Arshi TS - JUSTICE To His SINS #completed#

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moonlight2630

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Very emotional and heart touch SS fabulous try I like it.

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chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

that was heart breaking
not for him but those two women
so madhu did know of it
she heard her mother talks
well what else could she do but hate her father
due to whom her mother lost so much
i think that was fitting justice
he cant be forgiven for what he did
and she got love before dying
after all she lost her baby
what was the point in living
and the raizadas they were worse off than arnav
how could they do this to the poor girl
so all in all they got justice
and two innocent souls got free from devil clutches
cheers for pm

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priya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

amazing so heart touching story

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Happytwinkle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

superb one

Arnav deserves this punishment

its very painful for khushi and madhu

thanks for the pm

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Jinro Soju

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

actully its very emotional

thts y i couldnt control myself

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Sanaparveen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

lovely dude
outstanding
mind blowing
it was heart touching one

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yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Beautiful and touching story...thanks for the PM

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pia surve

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

u wrote beautifully dear. sometimes sad ending r much better dan happy ending. agar tum is story ko happy ending deti to vo khushi ki insult hoti. jo dard usne 23 years tak sahha use happy ending justice nhi kar pati. awsm writing.