'you are mine, only mine' A Kriyaansh SS - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
This is dam awsum.
how i wish i could write like this
will be eagerly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
That was so good...

I love the way you described their emotions.

Awww I'm in love with this please update soon and pm me.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
wonderful update
amazing one
n beautifully written
loved whole chapter
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
awsome update

loved it...

pls update it soon..


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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
Amazing...
Rey's feeling were perfectly described...
loved Sharon protectivenesss for Kria...
everything was jst pefectly perfect...
loved it damm much!!
waiting ahead for further update!!
do update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
Reserved...

i'll unrese after reading all the parts... (:
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Unres...

okay i was thinking k i'll read this tomorrow...

than i thought i'll just read 1st part...

but i just can;t stop myself after reading first part to read further...

this is amazing dear...

this is full of love passion intensity...

i so loved it...

really eagerly waiting for the nest part...

please try to update soon... (:


Edited by ..Roop.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha

jaha res kiya waha unres nai hua..m unlucky
anki...u r magical...i love u seriously...wenever i ask anything..u give it to me without thinking twice...nd the effort u put jst for me makes my heart swell evrytym...u r one of the bst thing that happened to me on IF...
that's the best thing I've ever heard sweety.😊Offcourse I will do it for you, anything u want..you're my sweet bachcha na..😆


okay so lets start...
i loved the sequence of swaron fighting for kriya coz she seem.unwell...that frndly concern was so evident...nd furious sharon pouncing on poor swayam...silly...
then the oh so great mr.singhania...what to say...in the start..i was like.."he is back to square 1"...abi he was planning to win her heart nd now again...!!!...
but phew...!!!..it was a dream...just dream...well his condition after he woke up...pathetic...nd then..kriya ki entry...hands down anki...ur thought process is so deep nd meaningful...u tuk care of her appearance in regards with the happening of previous day...this atrempt of urs was highlight for me...her wearing make up nt to impress her beloved but to hide that claim of him...really very well executed...then them being left alone...u showed their emotions brilliantly girl..her constant gaze on him nd him avoiding it...contrast...perfect...this idiot is really brainless...he knows kriya has a habit of misinterpretation...still he will follow the same track...nd this tym again she misunderstood him...though m very much happy with it...he needs to put up lots of effort..nd a single sorry has spoiled evrything..bt it cant mend the destruction...
you know I love it when u describe your feeling soo well, I mean, tu har ek line padti hain itni pyaar se, It really makes me feel special..😊


m in aaww with u anki...i luv u i luv u i luv u...nd i can say it hundred times..no thousand..no no lakhs nd crores..millions nd trillions..nope...infinite times..coz i seriously do...



haha, and I love you too...😊 always..ask anything, and I'll try my best...Always..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
tum jo bi likhogi uski hr line padhni hi padegi..who wants to miss such a masterpeice...??
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: ..Roop..

Reserved...

i'll unrese after reading all the parts... (:
___________________

Unres...

okay i was thinking k i'll read this tomorrow...

than i thought i'll just read 1st part...

but i just can;t stop myself after reading first part to read further...
[😆😆😆😆 highest achievement]

this is amazing dear...

this is full of love passion intensity...

i so loved it...

really eagerly waiting for the nest part...

please try to update soon... (:




I WILL TRY😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: So_Naley

I cannot believe that I never came across this ss before !!! 😲
Its just super duper ahmazinggg !!!
I mean how do you manage to capture so many myriad emotions in just 3 parts !!Its an art I guess !!!
You are just too awesome a writer!!!
And you just have to have to have to continue this one!!!
Its too friggin good !!!
Waiting for your update !!!!!
😃



hehe😆😆 that's really sweet of you, but am not that good, not at all..Thank you soo much for commenting.😊 I will try to update soon..😊

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