurity doesn't allow you to accept anyone else being praised because quite frankly if you are here I am certain you have no issues navigating your way to the updates!)

Now that I am done gushing about you let me talk about the chapter then! Did I LOVE this first part of Chapter 3 or did I LOVE it?!

Loved the way Arnav apologized for snapping at Khushi earlier for reminding her that their marriage is a facade, he had a reason for his rude behaviour and he did not hesitate to reveal that reason. He doesn't like people fussing about him and Khushi analysed his reason for him without any hesitation too. What struck me was Arnav's openness and honestly! It is quite clear that he thinks the world of Khushi and keep his OTT flirting (which is kind of endearing anyway) aside it is quite obvious that he genuinely cares for Khushi. He has a fairly good idea about the kind of person Khushi is specially when he quite casually told her that he knows it is in her nature to be concerned for people showing us that he knows Khushi is a genuine and caring soul! And I couldn't be anymore delighted with this little revelation!

Khushi's predicament at undressing her handsome husband was hilariously entertaining, even I was blushing on Khushi's behalf! Only you can make this awkward scene incredibly sensual, sexy and amusing at the same time. You had me feeling sorry for Khushi because a certain Raizada was most certainly enjoying himself at her expense. The teasing the morning after was even worse, Arnav is aware of Khushi's lack of experience and the effect he has on her and he is making full use of it and it makes for quite a pleasurable reading experience! :D The attraction and chemistry between them in this FF is just extra ordinary Mademoiselle!👏

Now on to the other characters, just what are these guys up to?! While NK's curiousity is quite harmless I couldn't shake the unpleasant feeling particularly when he knew about their situation and he is the one who drew the contract. I am sure I will change my mind about him because I can never imagine NK playing a negative character, he is just too sweet for that! Another surprise is Aman and his attitude towards Khushi who was blissfully unaware of any development that took place for Aman and his company. ( Why do I get the feeling that Arnav is somehow responsible for Aman losing his contract.) I just can't wait to read part 2 now and find out for myself!

Oh and did I ever tell you how great it is that you are doing the narration from Khushi's perspective! It just leaves no room for any kind of confusion about where she stands, how she feels about the situation and everyone around her. The only thing that remains a bit of a mystery is Arnav's stance on Khushi and this Shaadi and whether he would want to keep Khushi by his side on a more permanent basis rather than merely the end of the contract!

Fine, Fine I know that it is only chapter 3 & I am getting ahead of myself here so I will Zip it now and wait for part two!

PS. Beautiful Banner Sami! ( Quite appropriate for the FF in question I might add!)

Part 2 RES

*Gasps Oh J I can't think beyond that wonderfully sensual kiss that you had us all witness! Ok Ok I will get my mind out of the gutter and tell you this, you took me by surprise there! I never knew the Khushi in this FF had in her to go to the "womanizing playboy" as per her initial assessment of his character and ask for a kiss. At the same time I suppose we owe it to the events that led up to the kiss, that is Khushi's husband of convenience being the only person in her life who bothered to see how she feels, who cared enough to sense her unsettled demeanour and who helped her get out of her misery in his own way by asking her to do mundane things for him, things that he or even the house help was capable of doing for him. I am also relieved to know that Arnav didn't have anything to do with Aman losing his contract or did he hm?! At least his outrage at Aman's attitude said as much and his promise that he wouldn't interfere in her professional life because I was sure this would create just a little conflict between this newly married couple.

It was quite sad to see Aman and her own family dismiss her, for her sister Payal to not even talk to her about her engagement something that happened all thank to Khushi's marriage. At the same time, it was quite heart warming to see Arnav being concerned for her and for Khushi to notice this was the icing on the already delicious cake. This relationship is evolving from a meaningless contract into a beautiful and caring one! And I can't help but gush about the beauty of the moments you created between Arnav and Khushi, with Khushi innocently asking for a kiss and Arnav showing her how it is done not so innocently yet quite flirtatiously dismissing her for her own good at the end of that kiss. You had me in splits with his suggestive remark at the end telling Khushi that she wasn't ready just yet! This bold Arnav is surely giving everyone the Dhaks Dhaks! *sighs ( I am not going to tell you that I cannot wait for Chapter four and to update soon because you know that already, yeah?! 😉)

Now on to your note, J I am not going to beat around to bush and tell you exactly how I feel! I am a little disheartened that petty things such as members' posts of "update soon" and your own open and friendly relationship with your readers is forcing you to move your work from the forum, kind of making those insecure reporters who obviously couldn't handle the love that you get for your work have a little win. At the same time I totally understand where you are coming from and the last thing I want for you is to stress about what may and might not constitute as Spam and report your readers for showing interest and curiosity for your stories! The demands of DT is unreasonable here and so I support your decision whole-heartedly because as a reader of your work I will follow you wherever you go. I admire your concern for your readers and the fact that you are moving your work to an open blog and not a restricted one further shows your super awesome attitude something that attracted me to your work in the first place. You are also giving your readers the option to discuss the story in turn giving them freedom of speech which is what the forums are for anyway, for people to be able to express themselves anyway they want to without being bound by the rules that even stop them from saying congratulations to the writers for their achievement! *sighs I won't open the can of worms that has bugged me lately but thank you and let you know that you have my full support as you do of all your readers! <3

Edited by Arshix144 - 11 years ago

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

sorry for delay
wow she sure got him there
she was spot on in her analysis of him
though bet he is will be thinking she sure has been observing me well
oh dear that why he had reacted about the meds so bad
well cant say i blame him
not something you can get over knowing that your mother died due to those
ahh so things worked out with payash did it
and pretty quickly too
arnie was spot on there wasnt he
ahhh helping him undress
this couldnt have been easy for either
well the shirt was easy enough
but the pant not so easy
especially the zip man
and boy was he aroused or what
hmmm things were getting heated there man
phew that was such close encounter for them both
but arnie sure was enjoying that werent he
he cant help but tease her can he the next morning
so they are moving to their new house cool
whats with nk i wonder
ahhh so he is just curious about her
well lets hope no animosity there
hmmm she is fired
what the poor thing right

Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#60

sorry will be delayed a bit this one
as if she hasnt enough to worry about man
what with arnie and her
the growing sexual tension and now this
its just not her day is it
oh dear that wasnt very pleasant
but then aman anger was justified as he has lost a lot
poor aman right
so her wedding is fixed
but she is right in feeling the way she did
they didnt even ask if she can make it
did she actually matter to her family
i have doubts what with payal being the way she was when she had that argument with khushi
calling her selfish and all
whats with this sheetal lady oh who cares she has enough problems as it is
hmmm seems he knows her better than her own mother but at least someone could see through to her thats not bad
glad she could unburden herslef with him
and him being mad on her behalf at her boss sure was cute
well can ya blame her for being suspicious of him
i like it how she just asks him out right if he did have something to do with this
well they are open about things aint they
loved him for making her being distracted from her sad thought
and loved that line of them walking together
she sure realised it how he tried to distract her thoughts bless
aww she is gonna be selfish hey nothing wrong in that
wait he didnt need her help did he not really he is bad i tell ya
she wants a kiss and he said to take it oh my this just got fun
she does kiss him but wants him to kiss her back
and well once he takes over that was wow for sure
blooming heck that was something
explosive hell yes and sizzling and what not
not enough words to explain their chemistry
sheesh wasnt easy for him to stop and her to not think about this
that was wow
bless loved this new start of theirs
cheers for pm
what the this is new
curses man but then what can you do dear
i am fine with blog
but will put comments here too if you are okay with that

Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago