ArHi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| #4, Last Part-pg.16 *Complete!*

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kurinji

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Read all the updates in one go.

One of the excellent redemption of Arnav, Good things about this is showed Anjali with backbone, she is undoubtedly courage s women, then Sashis physical development.

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Arshix144

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Nafi do you know that each time you update this story I get this strong urge to start the story from the beginning and re read all parts again and this is not because I don't remember what happened prior to the update you have given us but because I find myself wanting to read more and more of my favourite story on Redemption! And now that you tell us that this is the second last chapter, I want to go back and read all the other chapters one more time because I don't want this story ending anytime soon, then again we all know and understand that all good things must come to an end.

On a different note, I have been away from IF for quite sometime but seeing an update notification for this FF had me running here and catching up with the chapter as soon as I could. I am quite sure I have already said this to you but what the heck I will say it again, you are a genius. Every scene the unfolded in this chapter was for the lack of better terms pure genius. For instance, Shyam getting caught by the officers, his internal monologue and finally his getting busted was just covered in the most amazing way ever. I felt like I was watching one of those murder mystery movies, witnessing every single expression and interaction. Ah man I don't think I will manage to cover every single scene here but every single development was nothing short of brilliance from Anjali's bombshell to Khushi's emotional reaction and internal turmoil to Arnav being their for his Khushi as a solid pillar despite his own pain and emotional condition because of his sister. I simply LOVED everything Nafi! I have no words for you anymore so I might as well give up eh! You just rock ok?! I am sure You already know that I look forward to the next chapter already so I won't say it! 😉

PS. Many & Many Congratulations on the 4th thread of this beautiful journey! <3

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

we are nearing the second anniversary of this story

nafisa, I truly truly love this story dear

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janu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

I stumbled upon this ff. 3 days back and it was amazing be it the realization of Arnav and his love and life with khushi ,khushi's acceptance of his love and trust...

Falling short of words.

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ravalisharma06

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

congo on new thread...

grt update

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@Deleted

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Such a strong emotional update..

Eagerly waiting for next, I Love the way you write.

Thanks for the pm. 😊

Edited by ...Ashley - 11 years ago

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smileyhug7679

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Amazing acting by Shyam jha

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soumee

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Hi...lovely update must say...it ws intense...packd with emotions...on all accounts...be it hurt, anger, treachery, anguish, regret, love...u name it...n u have it!! Thnk god...anjali made the FIR...waiting for the last chap...i know u will give the perfect end to this perfect tale!!😃

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IamSwapnali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

just finished reading all 49 chapters and eagerly waiting for the last one.

Loved your style of writing, and for the first time in my reading history of ArHi stories, I am not hating/ disliking Anjali! Great job on her character 👏. I liked how initially she is just like the one in the show and in most of the stories - too sweet to be true - but after coming to know Shyam's truth how she turned into a strong person. And even though you have not really spent too much on writing about that (and I am really glad about that too 😉), it came out perfectly from the story .. like from the bit when she is going through that video many times. So I am sure it took her long time to accept the reality and think about it calmly than blaming her luck.

I understand why Arnav is upset with her, but I think she probably wanted to take this step herself after that meeting with Shashiji and good that she did not depend on anyone else to take a corrective action.

Gosh! This is the first time I am praising Anjali and I have so much to say about her 😲 So I will stop here now, but thank you for giving us this different Anjali, and hopefully next time I see the actress who played her, I will remember this character & not the one in the show (I know it's still difficult, but I will try)!

Coming to Arnav & Khushi...
I like the how they compare the other with 'dragonfly' & 'jalebi'! Some of the things that ARnav did for Khushi are just too cute! And glad that Khushi did not jump at the first opportunity to trust him just because he decided to be nice with her.
I would have to loved to have more of them in the last chapter than the sibling's confrontation.

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cocoamob

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

This has been a wonderful ride so far reading your story. I always wish there was more when I come to the end of each chapter. I do hope you finish this story and bring closure to the last few untied ends.