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Felt so incomplete...😲 No dedication to me??? Haaw😲
Jokes apart, it was superb, I already told you I ' liked' it and since that did not go down to well here goes...
Loved the way Payal comes into the story, her introduction was so natural and seamless, the way she was teasing the siblings for their concern for each other and their separation anxiety ...making fun of the advice and their warnings to each other, don't talk to strangers, take the driver, call me every 30 mins, don't talk and drive...ha ha ...!
Khushi knows that her siblings love her and appreciates them standing in support of them, their sacrifices and I loved how Payal for all her teasing makes it very clear to Khushi that they have made no sacrifices...and whatever decisions they have taken on their life has been a personal choice. I loved this Paayal.
Loved how Anjali is introspecting about her feelings and why knowing Shyam was not being able to make it to her office was bothering her so much...and then turning the whole thing around once she realises that she might have said too much to her smart shaatir dimag brother..
Loved the lunch, between the two, you wrote it to well, I felt I was there...
And she twists everything in a manner which gets her off the hook and leaves her wondering about Arnav...smart work Anjali.
Loved how NK makes his entry too...it was superb, again loved his bond with the family and specially with K.
Your introduction of Aakash and his character, his difference in personality to Arnav but the respect that Arnav has for him but tries to deny it and pretends that he finds him rather laid back and lacking. Loved how Akaash says that Anjali is becoming like Arnav...ha ha ...
Loved the way Anjali gets the number out of NK, while I loved that feeling that Arnav was going through while figuring out NK and K's relationship.
Lavanya and NK, that was nicely done too...looking forward to their relationship...
Loved how Anjali calls Khushi from Arnav's phone, subtle and smart...and then that the cliffhanger you left us at...now I am having sleepless nights, wondering what they talk about...his deep husky voice ringing in my ears...
I love the way the story is going and you are doing a fabulous job...
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