FF,TAKE ME TO HELL ,DARK FF CHAPTER 7 UPD PG 99 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
i love u ,love u, love u very much for starting a new story about arshi...
nice concept...waiting for chapter 1...plzzz
again thank u very very much for giving a new intense love story, u r awesome dear...
even i am a girl but i can't help myself to fall in love with u again & again because of creative nature, ur dedication to arhsi...pls update fast dear
i love u & i really mean it❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
WOW, new story with a new concept...
Loved it dear...
Please continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Interesting do start soon
4 teaser of Domp z terrifying n well d awited pt
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Quiet a diff concept...looking forward to read more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Interesting concept plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

TAKE ME TO HELL

PROLOGUE...

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IT,S A JUST GLIMPSE OF HIS MANSION...i will explain the other portions and especially arnv singh raizada portion ,with progressing the story...

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REMOVED DUE TO THEIVES...PLAGERISM...BUT STILL CONTINUED ON BLOG

Precap...



YES SHE WAS HER...ABSOLUTELY HER...

RIGHT NOW IN FRONT OF MY EYES ...AGAIN...

AFTER 4 MONTHS...

RIGHT AWAY SHE WAS IN MY SHIRT,LOOKING AT ME WITH TOO MUCH INNOCENSE...her face was all wet due to tears...

WHILE LOOKING AT HER, I FELT THAT STRONG FEELINGS SECOND TIME IN MY LIFE WITHIN MY STONE HEART...

ONCE AGAIN...

THAT STRANGE FEELING...ARDENT SENSATION,SO STRONGLY RISING IN ME,SHATTERING TOTALLY MY INSIDE...MAKING ME VULNERABLE THAT IT HATE MYSELF MORE...

i was starring at her blank but somehow aghast face...

BUT MY HATRED WAS GONE IN SEC WHEN I HEARD THAT VOICE AGAIN IN MY HEAD,while staring at her deeply ...WHICH I USED TO HEAR IN MY TERRIFIC DREAMS NOW A DAYS,WHICH SOOTHED ME NAURALLY ALONG WITH IT...

HER SWEET,INNOCENT,FULL OF CARE VOICE...

STAY WITH ME...PLLLZ STAY WITH ME...I WILL NEVER LET ANYTHING HAPPEN TO YOU...

I PROMISE...

THAT ONE NIGHT FLASHED IN MY HEAD ALL OVER AGAIN...WITH ALL ALL HER CRYING,WET FACE...I was absorbed now in my gaze fully which was still raized towards her... intensly...

AND THAT,S WHEN HER EXPRESSIONS BECOME STONE TOO,SLOWLY,slowly, WHEN SHE RECOGNIZED ME FULLY...

AND THEN SHE HUGGED ME PANICALLY...

LIKE I WAS HER SAVIOUR...HER PROTECTER...

BUT IN REAL I WAS A MONSTER...

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IST CHAP COMING UP SOOONNN

Let me know guys how is it...

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blog link is

http://sierapomeroy.wordpress.com/fftake-me-to-helldarkmature-18-ff/

Edited by sierapomeroy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
BR]Interesting start n prologue is promising n dear there is some problem with ur blog the back pictures r so dark that the content is nt visible pls change the background of ur blog
Edited by harman12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Awesome update
Poor Khushi, after her father death she take her step mother as her own world but she betrayed her n sold her.
I like that Khushi isn't willing other to use her for any cause.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
my place😉
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Now I m here😉
Woah ..!I just loved d prologue 👏
Awesome dear😉
When I read d teaser i was sure they had a super strong past that wud bind them!...
Now the devil met d Angel!😳
What's gonna happen?...
That hug wasn't xpctd...
She think of him as a protector but in real its not
One thin I have to mention!...
How come U didn't show asr as a womenizer😛
Kkk just kiddin😆
This s quite diff😊
Continue soon dear😉
Edited by coolpd93 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Intrsting intrsting nxt chp sooon!!!!

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