Towards the Edge - Thread 2/ Chapter 30/ Page 86 **29/7 - Page 17

hey, i recently came across your story and read it in one go... very interesting concept... kept me on the edge all the time :) ... really loved it please pm me when u update next.

Wow great story please update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
thanks for sharing your story with us

mindblowing update

You write such intense stuff, its sometimes difficult to comprehend the layers of mystery & intent behind the characters. To come out with suggestions in comments is beyond my capabilities currently. Pl let me still decipher & enjoy your concept..the traditional way.

i remember in one of ur chapters u said Shyam is Rana's son , i thought the same when i read the last update... but this update cleared the misunderstandig that shyam is an orphan... Shyam & Anjali are in a messed up relationship ... it is very difficult to deal with ur partner's / lover's ex , knowingly / unknowingly we would feel jealous ...Arnav & khushi's relationship is yet to blossom , i hope the jealousy doesn't nip it when it is still budding...

nice update
thank god shyam and Anjali are not siblings
i think rana didn't told the secret of shyam because he wants the property of gupta's

Thank u for clearing Shyam's mystery! I knew there has to be twist here.
Shyam is scared of Rana and does not wish to follow him. Beautiful!
And his love for Arnav a d Anjali will help in future.
Loved the chapter.
Khushi was pretty direct... But I do not a gap of 15 days before seeing them together.
U need to bring some Arshi before that:)

abt Arnav-Khushi's fight: yeh kya hua? kyu hua? kaise hua!!!😆
in most stories, Khushi is jealous possessive n unreasonable whm it comes to Arnav. but she never admits it. it was refreashing to read Khushi admitting this😆... i loved their fight!😈

initially i also thought Rana is Shyam's father but whn u paired him wid Anjali, i knew its not possible. still it was a BIG dhamaka! so that means Anjali is Arnav's sister...no Chote-Di business, another refreshing change.

The dog part was scary. i feel sry for Shyam n i think for Sheetal too. both r tied to a man like Rana. though Sheetal loves Shyam, she could never show her motherly affection. frm the last Rana-Sheetal convo n this chap, i figured out that Rana is responsible for that. in a way she was trying to protect him frm Rana.
its kinda hard for me to believe that Sashi doesnt know anythjng abt Shyam's involvement wid Rana or that Sheetal is meeting him or the fact that Rana doesnt know anything abt Arnav! i have a feeling he has some plan for him too😈

btw ll we get a kissi of Arnav-Khushi in next chap☺️

ps. i miss Payal.
pps. where is Akash...last time he was doing ku-chi-ku wid Sheetal...naughty Akash bituwa.😆
ppps.make me n Aman the third couple😉

abt the note: make Shyam-Anjali the second lead pair. i love to read abt them.