'you are mine, only mine' A Kriyaansh SS - Page 12

That was so amazing...

This was awesome!

Like totally, so beautiful, I could pucturize each and every line.

You write so beautifully and those lines about the kisses, I'm flat, dead!

The kiss in the fire exit... 😳 yeah just that...

I'm sad this ended I loved it.

Well keep writing and pm me for the next updates... :)

👏 👏 👏 .wow...
A perfect ending for a great story...
Loved the story completely...The first chapter n this last chapter are my personal favs...really no words yr...
U r such an awesome writer n loved ur style of writing...
Expecting more n more works from u...

Dis is sooo awesome!!!
In d start i was lyk wat d hell was dat!!!! Bt den i was happy!!!
Bt dat tym kriya misunderstood rey!!!!
N dat rey cudnt even say it loud wen he needed to!!!! 😡
Bt d whole plot is captivating!!!!
N wid d description...it only makes u wanna read further!!!
U r grt!!! *salute*
N d ending!!! O my gosh!!!! Its just so perfect!!!!!
I love it!!!!
So d green monster in rey made him do such things!!!
He did surely curse it!!!
Bt den eventually...he did thank d green monster inside him for making him confess his LOVE!!!
N d title itself shows d possessive lovely relationship!!!
N d description of d kiss u gave is awesome!!!!
N i specially lykd rey's confession!!!! "God help me. I wanna do it again n again!!!" Dat was wat rey is!!!!
I love it really!!!!
Thnk u both!!! U for writing dis so beautifully n captivatingly!!!
N ur frnd for giving u d idea to write on d subject!!!! 👏
Also i loved ur writing style!!! Expecting more n more works from u!!!

amazing end to SS..!

OMG..!! did it jus end...??
yaar...i sooo lovd dis part...

n spcly dese lines:

A kiss pushed them apart, they had to bury their
feelings.
A kiss dug out those feelings, they had to face
them once again.
And this kiss depicted their feelings, they are now
brought closer. Together.

wow...it was such a nyc write up...
i lovd spcly wn rey said...
m sory for not taking ur permisn last nite...

lovd d last part too...
possive boyfriend...
n kriya teasing him...
nyc part...

O-M-G !!
Babe i knew you are amazing but you just superceded your best with this one !!
It was just so breathtaking beautiful !! I was just mesmerised throughout !!
Every emotion,every minute detail was potrayed in such an insanely amazing manner !!
It was just the ultimate romantic chappy !!
You know there comes a time when you get all depressed and sullen with life and start having melancholy thoughts about how life is just a neverending loop of struggles and only pragmatic people suffice in such a world and concepts like love don't exist ?
That's exactly when you need to read such stories to reinstate you faith in pure love,passion and surrender !
Sorry for that...guess I digressed a little but I just had to say it !!

I can't believe the amount of minutia you took care of in this one!!
You friggin described Kriya's expression with such precision that I could almost imagine her right in front of me...you know such things is what makes me connect to a story better when you are in a protagonists shoes and you exactly know what they are thinking...
It was so crucial to represent the appeal she holds for him!!

And then the confession ! I was gaping at my phone for atleast 2 mins while reading abt that moment and my sis thought I had lost it !!
It was just sooo intense !!
Perfectly justified the complexity of Kriyaansh and their journey to admitting to their feelings!!

I don't know how you find such ornate but yet precise words to describe every emotion ! Its admirable !
Well I have so much more to say but maybe later !!

Another inspired work Anki ! Amazing ! 😊

I loved the ending though i am upset that it ended so soon.

muje or bi likhna hai pr samaj nai aa rha kese likhu...
u r a beautiful soul anki...
u took the pain of making it a ss on my insistence...the thought flatters me itself...