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ashw99

@ashw99

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#451

Wonderful updates sandy...

The end of the update kept me hooked... i desperately wanted khushi to come out of that room asap... cause even i get really scarred of reptiles... so i was praying for her to come out anyhow...

For Arnav it was realisation to the fact that... "He needed khushi in the life like he needed the next breath to survive"... amazing.

Now that they are aware of it hope they make the right move this time sparing their ego for once...

It started beautiful... Anya getting nostalgic... Mami snoring... Anji, Shyam, and Akash chilled and teasing... And then the panic moment... if i was worried for Payal... their was entirely other thing coming up...

Does Akash knows about upset Payal... why did he leave her alone..??

You are amazing everything was just playing in front of me... Beautifully penned...

Will wait for next...

Thanks for updates.

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#452

Awesome update...

Life is unpredictable... We think that we have all the time in the world but in situations like this we get to know the reality of life... No one knows what the next moment holds for them...

This situation was like an eye opener to Arnav... The importance khushi has in his life got clear to him... His life is incomplete without her... I m so happy that finally he realized his feelings...

Loved the update...

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faffy

@faffy

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#453

Love is the most sublime and precious emotion of all, yet it renders you extremely vulnerable - I saw this being reflected in this update with great clarity and lucidity.

Overcome with worry, fear, anxiety and restlessness on one hand and the realisation of love and unspoken words on the other have brought the two closer to the truth - truth of their unparalleled love for each other.

Flawless update that kept me on the edge of my seat breathless and agog...

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#454

What started off as a beautiful satiated car ride back home after the most awesome

time spent in beautiful Nainital curtesy the wedding ceremony ... ended up being a

nightmare when they figured out that Khushi was missing and no one knew where

she had disappeared ! 😲

The description of the road lined with pine trees along the mountain slopes with the

snow falling was so realistic that I felt I was actually in the warm car with them hearing

Manorama's snores ... 😆

Anya's nostalgia about her sisters wedding ceremony ... the sanctity of the promises

made to each other ... and missing Aman ... 😳

But thank God for small mercies ... Anya wanted to be with her friends hence the change

in cars where she figured out that Khushi was missing !!!

The panic that gripped everyone when no one knew where she may be is very palpable ...

Arnav's intense distress at not being able to find her ... myriad of thoughts coursing his mind ...

On the other hand Khushi's dilemma at being stuck in the basement store room with the

phobia she has about snakes ... imagining that she saw a snake literally took over all

coherent thoughts and actions ... literally paralysing her with fear ... God it was all so real ...

And then when he did find her all he wanted was to crush her in his arms ... the relief he felt

was so apparent ... "The relief spread through him so quickly that he went weak in the knees... "

Thanks Sandhya ... super frightening chapter ... even I was worried about the whereabouts

of Khushi darling !

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Arilip

@Arilip

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#455

From her dark nightmare to paradise of love...nice chapter😊

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#456

just glad that Arnav found Khushi... loved the update...

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#457

So this was part of what you meant in the last line of the previous update.

Only desperation of loosing the other made both to shed their ego and think that they needed to acknowledge, voice out their feelings and life was too short to live otherwise!

Lovely update Sandhya.

Waiting to see how you deal with rest of the couples.

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arshisimple

@arshisimple

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#458

Wow it was unexpected. But I think both of them realized the depth of their love for each other.. I was so scared the whole time I was reading about Khushi in basement,.. very well written 👏

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Param

@pup03

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#459

wonderful update !!! khushi remembering her parents, her friends and arnav during those chilling moments.. fear takes it all.. arnav's relief to see khushi and to be with her are defining moments of their relations.. loved the update... 😃

thanks for pm 😊

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dsbj

@dsbj

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#460

luved ana and amans story .. going smoothly..
feel bad for payal.. don't understand what's akash doing.. doesn't he know what's happening around him? doesn't he know what's going on between mami and payal?
khushi's story heading for a huge turning point of her life i guess.. and wonder what will happen next.. waiting for next.

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