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zainza

@zainza

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#181

I came to the chapter a few times but didn't get to read it in peace and your work is something where I don't want to just skim through, but read in leisure and derive maximum joy.

This chapter was a beautiful piece Camlin. I'm enthralled by the way you have gone into depth with each of your characters. From the very beginning I could not bring myself to hate Shyam, no matter how dark he was portrayed. I agree that he is still a flawed character but then I never came to your story with the expectation to read about normal cliched stuff. Your characters have an altogether different, captivating feel. I think I cannot describe enough but with each of your characters I want to delve further, know them better, unearth their secrets bit by bit.

I can't tell you how glad I am that Anjali and Shyam are not biological siblings, because the chemistry you've created for them is awesome.

And, please Camlin you don't need to justify your characters at all, continue with your own flow, dear, the way you envisioned them. I'm thoroughly enjoying this maze you've created.

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napk

@napk

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Oh how they messed up Shyam... poor thing... no love from anyone and not knowing that he is an orphan and thinking that his family never cared for him. Its sad to know the way he let his anger rule him... its really scary but couldn't control... Anjali is the right medicine... she is also a broken soul... these are connected to Rana in some way or the other and he has messed up their lives... as much as Shyam wants to eliminate shashi's daughter... He wants Anjali forever... such a messed up life where you know what you want but you can't have it in the open and freely... I feel for these two... I sure want their story to progress and have a happy ending...

Rana - this guy is creepy and dangerous... I don't care about his circumstances but he sure has become very dangerous... everyone has a soft side and his is Sheetal... but he sure thinks about himself as well...to wait 18 yrs and come back to strike he definitely has a solid plan... one revelation about who khushi is end of story... that girl has a lot of enemies and she has never met them...

Arnav-Khushi: Arnav did overlook about informing Khushi about his trip and its not a short trip its for 15 days outside the country... I see where khushi is coming from... hes the only thing in her life where she can be herself and get some peace... she has given herself in this relationship whatever it is... even though its Arnav's mistake he didn't do it deliberately... he probably has too many things going on in his life... khushi just happened to join his life... so its a genuine mistake and he is sorry about it... Now both are mad at each other... Arnav is busy and doesn't have time and Khushi is being hard... can't wait for the next update to see how this issue is resolved.

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Awesome update...

Shyam is not Sheetal's son... and this is little secret of Rana... He is really cruel but when it comes to Sheetal he can do everything to ensure her happiness...

Shyam and Rana convo was dreadful... Shyam has to be really discreet about his relationship... If Rana get to know this, they would be in great problem ..

Khushi is jealous... Can't blame her... I hope Arnav will make things right between them ...

Loved the update ...

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raniluvsasr

@raniluvsasr

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#184

lovely. Enjoyed the way you potrayed Anjali and Shyam relationship. Dis chapter was long and well executed loved khushi possesivenesss for Arnav. Did khushi break up with Arnav???

interesting update soon

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sruthick

@sruthick

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Shyam s not Rana's son...!!!
That means anjali s not his sis...
Awesome update...
Lovd it
Cntinue soon

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navjot7

@navjot7

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#186

awesome updt
so shyam is not sheetal son
but i want to know with whom baby sheetal,was pregnant that time
i am confuse about shyam
he is strange personality
its good that shyam is not involving arnav in his mess
but after read about shyam sometome if feel danger for khushi
i want to read more of arshi part
u ask whether we like to read shyam and anjali as second main lead
so i want to tell u plz donot do this
i donoot want to read whole updt only about shyam and anjali
plz show them only when its necessary
from last two updates theiris more of shyam and anjali as compare to arshi
ur way of writing is awesome
i know its important to express shyam chatacter and every other character but still i want to read more about arshi
i hope in next part u will write something about arshi

arshi part is leass but its good
ilike this possessive khushi
i hope arnav talk to her
thnx for pm
and sorry for late comment

Edited by navjot7 - 11 years ago

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deepthi

@deepsdspeed

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#187

omg what an excellent story line.. read it in one go and cant wait for d next update already.. u r somthing girl..truely amazing..hw do u manage to write so beautifully.. i simply loved it..

all thanks to shruti21 for suggesting this ff.. would like to have ur blog link too.. good luck 😊

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ShwetapS

@ShwetapS

Explorer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Finally got around to read both the chapters. I had my reservations about Shyam and Anjali , because I didn't get to see the evolution of their relationship. Would have loved to see what drew them to eachother to finally reach a point of no return.,.,maybe if they are going to feature regularly in the story, you still can do that...

Just loved the part on Arnav and Khushi... The date was everything a first date should be... The nerves... Atmosphere... Flirtatious date. Loved how they decided to take it one day at a time. 😉

Coming to the current chapter, it's was nice to see the introspection bit on Shyam, gave a lot of insight on his life and his thinking. Paakhee, have no words to say how riveting the conversation between Rana and Shyam was. I could feel Rana's menace and Shyam's new found fears. But knowing how cunning our villain is I am afraid he might soon figure out Shyam and Anjali's truth.

Arnav and Khushi, what do I say now, the changing dynamics plus youth makes you wanna be unreasonable and I think Khushi is just feeling that at the moment. The chemistry, the attraction is palpable so jealousy is bound to crop up. these fights will spice up the equation. Ofcourse that also means now Khushi is seeing Arnav more as a boyfriend than just a friend.

Good going Paakhee... Need to read the next update soon...would love to see the progression of the unravelling codes and mysteries.

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gmsk

@gmsk

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Heyy..just caught up with your story from one of the FF threads..

And you got me hooked to it with the prologue it self..

This is undoubtedly a very different and fresh story..

I loved the way you have pen down your protagonist in this..

Would love to continue reading this

Sending a buddy req..

Hope to get notified about the updates too 😳

Cheers :)

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Amina Mahmood

@Amina87

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#190

Interesting update...
So that's Shyam's true identity...
Rana is using him...
Rana is really evil and sharp...
It looks like nothing can escape from him...
Plz continue giving story of shyam and anjali along with Arnav and Khushi...
And now moving to Arshi scene...
So Khushi is upset with Arnav and this 'cara' added the fuel to fire...
How will they patch up now?