'you are mine, only mine' A Kriyaansh SS - Page 9

Main bina pms ke padh leti hun...

amazing ss
loved it


update soon nd do pm

the part 3 was really fabulous... rey finally realize and try to talk to her but she complete ignore him... and swayan and sharon also had a small tifs... and are into argument...
superb and amazing end...

jaha res kiya waha unres nai hua..m unlucky
anki...u r magical...i love u seriously...wenever i ask anything..u give it to me without thinking twice...nd the effort u put jst for me makes my heart swell evrytym...u r one of the bst thing that happened to me on IF...
okay so lets start...
i loved the sequence of swaron fighting for kriya coz she seem.unwell...that frndly concern was so evident...nd furious sharon pouncing on poor swayam...silly...
then the oh so great mr.singhania...what to say...in the start..i was like.."he is back to square 1"...abi he was planning to win her heart nd now again...!!!...
but phew...!!!..it was a dream...just dream...well his condition after he woke up...pathetic...nd then..kriya ki entry...hands down anki...ur thought process is so deep nd meaningful...u tuk care of her appearance in regards with the happening of previous day...this atrempt of urs was highlight for me...her wearing make up nt to impress her beloved but to hide that claim of him...really very well executed...then them being left alone...u showed their emotions brilliantly girl..her constant gaze on him nd him avoiding it...contrast...perfect...this idiot is really brainless...he knows kriya has a habit of misinterpretation...still he will follow the same track...nd this tym again she misunderstood him...though m very much happy with it...he needs to put up lots of effort..nd a single sorry has spoiled evrything..bt it cant mend the destruction...
m in aaww with u anki...i luv u i luv u i luv u...nd i can say it hundred times..no thousand..no no lakhs nd crores..millions nd trillions..nope...infinite times..coz i seriously do...

res

I cannot bloody believe I never read this! :o

Res.

Nice one.. I realy liked it..
Thanq fr d pm.. :))

I cannot believe that I never came across this ss before !!! 😲
Its just super duper ahmazinggg !!!
I mean how do you manage to capture so many myriad emotions in just 3 parts !!Its an art I guess !!!
You are just too awesome a writer!!!
And you just have to have to have to continue this one!!!
Its too friggin good !!!
Waiting for your update !!!!! 😃

wow...it waz suprb...
just dont have enough adjectives to describe dis part...
kriya wearing make up to hide trances of last night...
i likd dis sentence...
i spcly likd d last part

"I love you too much to let go so easily."

i lovd dis line lyk hell...i mean it conveys all d emotions of rey...
do write soon...

Awesome update
Beautifully written
I love the way u describe kriya's feelings
Please pm me