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Amita2014

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Posted: 11 years ago

#281

Loved the update!!!!!!!!!!
Anjali playing Cupid 😊

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mayurisb80

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Posted: 11 years ago

#282

why did u stop there ...i wanted to know what our dera Chotte would speak to our dear Kushi...lovely chapter...

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msmarple

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Posted: 11 years ago

#283

Loved the update! Anjali has feelings for Shyam, La and NK have met. Akash and Payal shall hopefully meet soon and Arnav is going to have a phone conversation with Khushi...waiting eagerly for that.

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Arilip

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Posted: 11 years ago

#284

Nice portrayal of all the characters...

Waiting for arhi convo😃

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shiv456

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Posted: 11 years ago

#285

superb and fantastic update can't wait

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koisk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#286

After all that you ended the update there nooo...

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palakbitiya

@palakbitiya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#287

Luvd the story, Bookmarking ...will be back with comments

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sman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#288

I am loving this jealous Arnav and naughty Anjali..Akash seems to be cool..waiting for their phone conversation eagerly. :)

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mrin0709

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Posted: 11 years ago

#289

Amazing chapter.. Everyone is noticing the changes in Arnavs behaviour..

NK and La - lovely!!!!

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Arshix144

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Posted: 11 years ago

#290

U, what an absolutely pleasant chapter!

This chapter was all about introducing new characters, when I saw the very lovely banner I guessed that perhaps we will get to know quite a bunch of them in this chapter! But the way you quite naturally introduced them into the story, left me all awestruck. For instance, the way Payal and NK were introduced revealed the kind of relationship they share with the Gupta siblings as well as the role they played in their lives. Same goes for Akash and Nani's entry in the Raizada clan. I must admit in the past I haven't been too fond of other characters taking up Arnav and Khushi lime light so much but in this chapter I actually loved all the characters so kudos mademoiselle.

The initial sparks of the connection between NK and Lavanya is already apparent, Anjali is well and truly flsustered and let's just say perhaps inlove with Shyam already! On the other hand, Arnav is quite obviously showing signs of possessiveness already. It was quite amusing to see him all affected by NK's narration of his closeness with K aka Khushi. Your narration of how Payal and Khushi became friends definitely struck a cord with me. It was beautiful, making Payal a standout character amongst the side characters. Everything that transpired in this chapter was thoroughly enjoyable and amusing, loved your dialogues throughout... Bas! Loved the clever way Anjali got Khushi's number and then for Arnav to actually be after Khushi's number under the pretext of getting Shyam's number was again hilarious. Even the way the chapter ended left me smiling from ear to ear particularly with Anjali's antics about her chote wanting to speak to Khushi. I somehow can't imagine Arnav asking his sister that he wants to speak to Khushi 😆, so I cannot wait to see what happens afterwards. What will Arnav and Khushi talk about eh?! Can you like bring on the next chapter, right now??! I want to read more!!!! :P