ArHi TS: Perceptions. *Part 2. Pg 25* (Completed)

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

celinawalter

@celinawalter

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

unres!!

Welcome back Rasgulla!
we would be more happy if you are frequent here. but nevertheless, thanks for the small mercies and the promises you made a while back!

Now the update --
Arnav is one F**KED up soul. he has everything, but nothing, he is his love, yet no love , he has his Khushi, yet no Khushi, he can be happy, yt he chooses to be miserable, he just has to embrace his feelings, but he chooses rot in Guilt... guilt for marrying the girl he loved to please his Di, or Guilt for marrying the girl he thinks he is not in love but was a mere attraction?

Arnav --- the duffer!!! Hmmppphhh!!

Khushi-- the adjusting one among the two. Three months of living a sheer disaster of a marriage was the sure-shot torture to her soul. loved her determination to not lose and fight back. for her Husband's love. And loved her last move to make Arnav talk out their differences required a lot of courage on her part! i loved it.

and i can see the remake of IPKKND EBP coming soon!😊

Edited by celinawalter - 11 years ago

Quote

ipkknd786

@ipkknd786

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

I thought we were chaddi buddies...nah nah school buddies 😆...tune bataya nahin you are posting something 😔

Un Res!!!!

On Part 1...

A wise person once told me that by trying to give my best I was not giving the author any feedback at all 😆 so here goes...

So you started off with the forced marriage part...I cannot wrap my mind around the fact that a person can do so much for someone else...both got married to save their siblings. Khushi I understand she wasn't given much of a choice...but ASR had a choice right...if Shyam was having an affair with someone else...would he have gotten married to that person as well...just to save his Di.😲...I have always wondered about that...BUT BUT BUT...is your story taking the same spin that is Arnav believing Khushi having an affair with Shyam...or am I totally jumping the gun 😆...I am curious

ASR is such a misguided soul. He is scared that any chance at happiness is going to be snatched away from him. But before that can happen he is willing to jump to any conclusion save coming clean and giving that other person a chance to explain. (I am still basing it on the assumption that it is about the so called alleged affair 😛 )

Even when Khushi was happy for Payal he doubted her genuine happiness. Oh ASR what have you done to Khushi...when he yells at her she immediately stops what she is doing and mutely nods and agrees...so ASR feels guilty for having married her like this. In his twisted logic he has justified that all this is for Di. oh boy!!

And I have to applaud Khushi...despite the way he has treated her she refuses to believe that there is no love and is determined to find out why...and I like the way she asked "aap theek hain"...that was good...looks like ASR's shaatir dimaag is finally rubbing off on her 😆

I like the last part...me likey when Khushi does unexpected things 😛

Now when are you updating part 2????

P.S: If you are taking requests...my B'day is June 3rd 😆

P.P.S: It's a guaranteed happy ending right...like for all characters??? except of course the bad guys

Edited by ipkknd786 - 11 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

saarah96

@saarah96

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

brilliant start
why is arnav doing this?
is shyam involved?
Cant wait to read more=]

Quote

cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Res!

Will be back tomorrow:)

Edited!

I am glad that you wrote again😃 And I so wish I could read part 2 too NOW! :D

Khushi is trying everything to make this marriage work but ASR is not ready to help her 😔

Koi nai he will come around😳

I am so happy that she at least initiated the talk and I am eager to see how ASR would react😃

Continue soon! :D

Edited by cheesemad - 11 years ago

Quote

Nikita

@zoobie-doobie

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Res -

Edited 😃

Woww !! Now that was something really fabulous.

Its been ages since i read an OS based on Arhi's post first-marriage misunderstanding and seriously it was marvelous.

Yes , a little bit different but the way the emotions of Arnav and Khushi were portrayed was excellent.

Arnav had always been guilt ridden every time he had hurt Khushi , intentionally or unintentionally and then when all the guilt was too much to bear , he once again poured all his frustration on the poor girl. But at the same time he hurt himself much , much more than Khushi.

Their relationship had been so beautiful. Simple yet complicated.

And this OS brings out the 'ArHi' essence really really well.

Khushi knows Arnav loves her but doesn't know the fact why he married her and behaves so rudely , but she believes that Arnav loves her.

I felt really sad for Khushi that she tries to be happy even in that sham of a marriage but she keeps getting wounded in the process.

Arnav on the other hand in full of confusion , longing and guilt.

A big mess it all seems to be.

And the end part was beautiful. I was waiting for Khushi to go and confront Arnav, She obviously deserves to know the truth.

*sigh* Lack of communication can screw things up big time.

I absolutely loved the first part. !

Extremely well written and portrayed.

Will be waiting for the next chapter.

Love

Nikita

Edited by Arshi-Nikita123 - 11 years ago

Quote

aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Un-resed my comment on Pg-1!

Quote

N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Very beautifully written.. Can't wait for the next part..

Quote

laddoo598

@laddoo598

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

TS from Rasgulla jee? This is my lucky day!

Alright, you have to admit, that was a very, very, very mean place to end. You better update soon missy!

Loved the first chapter, in all the post hate marriage stories I have read, Khushi never took this particular stance, this is refreshingly different! :)

Quote

KtotheM

@KtotheM

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

I really like and would love that u keep giving us these nice surprises of coming back to writing every now and then
Nice update
Pls do continue soon
Thanx

Quote

chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

well i would never ever say no to you coming back and posting such stories
in fact i hope you come back more and more
can never get over the fact we dont have regular stories of yours
that is just sad
what the hell is EBP
anyway thats beside the point
ahhh so they are married
he loves her and so does she
then whats up with him
why being so rude and gruff with her
when he wants to be anything but that
hmmm and she knows he loves her too
good she confronted him
she has to right
so whats eating him now
hmmm so how are your studies going then
and hope you coming back for more and more
cheers for pm