ArHi TS: Perceptions. *Part 2. Pg 25* (Completed) - Page 4

Just the other day, you ignored my statement about your writing and creativity and now you come out with this😕

Honestly, this was a great first part. I felt emotional all over again having to read about how Khushi is treated due to the forced marriage. This was when Arnav was at his cruelest, and most hurtful self (though inside, he was dying a little bit too) and you did a great job of portraying it. Even after two years, it still resonates with us IPK lovers.

I love that fact that after all this time, Khushi is finally seeking answers. She might have tried in the past but now she's adamant and knowing her fierce spirit, she will get it. And what a way to start the conversation!!!

Looking forward to the next part; hope you post soon!!

P.S. Why is Khushi keeping tabs of all the expenses??

Omg..????!!!!!
You cant end on this part
It was amazing
Wish id read both parts together

oh how we miss your writing...wonderful start...what is khushi going to say

What I liked the most here was the different take on Arnav and Khushi.

this is going to be spicy, dhamakedar, amazing and fabulous...everything that i love in a story😳

Unres

It's been so far a wonderful and lovely story. Liked very much, how you portrayed Arnav and Khushi in your story, a bit different then from the show like telling also Arnav's inner fight, his insecurity regarding what to do, be angry or be concerned and also that Khushi is not only taking it all into herself and just keep going on, but having her own thoughts about the whole situation, which made her to talk to Arnav directly.

Looking forward for next part to get know Arnav's reaction, Khushi did the first step and it's a good step from her to confront Arnav and not only stay quiet.

Wonderful start with Khushi's anguish, Arnav's guilt coming through. You've built up the suspense so well that there are so many paths for this story to take up - I'm sure you're going to come up with the one that will takes us all by surprise!

Out of all the things she could do to confront him, she made the attempt of resting her head against his chest?! I dont know what this woman is playing with! Phew...

And loved the kitchen toto ;)

Now, I'm waiting for the next part, holding onto the multiple horses.
Lady, You better hurry :P