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Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

Loved d update

looking forward to read more

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smat

@smat

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#152

Brilliant update
It looks like she will be betrayed big time by her so called love (Adi)
Thanks for the pm
pls update soon

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divya

@diyadivya

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#153

i hope khushi opens her eyes n sees d true face of adi b4 itz too late

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risha8

@risha8

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#154

awesome update

dint khushi just for once think about adi??

he dint even turn-up when she called him

hope she finds out adi's true color soon

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neha

@neag

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#155

part 2 was superb...just superb... you wrute it incredibly...just love how you show Arnav pain and his broken heart in this part...and i just love this line alot "I AM COUNTING MY DAYS = I AM NOT COWARD, BUT I AM NOT AS STRONG EITHER, THAT I CAN SHARE YOU WITH ANYONE!"

Beautifully wriiten really...

BTW

why do i have a feeling that Adi is a two timer and is playing with Khushi as well as Anjali...part 2 Anjali went to London and Part 3 Adi went to London...or ,may be Anjali will disclose that Adi is having an affair with some girl in London and betraying Khushi...

Betrayal-- Khushi to Arnav for Adi and later "what goes around comes around"---- Adi betrayed Khushi

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kajal511

@kajal511

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#156

awesome updates
feeling adi is negative character who only wanted to take revenge from arnav by using khushi
poor arnav😭

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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#157

Part 2 - Poor Arnav feeling bad 4 him but I think Arnav is the father of Khushi's baby

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rockingchamp

@rockingchamp

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#158

i could only guess the real betrayal hasn't come yet it is yet to come ...khusi is one lucky b**ch to have 2 love may be one was fake but it still made her believe it to be true and for being lucky part she had adi wid his fake love then came arnav he insulted her but indirectly saved her from adi and when adi would she would again find arnav by her side if not arnav she would have the baby she is damn lucky from all sides i hope she loses all of it if not adi she could go back to arnav and if not she has her baby she only has to choose options..it would be lovely to see her lose everything no one to call her own not even my love arnav...