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Posted: 11 years ago

#471

It's good .. I was scared at the end..

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sruthick

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Posted: 11 years ago

#472

Awesome update...
Lovd it..
Finally Arnav realizd his feelings..Ryt..??
Was ther really a snake in d cupboard..??

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shr1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#473

That was action-packed! I have my fingers cold, even while typing this. You my dear are excellent :)

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opsyellow

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Posted: 11 years ago

#474

Right now the only thing I can say is that I AM SPECHLESS just like khushi

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bkamber

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Posted: 11 years ago

#475

Awesome update.
Loved the chapter...it was intense.
That was an ordeal Khushi went thru.
Scary...don't like snakes myself.

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ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#476

I myself do not like the snake...poor khushi at least arnav is with her now

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ssyahoo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#477

Powerful chapter Sandy and definitely unexpected! This caught me by surprise.

This chapter was surely about Arnav's emotions and realizations. So he can realize how much Khushi means to him! I noticed how panicked he was when she was missing, the swearing, the fear in the voice, and anxiety were quite escalated. However, once he has located Khushi, his fear seems to alleviate a little bit. I was surprised at his rationality of wondering why a snake would be in a dark basement at that time along with gentler voice. This is a slightly more unique of an Arnav that you are depicting 👏

There's no doubt that he loves her immensely but I can't help read into his character and what that signifies for his future actions. I may be totally wrong, but who knows ?

Wonderful, suspenseful chapter!

Edited by ssyahoo - 11 years ago

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mbibi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#478

For someone like me who is not only afraid of snakes but also claustrophobic, I can completely relate to Khushis predicament; she still amanged to put up a brave and sensible front by not making sudden movements and screaming, I doubt I would have that kind of control but it's so fascinating what your mind can make you do under such fight or flight circumstances! I hope she's not hurt too bad thought from her fall...

Oh Arnav's interaction with her was so heartwarming; he could see that he had to handle they situation very very delicately because Khushi was not just scared, she was traumatized, almost to the point of hysteria, so good going on his part of trying to pacify her first instead of going with his initial reaction of running straight to her!

I hope this incident will help him better come to terms with his feelings with Khushi and the kind of attachment and importance she has developed in his life

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chenis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#479

Awesome update.

Did khushi really see a snake or was her phobia which made her see things.

Finally Arnav realized khushis importance in his life . I hope he expresses his feelings to her.

How didn't nani notice khushi wasn't back from the house because she was the one who had sent her to fetch the handkerchief or was it her intention to let the lovebirds spend some time together😉

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Poju

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Posted: 11 years ago

#480

Hey Sandhya,

Thank u for the PM... 😊

Update was great.. i was wondering where khushi could be... i thought Arnav and Khushi stayed back purposely... Did not think she could actually get lost like dat...

u stopped at the wrong point wanted to read more of it... Part2 was needed her 😛

Also wanted to know bout Payal and Akash... but guess it will be in the next update ..

Please please update sooner...😃