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dh19 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice and cute
loves taasshi's bond
hope rey will not hurt taani again
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Posted: 11 years ago
Both d parts wr awesome.luvd it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update
Loved reyam nd Taani scene😃
D way Taani supported ashi was nice
Loved taarey scene
Continue soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was really nice taani is so understanding and aashi taani bond was too good
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Posted: 11 years ago

hi everyone, this is the worst ive felt in writing an update- i dont like this at all but as im alrady late im continuing with this.🤢 please bear with it if u do read😊
u know what i want to do, no story nothing just want to say TR lived happily ever after

part 44
...there were loud noises, talk coming from a distance making both of them come back to swayam s kitchen where they stood from the world where only the two of them existed.

Swayams kitchen

.....taani turned towards the noise, rey placed his head on her shoulder pulling her closer and she tried to free herself ,"rey koi aajayega" he just stayed tight," i missed you taani" she stopped fidgeting , " rey..." sftly, in contrast the noise increased with sharons loud voice and Vicky s laugh clearer now," lagtha hain kuch horahaan hain!" she pushed him forcibly a little away

"nothing, sabka usual bewakoofi hoga and today sab bohot ache mood mein hain bcoz the performance went really well , much better than usual bhi aur next week tak humein pata chal jaayega ...mostly videos ke liye " " seriously? Wow " she asked happiness in her voice," Pata hain mera bohot mann tha aane ka , itne din hogaye aapke dance dekhe hue!"

Smiling , he left her , moved back and put his hand out calling for a dance. her face brightened but then hesitated a little, he shook his head at her hesitation and pulled her closer holding her hand," abh bhi doubts? CD mein tho bohot ache se dance kar rahin thi"

"but rey tab koi tha nahin mere saamne ,maine khudh self recording ki aashi ki steps pe.. agar koi hotha.."

" phir se doubt mat karo, you ll be fine even if a hundred people are watching you now.sirf first step difficult hain"he put a strand of her hair back her ear

"yeh aap d3 ka rey bolrahe ho ya mera boyfriend rey ?" she asked hesitant to believe him

"dono" he laughed. she smiled genuinely glad now and said," time hi nahin tha rey, mera project ka presentat.." And then loud loud thump of something falling which even they couldn't ignore. They exchanged glances, left each other and went out to swayams room.

Swayams room-everyone s running behind one another falling over stuff here and there, theres a chair in the middle which the guys are jumping over, some nonsense as usual, Sharon screamin at them - swayam ko rest karna hain.. simmi /rinni to Sharon so much concern teasingly . swayam on the bed half lauging(aashi s gone back home- no aashi in the scene)

Taani and rey walked in hurry and then stopped at the door, rey loked at her with a i told you it ll be nothing look and she turned to the running guys again and then... suddenly ran behind amar making rey look in surprise..."mera laptop" to a small table in the corner but the guys had fallen over one another by then , the laptop toppled and fell down.

Taani pushed the guys around and picked her laptop which was in two pieces ,"krishnaji please kuch mat hone dena isse" she muttered nervously turning it around and around , trying to see if she could just ...fix it and it would fix. The guys were still laughing not realising anything , the girls were trying to bring some sense but laughing anyway, they didnt realise that taani was sitting on the floor with the laptop in two pieces , her eyes blurring as she tried to switch it on..

Rey came and knelt next to her," kya hua?" and looked at the laptop, by then Sharon had also come nearer and saw the laptop and in her typical Sharon tone , with voice loud , clear and raised " SHUT UP ALL OF U...ALL OF U... NOW" and everyone quietened slowly and looked here there and then at taani with the laptop

Oh! Laptop ? kahaan tha? kiska tha? kisika bhi ho..gaya! and sudden laugh...shh...kya hua? Taani tumhaar hain? i mean tha... laugh spree... shut up shhh..yaar...and the whole lot of talk, rey placed his hand on taani s shoulder, taani was still trying to somehow make it work looking nervous and teary

"kya hua taani? laptop hi tho hain!" rinni

" yeh laptop nahin hain..mera 8 months project hain, saara data ismein tha..mera saara kaam..ab main kaise... " taani snapped at her suddenly angry," yeh tum log kabi bhi..." stopped and wiping her eyes got up and started walking out with the broken laptop in her hand.

"taani" swayam/ rey both began together consolingly, rey standing next to her and swayam on the bed but by then

"arre..tho humein thodi na pata tha ki tumhaara hain"Vicky "haan yeh bhi nain pata tha ki yahaan kuch hain"nil "aur phir laptop ko aise table pe kaun ..."bharat "par taani tumne bac up kyun nahin liya?"amar Sharon ," what the hell guys, kabhi tho serious ho jao" "rey kisine purposely tho nahin kiya na.."simmi "phir bhi simmi.."

Wanting to follow taani out rey moved but got irritated with the talk and started ," guys .."

Swayam "taani kahaan jaa rahin ho? ek baar usse dekhne do maybe ..." she held it up in two hands.he stopped how on earth was anyone going to repair that? It needed professional attention, " don't worry, hum kal usse repair karne dedenge and then you can have your project..."

"bhai mujhe apna final recommendations draft kal shaam tak submit karna tha and wo complete bhi hogaya tha"she replied still snappishly , they all exchanged glances. She stopped at the door, turned and said," aap logon ko pata hain ki aapko abhi kya kehna chahiye?" they stared at her...she stared at them back and then shook her head," chodo...kya farak padtha hain" and banging the door went out

They stood quietly for a sec and then rey," ek baar sorry bolne se kya hojaatha? "

Front room- taani on the sofa her head in her hands , laptop on the table in front of her

Main kya karoon ab? Kya??? Saara project main ek din mein kahaan se laaoongi? Sirf data ka back up hain, presentations ka nahin aur phir se do hafthe ka kaam... her eyes were threatenin to fill , she shook herself and got up ," kuch tho hona chahiye.krishnaji kuch miracle hi kardo mera laptop teek ardo bas" and then mobile rang- XXX

the guy from her college," sorry disturb kiya, hope ur brother s okay"

"oh hi haan bhai teek hain, kuch kaam tha?"

Swayam room

"teek hain yaar humein pata thodi na tha ki uska itna kuch ...jo bhi hain hain usmein, tho kya karsakthe hain"Vicky retorted guiltily

"haan phir bhi , sorry kehne se .." sharon

"chalo bhai sorry, galathi hogayi maaf karo"bharat to rey

"mujhe kyun bol rahe ho? taani ko..." "ek hi baat hain.. teri hi girlfriend hain.."

"Bharat!" swayam

"ismein girlfriend ki baat kahaan se aagayi? " rey irritated," agar hamaari dance ke beech kuch gadbad hojaathi tho.."

" rey tu inko chod abhi" swayam," tu jaa aur dekh ki taani kahaan gayi" Rey moved out looking at them in irritation.

Sharon started her screaming session , "kya zaroorat hain har baar monkeys ki tarah jump karne ki?Vicky? Nil? Maine kahaan ki swayam ko bhi rest karna hain..." They kept exchanging guilty glances.

Front room

XXX the guy from college "haan mujhe yeh poochna tha ki tumne tumhaara reports kis id pe bheja hain ,can you just mail ..."

"wo mera laptop kharab hain..mujhe id offhand yaad nahin"

"laptop ko kya hua?" and taani told him , her voice again threatening to break in frustration.

he listened intently and swore ," oh shit! Ab kal ke liye..." she was quiet scared that she would just cry if she opened her mouth," ...back up tho nahin hoga..." she could hear him thinking, after a moment," taani tumne agar offices ko report bheja hain tho..."

She immediately had the batti jali look and interrupted him,"haan...wo hain. maine blah blah blah...she explained what she had done before and how she could use it..." he smiled at the other end, she continued," thank you krishnaji..main abhi krishnaji se ek miracle maang rahin thi ,thank u so much solution.." he laughed ," maine kya kiya? Tumhaara hi plan hain "

"phir bhi pehla idea aapka tha"she sighed," ok, tho main chalthi hoon ..thanks so much aur main mail id bhejdoongi "

"ok, even with this kal tak complete karna...its difficult. Kuch chaiye tho bolo" she nodded , cut the call and felt better ...there was work to complete but atleast she knew what to do. She looked at the laptop and then turned to go to swayams room.

Rey stood near the door , his face blank. " rey aapka laptop hain?" he shook his head," bhai se poochlethi hoon..." and walked into the room leaving him staring at her back. he felt suddenly left out . suddenly he wanted to hit that guy whoever he was.

She came out of the room in a minute with swayams laptop and sat on the sofa opened it and started doing whatever she was doing. She didnt even notice rey standing and staring at her. he moved to her and stood , hand on her shoulder," u need help?"

"nahin jab tak main aapko samjhaaoongi tab tak main khudh hi complete karsakthi hoon" she replied looking at the laptop and muttering something, got up and ran to her room. He stood alone wondering if she was still upset or only worried and wishing he could do something when his phone rang - VP sir. He picked it up , moved to another side

Swayams room-

Vp sir has basically asked them for a draft plan and Sharon s making them do it in the night , they finally convince her they ll do it in the morning. Everyone including Sharon left, rey stayed back as taani seems to have gone out leaving her mobile. He doesn't know where shes gone.

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After a while- rey and taani in the front room fighting

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skfirdous thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
loved it
now why TR fighting
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Poor Rey felt left out
Why are Taarey fighting
Please update soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely updt...
love taarey's convo...bt bechari taani ka laptop...
ye gang apna attitude change kyun nehi karte...
thank to XXX for his idea...finally taani's project doesnt waste...
feelng bad for rey...he is feelng left out...poor rey...
taarey fight...plzzz jyada serious mat karana...
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Posted: 11 years ago
good
finally taani ko sara work to fir se nahi karna pada
gang is to much
rey is feeling left out
no taarey fight pls
dont like it

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
taani ka laptop thod diya aur sry bhi nahi bolte ajeeb hai hai log
y taarey enter in fight i think the XXX guys rey jealous and all

update soon

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