ArHi TS: Perceptions. *Part 2. Pg 25* (Completed) - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
I am so elated to see your post.
You are back and I am so happy to read your story.
Fantastic start and very intriguing update
When I first read that Arnav married khushi for his Di i thought your are writing something related to their force marriage but no, it wasn't. Its something new and i love it.
Arnav is in guilt for marrying khushi and breaking her dreams. She wants her to leave his life and that's why he is very rude and impolite. Interesting
I like that khushi didn't want to suffer more in the sham marriage and is adamant to know Arnav's problem with her.
is he same with khushi since day one of their marriage? because their is hope with khushi that he will love and come to her one day. And the biggest question why can't he touch her.
Khushi matters to Arnav or else he won't come in kitchen to check on her.
Can't wait to read next part.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
YAY !!😊
Edit :
I am happy however regularly you show up your face even after deciding not to write. Its definitely a bonus for us readers !😊

Arnav is downright mean to her . He's been drowning in inner pain and guilt of hurting Khushi time and again through his words. But he still refrains from communicating with her due to the boundaries created by his mind around his heart. Anger is his only medium of communication as he wants to lessen his guilt by experiencing the wrath of Khushi , her shouting and her anger . He wants a reaction from Khushi and anger is , a/c to him , the only channel to get that ...

On the other hand , Khushi is too much broken and shocked from his attitude change to respond or react to his anger. She is too occupied to find the 'why' behind their marriage...

I love Khushi's character. She's strong and she still hopes for a happy marriage after the indifferent behavior in Arnav . She 's adamant and believes on their relationship and wills to find out the reason for Arnav's anger and guilt which is making him act the way he is..
She is selfless and is happy for other's happiness and yet she is selfish for their happily married life
She calmly confronts him bathing them in a dark privacy because she knows Arnav's ego and pride will never let him confess and make him say the truth to her face...She knows he won't be comfortable that way...And she also knows the before-marriage Arnav could never have refused her anything in the broken state that she is now..

I sooo look forward to reading their confrontation and emotional reunion...
Loved the First Part ! 😊
Update the next part soon !! 😊
Edited by RainyDays - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Woah! The last bit...was totally unexpected. I'm super curious to know how Khushi plans to resolve matters between them.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24


interesting

waiting for the next parts
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
wowww!!!!!!!I'm glad that u came up with a new story😊 lovely update😛😛😛i enjoyed reading it and i wish this were an FF😃😃😃 haha 😆 anyway ur fans are eagerly waiting for more updates and stories of urs😊 thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Oh..that was amazing...felt so teary...the heart ...calls for you...needs you...wants you...

Waiting...eagerly for the next one...


Thx...you have an amazing way with words...fabulous!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
wow ... can't wait for Arnav's reaction now!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow I'm so excited and happy to read this two shot,

God bless the two darlings whose birthdays this was written for as we get to read your wonderful work,

The First part was quite sad and heart breaking especially for Khushi,

I'm glad you based this on the forced marriage/truth/hopefully guilt and redemption.

Arnav is being so harsh and cruel and just to not feel guilty he is taking it out on Khushi,

I'm loving the fact Khushi is making the first move to find out the truth and I hope Arnav does not run away and reveals the truth.

Are u sure this is only a two shot, I'm sure Arnav's apologies and repenting cannot be covered in one more part, lol.

I would love for you too hopefully in the future when u do decide to write do a FF story on the forced marriage/redemption track.

The update was a brilliant read, amazing writing.

Thanks for the PM,

Eagerly waiting for the next part, please don't make us wait too long and does the last scene include a kiss, lol.

Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
yes, awesome, u r back and u wrote something else!!! 😃 cant believe something good actually came out of 'ebp' - another os from u! 😛 absolutely loved the first part, u beautifully captured the essence of arnav and khushi and what they r both going thru, it feels real, like a scene in the show. actually it's a million times better than anything they could come up with during this track! though i loved the show even with all it's imperfections it would have been amazing to see them vocalise and understand their bruised feelings like this, and for khushi to act so logically 😳 really really hope it does have a happy ending but am game for whatever u come up with 😃

and happy birthday to the two people this os is and is not dedicated to! 😃 i think u should make her promise u some more stuff like this 😳 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Ah!
That was really a very good piece of writing..
I like Khushi that she is trying to make things work tand she is taking the first step.
And Arnav on the other hand is resisting this relationship at every step and I'm tempted to wonder, why is he behaving this way?
I hope that you will answer my question in the next part.
Waiying eagerly for the update.
Stay Blessed ...Zindagi Bar key Liye..Hamesha..😃
-Saraa

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