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aquagal

@aquagal

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#861

Loved it. It was so adorable without rushing in.I liked the pace with which it's going - gentle.
Shyam's conversation with Arnav was needed and I liked how it played out. Shyam's concerns were genuine and natural. I liked how he eventually gave chance to Arnav and later realised that his decision was right. The post concert conversation was good too with both of them acknowledging each other as the one present in their respective sister's life for now.
Buaji is as usual cute and Shashi is very understanding.

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Swathi/Ammu

@Swathiarshi

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#862

A nice start for their realtionship😊! Loved the date. n loving ur shyamji😆!!! thnx for the PM!! Lovely update.

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ArshiAsya

@Alai123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#863

Awesome update

The first date of Arshi was a great start for their relationship hopefully Khushi would be more comfortable towards Arnav in the future.

Thanks for the pm😉

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#864

Amazing update...

A lovely date for Arshi...

loved the update 😊

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#865

Nice concert date. I can't wait for more of these dates between Khushi and Arnav.

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#866

I loved it Viji...you made my evening...I could say that honestly...your update left me smiling...each and every scene...even the small bits you write to explain each feeling, expression, confusion, anticipation...was beautiful to read and visualise in mind...when I read Hauz Khas village that too Nivedayam...I was like...arreee wahhh!! Good going...enjoying your story...

first date...I wish for such a lovely evening now...where is my Arnav???

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#867

simply awesome date it was.. enjoyed it like arnav-khushi.. beautiful update.. concerns of brothers for the welfare of their sisters plays such a pivotal role here.. both arnav-shyam are way so sweet brothers and lovers.. everything in this chapter was simply awesome.. loved it.. 😃

thanks for pm 😊

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#868

loved Shyam's overwhelming concern for his sister... loved his conversation with Arnav... both of the are mature adults, and they understand each other's pov... its awesome... loved it... also ArShi moments... music... their dinner date... everything of it... beautifully written Di... with both Shashi & Buaji approving the progress in their children's lives, indeed good times are here... waiting for more...

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#869

Another awesome update.

Loved the way Arnav and Shyam's relationship and friendship is growing. Shyam who was initially hesitant to send Khushi with Arnav, even texted the name of the restaurant to take her to and is open about the development of a long relationship between them.

When two normal people fall in love, its eyes which do most of the talking. here since Khushi cant see, loved the way Arnav is expressing his feelings by using touch like holding hands or even feeding each other the dosa.

So what happened to Payal and Akash?? Has he forgotten her?