TaaRey One Shot - Innocent Confession

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Innocent Confession


Taarey are in college...they love each other but didnt confess...taani thought that rey cant love a girl like her as he is colleges hottest boys girls drool over him...and rey was very nervous to tell her that he loves her...he daily secretly admired her without even notice her n her possessive bro swayum
D3 gang and taani knows each other as taani is swayum sister they sometimes hangout together...taani had her own friends group

D3 gang was sitting in canteen...reys eyes were on door...he was waiting for his angel...she is late today

REYs POV
God!!! Looks like she is late...but swayum toh aa gaya...vese toh bda possessive bro banta hai but apni bahen ko akela college aane ke liye chod diya...ab muje apni angel ka aur kitna wait karna padega...taani ke krishna ji usse jaldi behjo na...

Just then taani entered in canteen as if god has listen his request

Rey (Himself) - She is looking like an angel in her white churidaar MY angel... She is the one my eyes got stucked on...her chochlate brown eyes always pulled me toward her...i Just wanna drown into her magical eyes there is some kind of sensation pulling me towards her...i never even look at any girl in my life untill she came TAANI SHEKHAWAT the itself is very special for me
Her cuteness, her innocence, her caring toward her love one attaracted me toward her...i wants to confess my love but am not sure whether she loves me or not...i dont want to hurt her

He didnt realise when taani came n sat beside him as gang call her to join them

END OF REY's POV

all are disscussing about prom night...soon all left from there except taarey as they still have to do work for prom night as they are GS and AGS

Rey : Taani hum ek store room mein jaakar samaan check kar lete hai
Taani : okay

OUTSIDE THE STORE ROOM

They were about to enter in store room when somebody call rey from back
Kriya came toward him... She is a babe of the college every guy loved her.. She came wearing a mini skirt putting lipgloss on her lips and slightly came to rey and gave him a hug infront of Taani
Taani somehow controlled herself and kept look at them

Kriya : hey rey

Rey : hii kriya

Kriya : so aaj raat aap kiske saath party mein aa rahe hai

Rey : still not decided (looking at taani)

Kriya : wow!!! Aaj college prom night ke liye mujhe apna partner mil gaya

Rey : who (confuse)

Kriya : you

Rey : me

Taani was broken into pieces she wanted to kill that kriya

Rey sees the jealous look on taanis he was getting sure that she feels something for him..he decided to play

Kriya : bye rey see u in evening

She again hug him and kissed him on his cheek

Thats it taani cant control...she moves in store rom and a drop of tear fall from her eyes...she is hurt after seeing that kriya so close to her rey

Rey was very fustrated with kriyas over chipkoo behaviour..he too move inside store room
And the sight infront of him made his heart sink in pain.
HIS taani was crying...now he was sure that she loves him

he move toward her
Rey : Taani...
Taani quickly wipe her tears and turned toward him
Taani : rey!!! ha boliye

Rey : taani why r u crying
Taani : m not crying..something fell in my eyes
Rey : Jhoot...kah do ki tum meri aur kriya ki closeness ki vajh se nahi ro rahi ho

Taani : n..no..wh..why should i cry be..coz of ur...ur and kriyas closeness...mujhe koi farak nahi padta *stammered*

Rey : koi farak nhi padta..

Take step toward her while she take step backward

Taani : na..nhi
Rey : really

Taani : ha

Rey trapped her between his body n wall...block her with his arms...taani was looking down nervously

Rey : Taani look into my eyes
Taani look up
Rey : now say that tumhe koi farak nahi padta

Taani : why are you so close to her
She asked cutely n innocently

Rey : isse tumhe kyun farak padta hai
Taani : ky..kyu..kyunki

Rey come closer to her face

Rey : kyunki
Taani : kyunki...i
Rey : you
Taani lost in his eyes
Taani : i love you

She said innocently...a tear fell from his eyes...today he got everything his angel said i love you to him

Rey smiled and pulled her toward him by her waist

Rey : i love you too jaan...you dont know how much i craved for listening this three words from you

Taani : really...toh fir yeh kya hai
Wiping lipstick mark from his cheeks

Rey : sorry sweetheart aur vese bhi kriya ne mujhe kiss kiya mene nahi

Taani : fir bhi...mujhe aapse baat nahi karni
Taani turned her face other side

Rey : taani sorry na...chalo usne mujhe yaha kiss kiya na toh tum mujhe yha kiss kardo (pointing at his lips) *naughtly* m all Yours Baby

Rey tighten his hold on her waist n bring her more closer to him...both are lost in each others eyes...soon their lips met in a innocent sweet kiss .

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Posted: 11 years ago
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res/unres
amazing & such a cute os
all the scenes r fab
& i love their confession
keep rocking dear😊
Edited by navk - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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RES/UNRES.
Best Part :')
"She is looking like an angel in her
white churidaar MY angel... She is the one my eyes
got stucked on...her chochlate brown eyes always
pulled me toward her...i Just wanna drown into her
magical eyes there is some kind of sensation pulling
me towards her...i never even look at any girl in my
life untill she came TAANI SHEKHAWAT the itself is
very special for me
Her cuteness, her innocence, her caring toward
her love one attaracted me toward her...i wants to
confess my love but am not sure whether she loves
me or not...i dont want to hurt her."


My angel .. Hayyeee.
And, It was such a cute confession. I'm still blushing *don't know why :P)

Kriya chipkoo.. Maaze aa gye XD
And, Taani jealous. Ufff :')

And, " I'm all yours " Awww. Rey I so wish you could imply that in the show -.-
But, it was really nice and refreshing. Keep it up !


-Riddhi-
Edited by -Riddhi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome OS!!!! So cute!!! Loved it!!! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome yr
sooo cute and innocent
even rey was irritated wid kriya nice
taani's confession was so cute😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome OS :)
Loved it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome os
its so lovely & cute os
taani jealous
their confession is nice
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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haayee .. dis was damn cute ..! 😳
taarey .. luvd dem ..! ☺️

rey lost in his angel .. superb ..! 👍🏼

taarey confession .. awesum ..! 😳

luvly OS ..! 👏

thank u 4 d pm .. 😊

keep writing ..! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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SUCH A CUTE AND AWESOME OS CUTIE CUTIE SMILEY SMILEY AND AS MY FRD RADDHI SAIS-----------


And, " I'm all yours " Awww. Rey I so wish you could imply that in the show -.-
But, it was really nice and refreshing. Keep it up
!


IT WAS REALLY GOOF FELT NICE READING IT

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Posted: 11 years ago
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AWWW...!!!!
shoo cute..!!
He loved her and she too loved him both sacred to tell bcd both thought why would he/she love me...!!!!
Kriya se taani jealous...!!!
HONI CHAHIYE...!!!
The sweet confession...
loved it...!!

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