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Skiran

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Arnav coming down to Shyam's office and talking to him about date with Khushi is a simple gesture showing how much he values Khushi's brother. Shyam letting go of his fears after that is natural.
The date is too good, dosa scene is awesome

Superb update 👏 Loved it Uthra 🤗

Congratulations Latha and family :)

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luvbug

@luvbug

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Posted: 11 years ago

#842

OMG tht was such a wonderful update...simply awesome... will come bk later to comment in detail :)

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Moumita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#843

A beautiful chapter...

I just love cool Papa Shashi here.

The conversation between two brothers and lovers Shyam and Arnav before the concert and after the concert, both were too good and mature...

The date was too good and I was just visualizing the Khushi and Arnav and their dinner all along.. it was just so dreamy and fun.

Loved it and waiting for the next one eagerly.

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Shilpi

@shils28

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Posted: 11 years ago

#844

Very beautiful update!

I loved it 😊

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madhu1210

@madhu1210

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Posted: 11 years ago

#845

marvellous, beautiful powerful and PERFECT TO THE T update!!

the way Arnav came to meet Shyam and their discussion speaks how strong Arnav's character is..

Arnav is so brilliant the way Arnav said to shyam - "di found u less cheerful when u talked to her..

afterall he is very successful biz owner😃

The DATE was super duper hit...Music is bringing 2 soul together😳..

like the way Khushi asked Arnav the way he planned everything and as always flatten by his reply..

the way Shyam message Arnav about the south indian rest. awesome..

loved every single bit of Arshi time together and the way they talked..

the way Khushi told him to continue singing..

Again brillian Arnav fixed next date on coming friday😃😳

finally the way Shyam Arnav felt trust each other for their sis...

eagerly waiting

thanks for the wonderful update

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manusmithcl

@manusmithcl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#846

Exceptional. ..worth the wait..thanks for such a wonderful update. You made my day...

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Hetal

@Divyahet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#847

Direct from the cloud nine...res.

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Shyam's thoughts about his chutaki n his worries for her..

Arnav's move to know the reason of Shyam aloofness while talking to Anjali,

Beautiful conversation between two brothers and at the same time lovers😳 Best part.👏👏

Arnav's hesitations,his thoughtfulness for Khushi n their chit chat...lovely parts.

Their first date,

Arnav's maturity n Khushi trust on him,

Loved the way Shyam messaged him about her favourite place where they can have their dinner..😳

But the best part of this update when Shashi and his jiji were talking about the children 😛

Now the journey of two souls is going to start,

One is still confused..

And the other is ...well very much aware of his feelings...

Take your time my Appu ,

Thank you so much dear for the dedication,

Congratulations Latha,

May God bless you n your little one.

Appu I love you too.

Take care of yourself.

Thanks for the pm in advance.

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spanny93

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Posted: 11 years ago

#848

wonderful update... the way Arnav took care of Kushi and made her comfortable is great... their first date is awesome... now that shyam also understood Arnav and believed that he will never hurt Kushi, we can expect complete support from his side...

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

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Posted: 11 years ago

#849

U, kya bolu up I am grinning like there is no tomorrow ek baar phir.

It is such an absolute pleasure to read chapters of this story, conversations just flow and things happen so beautifully! The conversations are always handled in the best way ever, take Shyam and Arnav's interaction for instance. You had Arnav approach Shyam to make sure he is completely comfortable with him dating his Chutki, such a gentleman. Then the understanding that formed so easily between the two because they are both equally intelligent and mature about everything was perfecto. Love the realness and the sensibility that you add to every single interaction in these udpates.

I don't know what were you so apprehensive about U? The date was so darn adorable. The seatbelt wala dhaks dhaks for Khushi, the part where Arnav decides to feed himself from Khushi's hand and feeding her respectively, Arnav kissing Khushi's hand in the end and scoring himself a second date was cuteness all around. But what I loved the most about this date was the way Arnav removed Khushi's insecurity about herself and her disability, the way he overcame with emotion to assure her and make her feel special made me all emotional. Khushi's question about whether he was embarrassed about being seen with her was such an emotional moment as well showing Khushi's low self esteem, but with Arnav's sweet gesture you have us convinced that he will remove every insecurity of hers by showering her with loads of love and affection.

Loved Arnav and Shyam's conversation in the end just as much as I liked their first round of one on one. Even the way Shaym's text about getting Arnav to take Khushi for dinner was quite an unexpected and pleasant moment, specially when you described Arnav's reaction to the text too. I guess this chapter formed the beginning of a strong bond of mutual respect and trust between Arnav and Shyam.

Bring on more whenever you can, U! ;=)🤗