ArHi TS: Seeing You | 07/02 New Replies P21; Previous ones P16-18

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esamoe

@esamoe

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Hey Chibi so glad to see u have written something new...hope u having a great new year!

I'm sooo glad that you wrote something like this I always wish the story played out different after the scene in the serial so I'm glad I would be getting to see it trough your story.

Its beautifully written.

I'm so happy to see that Khushi took a stand and left,its so great to see this independent Khushi that's working,got a flat and can drive things I always wanted to see ... Finally Arnav realized how he chose his Di over Khushi and finally Khushi realized that she doesn't need the people that treated her like that and could never trust her. I am feeling bad for Arnav but I want to see some repentance not only from Arnav but the family too. Great job eagerly waiting for part2.

I'm a sucker for happy ending please make it a happy ending.

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rkapoor1382

@rkapoor1382

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

sorry like not working

its fabulous waitingg for nxt part

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Hey Helee, I surely missed you and so happy to see an update from you. Hope you are doing great and all is well with you. Fantastic first part as usual, very well written and eagerly waiting for the next chapter...

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Nicky saluja

@Nickysweet

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Hey lovely TS..i love it
Flashes of show came in front of my eyes

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Amazing 1st part.. 👍🏼 Arnav really lost a lot not believing her.. She is a different person now.. No doubt they love each other but for Khushi to trust Arnav and make him a part of her life again will be not be easy...

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

wow... what a comeback yaar!!

loved it!!

so it from when arnav said those words to khushi

cant wait to read!!

thanks for the pm

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Aww glad to see you back dear 🤗

loved the update 😳

beautifully written as always

love this Khushi 😳 Im happy that she's nomore that innocent naive girl

eagerly waiting for the nxt part

thanks for the PM

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damon fan

@-damon-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

SUPERB di..what a return..!! Totally Bang On..!!
I loved it..the way u described everything..awesome! Kaash aisa show mein hua hota toh maza aa jaata..!! Now can't wait to read further..!! Update soonwa!! Bye!! Keep giving us such wonderful updates!