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arshifan91

@arshifan91

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#421

First a big sorry for not commenting on the chapters on time inspite of me getting constant PMs😕 U know the reason for it though its not a great excuse

And thank u so much for dedicating a chapter to me inspite of my irregularities 😳🤗 U are a darling❤️

Now moving on to my comments :

The concept u have introduced here in this story is a relatively new one , atleast according to me. With the title u misled me thinking that it was going to be some sort of repentance of Arnav and seeking redemption and forgiveness from Khushi for his deeds. But alas , this is an alternate universe story !!😆 I have too many words to say but thought i can say it through some quotes this time instead of my words😳. So here it is :

Chapter 1 : I connect this chapter to the anger of a person and its even more lethal if the anger in person is our deathly ASR

Here are some quotes :

And this is what i felt about your Khushi

By the way this is my 200th post !! Yipee🥳

I am really happy in me making it for u by commenting on this beautiful story 😃

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arshifan91

@arshifan91

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#422

Chapter 2 :

The relationship between Shyam and Khushi is very endearing . And Shyam as a positive character is really a welcoming change 😆

In this chapter , i relate the attributes of guilt and realizing ones mistake. So here are some quotes:

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arshifan91

@arshifan91

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#423

Chapter 3 :

In this chapter i find the attributes of apologizing and forgiveness . I also love the blossoming love by the way 😛😉

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arshifan91

@arshifan91

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#424

Chapter 4 :

The brother sister conversation was so cute and beautiful 😊. I enjoyed reading the unknown feelings and introspection by Anjali , the cute cat fights between Akash and Arnav , anjali catching Arnav off guard, Lavanya - NK angle . shrewd manipulations by Anjali and Arnav in their own ways and at last the Dhak dhaks😉

In this chapter a major attribute i found was the spark of jealousy and i had a wide grin when i found that green monster on Arnav 😛

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arshifan91

@arshifan91

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#425

Chapter 5 :

This update mainly focused on the blossoming relationship between Arnav - Khushi and Anjali - Shyam and the unknown feelings in their hearts which they are blissfully unaware of and struggling to find a coherent answer for the turmoil of emotions felt by them !!

I felt this is what Arnav felt about his feelings towards Khushi 😳

I am now curious to know who is that person !!😲 My guess is Akash giving a tough time to his bro 😆

Thats it from me !!

PS: Sorry for commenting late Hope atleast now u know that i am really interested in this piece and doesnt lack enthusiasm 😕

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#426

Amazing FF...

Loved the concept... Khushi is blind but the way she is handling everything is really inspirational...

Loved it...

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Aaradhaya1688

@aaradhaya1688

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#427

Loved it
thanks for d pm

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rdforfun

@rdforfun

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#428

This is an ff I am looking forward every day

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#429

uthra, when can I expect an update of this SS, dear

iam addicted to this SS - I even dream about this story

waiting eagerly for an update

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#430

Everyone is in this strange phase now especially Arnav who doesn't know what he truly is feeling or actually why he is feeling for a girl he hardly knows.
Shyam has come to the conclusion that he wants to give this thing between him and anjali a chance. That's a positive progress. I love the fact that they can easily communicate unlike their siblings who lose their sense when they are in contact with each other. 😆
Akash is having a good time.
I guess its NK at the end. I hope he doesn't spoil Arnav's mood much. We know from the fact that he felt something for Lavanya that he isn't interested in Khushi romantically but is protective of her. But now Arnav doesn't know it, does he? 😉

PS: That bit where he was talkign to himself saying Yes, she is Lisa and would say "Why not Arnie!!" was too funny. 😆