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mpuhan

@mpuhan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#171

God this Rana is a sick and very very dangerous man. He doesn't stop to anything while playing with people lives. But he does have a weakness and that is Sheetal. Will she bring him down somewhere in the future?
Although the last update was a surprise, I had always felt Shyam isn't evil but the situations have made him such an unfeeling man. Now that Shyam knows he needs to protect Anjali from Rana, I wonder how is he gonna do that.
Absolutely loved the first lover's spat between Arshi😆

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#172

Awesome update Loved it Thanks for the pm

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Pyewest

@Pyewest

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#173

I don't know why I thought Shyam and Anjali were step siblings. Now confusion is cleared. Awesome update

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Shamz

@Shamz94

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#174

This is getting interesting can't wait

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#175

Some more revelations abt Shyam and his past.. He does love Anjali though I dont know what their future is gonna be like.. Khushi is being possessive.. And I love it.. 😳

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#176

nice update !!! good to know about shyam.. liked the things between anjali & shyam.. don't see any problem with their story if it goes along as second lead.. like the way shyam changing with anjali around is good to see.. liked the little convo between arnav-khushi.. so lets see what happens when they meet next time.. this small convo didn't ended on good note.. loved the update...

thanks for pm 😊

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faffy

@faffy

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#177

Just finished reading all 23 chapters - the FF came highly recommended and now I know why!

It is a super duper thriller, keeping the reader on the edge with bated breath. You have created so much mystery around your characters that its difficult to extricate oneself from this web of deceit, passion, loyalty, love, intrigue and revenge. The machinations and conspiracies are mind boggling yet fascinating.

The interplay and meshing of characters has been done with great ingenuity. There is a story within a story; a maze within a maze and a plot within a plot. A fabulous piece of fiction!!!

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#178

Even Shyam is afraid ane nervous before Rana.

So Shyam is not Sheetal's son.

Is Shyam an orphan then?

Did Rana kill his parents too?

Hope Anjali's life is not in danger because of Rana.

And the tiff between Arnav and Khushi was bound to happen.

Both are strong individuals.

And both have relationship issues.

Waiting now to see how they resolve this fight.

I am okay with Shyam and Anjali making appearances now and then in the story.

I am happy with the status quo.

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Cherylann

@tvpal007

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#179

Shyam is too complicated...he has a bloody past thanks to his fake uncle Rana..

Shyam and Anjali are okay as another couple.

Tell us something about Akash and Payal too😃.

About Arnav and Khushi...I think this is the start of a fight which could lead to an explosive confrontation ,followed by some Rabba Ve?☺️

I for one don't expect Arnav and Khushi to have a normal boyfriend girlfriend relationship here😆

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_disha_

@_disha_

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#180

Whattay relief ! So atleast Shyam and Anjali are not into an incest relationship.

And just how many secrets are stored in the hearts of all the characters in this story.😳

Really amazing mind you have to comprehend and compile all this in one story at this young age.

I have loved Anjali from the beginning although Shyam's revelation did not change how i look at him as yet but i would be totally interested in seeing their story alongside Arnav and Khushi's as well.

Arnav Khushi part was short , crisp and precise. I somehow always enjoy seeing Khushi give Arnav a lashing whether he is to be blamed or not ! 😆

Jokes apart its not like they are officially dating as yet right so then Khushi needs to be a bit more relaxed in her approach , however his reputation does precede him so she can't be blamed either.