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koisk

@koisk

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#741

Welcome back and love the update.

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Nandz

@Nandz

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#742

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A fabulous update after a long break uthra!!!
Its so good to see arnav making an effort to rebulid his relationship with akash! Be it spending some time together or calling each other by their childhood names! Akash on the other hand is making even more efforts to bring arnav n khushi together! So sweet he got tickets for both of them!!
The whole scene where the three siblings were sitting n chatting, gossiping and revealing secrets simply warmed my heart! Such scenes depict how strong n deep their bonding is!!
So arnav finally asked khushi out!! High time! But why is shashi apprehensive about sending his daughter with arnav? Is it his concerns as a father or more given khushi's condition or he isnt sure about Arnav's motives? N y did he stop shyam from accompanying khushi? What did he want to find out?
Anyway waiting to see how their date finally turns out!!
Wonderful update U!!
Sorry for the late reply!

Edited by Nandz - 11 years ago

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vibha92

@vibha92

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#743

lovely update...

d bonding between akash n arnav is fab...

finally arnav asked her out!!...well nt litrally!!...bt still...😳

n she wants to go with him!!...aww...

love d d anji-arnav- akash scene...

nw waiting for shyam's reaction...

thnx for d pm...😃

Edited by nirmal1992 - 11 years ago

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arnshi

@arnshi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#744

welcome back...lovely update...its such a nice story...

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#745

OMG tht was such a beautiful chapter :D

loved it to the core... oh SHashi knows abt khushi n shyam...such an understanding father :D

oh Akash u r just too good..loved the moment btw the siblings :D

oh yes... n welcome back!!!

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Tapdance

@Tapdance

Rocker

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#746

Welcome back and a very Happy anniversary to you!

So the families are being made aware towards all that's hapenning..

Its definitely their first date no matter what Khushi says!

Arnav will surely have a lot up his sleeve:D

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Skiran

@Skiran

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#747

Res 😳

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First of all I am sorry for the delay.
Happy birthday Mini 🤗 and Happy Anniversary Uthra 🤗

Wonderful Update Uthra ⭐️

Anjali revealing her relationship with Shyam to Arnav & Akash and their reaction to it is worth a watch. Loved the siblings bond. Akash's easy going attitude is awesome.

My favorite part is the last scene where Khushi comes to Shashi and asks him if she can go with Arnav to the music concert.

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#748

My Appu welcome back.

Wish you a very Happy Anniversary ...once again.

Well I didn't edit my comment on chapter 8 but I will ...

Coming to this update...

As usual very beautifully written..

I always admire Arnav n Khushi's characters but this Arnav n Khushi are just cute.

Loved the way Arnav tries to be normal with his Akki..

Loved the conversation between brothers but most interesting parts of this update were

1) Shashi n Shyam's conversation ...

2) the chit chat between the Raizada siblings.

The last part of this update was just awesome.

Lots of love n hugs.

Take care my Appu.

Ek kissu toh Banting haina !!!!!!

Thanks for the pm in Advance.

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#749

Overwhelmed and Happy Anniversary!🤗

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Did I mention how much I missed this story and your updates and you??! I think I might have but it doesn't hurt to repeat myself now does it? Can I just also tell you how overwhelmed and choked up I was seeing your dedication and kind posts everywhere?!

Alright alright I will keep the mush to myself and talk about the update! This story is refreshing you know, the characters are real and mature, things progress naturally and how they should, in the world of fanfiction particularly here in IF there are very few stories with the kind of sensibility and treatment you are giving this story and my hat is off to you woman because this naturalness and maturity is becoming more and more rare by the minute. I simply love this Arnav ok maybe initially his temper got the better of him but he regretted his treatment of Khushi straight away and is yet to forget his folly even when it has been long forgotten and forgiven. Even when he has more than made up for what he did and that is what makes him even more likable.

I think I have said this to you before but I will say it again, I love all the characters here and the equations you have built. For instance, I loved the way Arnav and Akash were bonding again over bowling. I couldn't help but smile at the way Akash managed to get Arnav to fess up about Khushi. Him buying the tickets to the concert for them was just the sweetest gesture ever. Akash and Anjali have both noticed the positive impact Khushi has had on their Nannav and so they are encouraging this match which is again positively refreshing! On the other side, you are actually making me like Shyam heaps! His protective brother stance is too good, I can't help but respect the guy and appreciate him for looking out for his sister. His reaction to Khushi going to a concert with Arnav was priceless!! Shahshi on the other hand needed to make sure his daughter is completely comfortable with going with Arnav and he also wanted to emphasise the fact that he will let Khushi make her own decisions and let her follow her heart.

The whole Khushi asking her family before agreeing to accompany Arnav on their "date" was so endearing, loved it! As always I loved everything U, bring on more whenever you can!

Edited by Arshix144 - 11 years ago