AA-CC Challenge OS on Rey: Miscalculation - Page 2

Originally posted by: Mystique.Kishi

Dekho mai aa gayi...Dekho mai aa gayi...FIRST PLACE

RES!!!!!!!!

ARE YOU NOT PROUD OF ME ANKI SHONA????

Unresed...

It was a part of our hazing and I couldn't help but notice you copied and pasted the exact words written by Anks.

maine challenge post kar diya tha.. tu bhi karegi😆

You know when Anks gave you that challenge, I thought it is impossible. I mean in all my time of being a D3 viewer, I could never in my wildest dreams imagine Rey as a nerd. And I really thought that the OS will not make sense to me. But surprise!!! Surprise!!! You made me eat my words, or rather thoughts.

I loved it Anki shona. I could so imagine this happening. Well, imagining Kria as a bitch was not hard since bitchy Kria was a part of lot of my daydreams. But I could see Rey as well.

aww, me ish happy..😳

"Chewing gums are injurious to health, it causes unnecessary wear and tear of the cartilage that acts as a shock absorber in your jaw joints."

is that true???? please tell me its not!!!!! i love my chewing gums and can't bear to part with them.😭

sorry but it's true.. I googled it😆😆😆

"Do you have the power of tongue?"

This line fit in okay with the story. But can you imagine the reaction if this was said out of context???? And my dirty mind conjured all sorts of images🤣 Power of tongue, oh yeah. Bring it on🤣

😉 yesh yeshh, I know what u r thinking

there were just so many ROFL moments in here. Especially this one

every woman is a part of devi ma🤣

I just loved it and the ending was perfect. And rey is right, you know???? India is an independent country. We have the freedom to gawk at any hottie we want. Can you imagine our plight if that right was taken away from us.

ANKY! KASH! I am not putting anything up. This OS have made me apprehensive and I am very young. Don't want to die of embarassment yet...Soo no OS!!!!!

loads of love,

Kishi

Originally posted by: Couch_Potato

res. 😉

(Anki ka favourite word!)

main ro deti aaj pakka..

unres.

Issi saal, issi week, issi din - can you imagine fatafati? I know I'm shocked too!

Okay first of all, a round of applause. You have managed to achieve the impossible with this OS. I don't think anyone could imagine hotshot!hottie!Rey as a geeky nerd but you actually pulled it off!

Also you know how you want your Swayam from your other fic? I want this Kria. She is my dream girl as well, not just Rey's! I love her. I absolutely love her and you have to know that's an achievement because I generally don't like Kria much but here she is amazing. I want one too!

haha. am shoo feeling glad😆

I loved her small nuances. She wasn't just a bully though, she is a mystery. A puzzle and I can totally see why she would confused the I-have-all-the-answers!geeky!Rey. I can understand his attraction and it's not merely physical and that came across so well.

I also love how you just subtly put in this slight implication that perhaps Kria isn't completely blind to him. And her gasp when she sees his eyes for the first time? *sigh*

The ending was soo awesome and open-ended. Maybe Rey will change thoda thoda, find his voice (he definitely has a distinct personality) and two years later, blooms into a confident young man who can counter the girl he sees behind the tomboy? One can hope.

Anyways I love this and I loved Rey's voice and he's funny in his simplicity. I adored him but I LOVE KRIA. Please give me this Kria!

I adore Anky for giving you the challenge and I love you for having giving me this Kria. Thanks fatafati!

Keep writing hamesha.

Originally posted by: _SenbonZakura_

Mai isse padhte waqt aisa khekhe kar ke hans rahi thi aur bus mei sab mujhe ghoor rahe the! 😆

Iske liye tune kitna research kia re?

The chewing gum thingie!! And the game Drake's fortune!

Drake's fortune I knew, chewing gum ka bad effect maine google kiya😃😆😉

Amazing this was.. When I had given the challenge, I had never thought you'd present something this amazing!

You know what, this Kria reminds me of me! :P Except the green hair obviously.. But there was a time I made guys like Rey shiver! This was such a bliss to read because of that!

aww, am soo imagining you here...😳

The "you don't get to speak!" was for me, tashan personified!

Woot Woot!!

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha

U know what anki...i already love u so much..bt after this...i will say i admire you so much...the character reyaansh singhaniya is such an influental one designed by cvs...that imaging him unpopular is next to impossible...bt u did it...without flaws...nothing as less nd certsinly nothing could be added...rey the grt reyaansh singhania is a nerd..a geek with glasses nf oily hair coz he hv time to comb...
😆😆😆 mee too lovesh you, for your hamesha-wala lamba comment..😳
He was bullied by seniors...as if it wasnt enough..he silently admired the head of the bully group...i so loved this bitchy kriya...spcly her dressing sense...cargo with 7 pockets nd tee..(i personally love this attire)...care free bitch..arrogant mean ruthless nd what not...bt dis time i really dont wanna talk about her...i just wanna continue with rey nd go on...
Oh my my...i want to see him rite now so that i can hug the poor soul...kya torture jhela bande ne...if i wud hv been rey...ab tk to clg change kr liya hota...

Yeh Rey teri hain..😃 u can have him all.

I lovef his debate with him self...the reasons he was giving to himself...dat he shud nt hv a crudh on her bt still he have...i was like "my poor baby..kitni duvidha me fas gaya..."...u did a brilliant job here

He knew...he is well aware dat he is a sort of entertainment to them nd nothing else...his existence dsnt matters yo them...still he stares at her secretly...i mean guts hain bande me...
That jacket wrapping incident with the stray dog..!!!...he got to know her bit sensitive side
😲 ...me mar jaungi... 😆 😆 😆
Again...wen on the very 1dt day..he was ragged...his reactions were like "o m g"...his defending himself dat drake's fortune is not kid's game...nd then his reaction to my bitch's shout...books nd bag kissing the ground nd my lad trembling nd scaref to hell...again i jst wanted to wrap him in my arms nd curse dat ruthless monster for making him scared...my poor rey...
Nd then his concern..(i really font wanna quote bt zaruri tha)...
he is so much concerned for her...i bet he wont nd he cant smoke ever...he was thunking of stopping her from chewing dat gum...great

acha idea hain, haa, woh kabhi smoke nahi karegi..😆😆

Again i wanted to console him badly dat he is perfect nd these ppl r blind...
U showed him so innocent here...
He dont wanna turn into a sadist...well who wants to be...

I truly hated kriya with all my heart for troubling him...his crying his delicacy...i fell for him...he was almost crying coz he wasnt able to see without his glasses...
Plz bring him to me somebody...
am soo glad.. meko dar tha aisa Rey shayed thik nahi lagega..

Nd then she asked him ro get lenses kiddo...i was like kiddo...!???? Seriously...!!!!
His thoughts upon lens idea made me sure that rey is gonna transform to some slight chabges... [🤣 IDK]

Coming to u anki...u r wonderful writer yar...god bless u... [😳bas comments ka blessings mil jaye to hi chalega]

U portrayed this nerdy boy as reyaansh singhaniya perfectly nd i can proudly say dat no one can do justice with the concept the way u did... [hayee main mar jawa☺️]
I actually visualised evry bit of it...u made me forget who actual reyaansh singhaniya is...nd wen a writer is successful in doing so...then i can say he succeeded...nd u did my doll...u did...
I truly love you after this... 🤗

Originally posted by: tinatartari

this ws superb..

bt this shudnt be an OS...it shud be TS nd u shud bring them 2gether somehw..nd pm me the update...

i loved it ttly...

plx write the 2nd part,,,eithr make it SS or FF???

this story has a great potential,m tellng u :)

Originally posted by: Lovelylavender

Heyy anki!!
This is like awww!!
Its just soo amazin!!
First of all i luvd the way u portrayed the concept!! 👏
I jus luvd every dialogue..
The highlights wer u dont get to speak up! Chewing gum part was so fun!!
Kriya was so considerate abt puppy :)
I luvd d devi ma dialogue a lottt 🤣
and last wala kria gasped and widened her eyes.. Hmmm niceee..
U know u can use this point as a gr8 part ahead !
I jus lovd it to the core!!! It was just sooo awesome!!!!
Plzzzs its a request ! Continue it!!
Ts ss ff.. Wateva!! Jus continue plzzz..
I jus luvd it as it ws luvly and wud luv to read more on it!! Lol!!

Luv
Shanaya :)

Originally posted by: ..Re..

Let me grin like an idiot first 😃😃😃

Okay let's come to the update. YOU.ARE.AMAZING like not words Asdfghjkl hyperventilating mode on.

My favorite parts..

It's annoying, it's frustrating how he is completely ignoring the latest thesis on Astrophysics, he is supposed to present some kind of demonstration on how it is important that students should, gosh she has some curves...

Excellent, he is more concentrated on her curves rather than the huge telescope staring back at him on the magazine. What the hell is he doing, he can't have crush on a girl like her. Boys like him don't get to fantasize girls like her. He must have been out of his mind to even imagine in his wildest dream that, she looks cute.

🤣 Bold. I laughed at this! oh rey, you are so whipped. Loving this Rey so much. Nerdy glasses are sexy but some nerdy boys are even more sexier. Perfect example:- Rey

She's a self-proclaimed uber bitch...

Thats my girl, aha! I love bitches so f**king much.

His well-developed wise and intelligent brain-cells still couldn't find out the reason how she can be all intimidating for human beings but so considerate towards stray pups.

I liked this paragraph and I don't even know why? Anki effect I guess. Bold 👏

He doesn't get why people make fun of his clothes, they are normal right? Fade jeans and single-colour T-shirts? What can he do if he has the time to properly comb his hair, without making them look like an aerie? Or what can he do about his poor eye-sight? People and their complains! Books had always been his constant companion, they never judge him by his cover. Virtual world was always better, they don't get to make fun of how he looks.

This!! This paragraph is my fav sabse zaada. The way you wrote it..*speechless* like how do you manage to make me go speechless everytime with your update. Not fair, not fair at all.

These were my fav parts although the whole was super cool and I would have mentioned my reactions for whole wrote up but I am too spleey

In short the OS was super awesome. I can never doubt you when it comes to writing becoz you see I am up for anything you write.

👏 Honestly I have read alot on nerdy love and this is the best till date. You descriptions are always so perfect.

You pulled it off very well gurl. Bow down, hands down...this was tremendous.

Originally posted by: anki_22

awww, me lovesh u Re... u always praise me way too much..😆 itna bhi bhao maat de..😛
thank u for the comment love..😊 am glad that u like it.. tu jaldi jaldi apna boards khatam kar, we will talk abt the merger thingie..😳 love ya..