'you are mine, only mine' A Kriyaansh SS

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Ankita

@anki_22

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha
muje or bi likhna hai pr samaj nai aa rha kese likhu...
u r a beautiful soul anki...
u took the pain of making it a ss on my insistence...the thought flatters me itself...

it's okk babu, I understand..!😊 you're special and always will be.. and it was NOT a pain, I enjoyed it throughout.. kabhi kabhi I felt ki story bohot hi jyada lame ho rahi hain but your complimentary comments always made me go all vain😆 so yupp, thank you sooo much..😆

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alex754

@alex754

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Epilogue was sooo goood
I totally loved
Thanks for pm

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Sonia

@princessSonia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Anki

Awesum is a small word dear...
its amazing...

Loved it...

Finally everythng is in correct place...
N KR r together widout any MU...

Sorry fr d late rply...

N thnks fr d pm...

P.s. bdw I hve one request do scrap me once u r online...😉

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why do u think i wud tell ya ? ;)

@SheLooks18ToMe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Res

Unresuuu

MANNN ! This is BANG ON!!!!

I'm loving it so so so so muchhh!

I still can't get over it!

Sabse pehle it started with a kiss..

Then he accused her! shitt... ye kya kiya Rey ne.. he forced himself on her,, its almost like raping someone..

Shitt.. she's emotionally Shattered 🥺

obviously.. she's not a fool to take his spur of the moment acts all the damn time -___- And then the sorrys he repeats ! Huh! Moron :P

Yeahhh.. Mujhe bura laga.. Bbut the aggrssive track! MAYNE! *_____*

Dialogue pe Dialogue ! Waah Anki! Mme loves it wayyy tooo muchh! <3 <3

That make up vala part got me all emotional malum </3 Dil hi toot gya tha!

But then the FE scene! Hhayyyeee Everything was so beautifully penned in easy going simple words! ❤️

Typical Baatcutter she won't even let him speak 🤣

Finalllyyy They said what they feelll ❤️

Aww.. he's wayyy too possessive ! hahahahha! :D :D ROFL!

I loved how u potrayed the last words. It was beautiful as i said.

U are not a great writer, you are an amazing writer and lemme tell u, you are wayyy better than me! (;

Itna aggressive track ke baad lovey dovey scene, esa kyu karti ha.. bacche ka dil toot jaata ha ! :P :P

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Aishwarya

@Rictusempra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Ohh My God !!
This was something really very very awesome ! 😃

U got inspired by SanDhir, but wrote on KR ? Nice ! 😃

I read this from the beginning, abhi hi...
I loved the setup... Concept... Plot... Everything!
I'm really finding it hard to put in words, but yeaa, it was nicely thoughy...
The way u portrayed everything was great. Selection of words was flawless. I liked every bit of it ! 😉

But I still find myself drooling over the plot... 😆
Superb work dii... 😊 😊

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..Re..

@..Re..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

^____^ oh my motherf**king goodness! Can't believe I am reading this now like literally NOW I mean seriously why am I reading this now? Yeah because I am lazy as f**k and I didn't even check my PM's until now. 😭

Anyway, this was so,umm, well...amazing, superb, marvelous, f**king exiciting and so so soo well written. 👏

Jealous Rey is the best Rey and rebellious and bold kria is the best kria. AGRESSIVE KRIYAANSH IS THE BEST KRIYAANSH!!.

My fav part was the last one like oh god can I please have a realtionship like Kriyaansh. I so loved each and every part and just like how everything comes to an end so does this SS.

I wished there were more parts but than the SS would look strechy and uncalled for because you already summed up everything and with such beauty...I am beyond amazed.

You go gurll and let me tell you that this was soo...

Edited by ..Re.. - 11 years ago

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Ankita

@anki_22

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: ..Re..
^____^ oh my motherf**king goodness! Can't believe I am reading this now like literally NOW I mean seriously why am I reading this now? Yeah because I am lazy as f**k and I didn't even check my PM's until now. 😭
hehe I know you were busy dearie😳

Anyway, this was so,umm, well...amazing, superb, marvelous, f**king exiciting and so so soo well written. 👏

Jealous Rey is the best Rey and rebellious and bold kria is the best kria. AGRESSIVE KRIYAANSH IS THE BEST KRIYAANSH!!. <-- True that😆

My fav part was the last one like oh god can I please have a realtionship like Kriyaansh. I so loved each and every part and just like how everything comes to an end so does this SS.

I wished there were more parts but than the SS would look strechy and uncalled for because you already summed up everything and with such beauty...I am beyond amazed.
hehe, thanks girl, you were one of those ppl who supported me throughout..and endured it..!😆😆😆

You go gurll and let me tell you that this was soo...