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Posted: 11 years ago
hi dear! Interesting update! KC facing loss! Adi calls Maan bt he is no longer the CEO! NT N Kamya running the company! Maan decides to go! Dev goes with him! Maan arrives n tells reporters off! Gets rid of NT! NT n Kamya angry n vow revenge n make a plan! Oh no! Wt will do do! Dev disgusted by NT! Tells Meera abt it! Past - Geet does nt want his help! Maan angry! Both attracted to each other n cannot control! They argue! Geet is rude n apologises! Maan making arrangements 4 her his company's guest house! Geet agains says no! Maan angry! Geet sacred of his anger! update soon! Well written! Pls update BD, COL soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 7
awesome...
nice...
NT and Kamya?
they are Maan's step sisters?
and he has left KC?
or just doing his own work alone leaving the responsibilities to these 2 idiots?
and NT is eyeing Dev?
oh ho and Dev is married to Meera...
the precap is so funny...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part
so here comes the chudails
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsum part
so maan hv to again take over kc bkz of the nikhamis n he angry
past maan is soo rude with geet bt also feel restless
hmmm maan gt to knw that geet was indeed in need of job n he helping her 😊
ailaaa both r soo much attracted to each other 😆😉
waiting eagerly fo next😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update siri...ye kya NT n kamiya k wajah se KC ki itni buri condition ho gai h...grrr ye dono chahti kya h?????
maan ne ek baar phir KC takeover kr li...
god ye NT ab kya krne wali h???
in past both maan n geet attracted towards each other...wah maan apne aap kp best lier bol rh h...idiot thik se jhoot bola tho aata nai h...
maan ne geet ko job de di n usse company k guest house me le k ja rh h...
precap was nice tho NT ko slap padne wala h dev se gud
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update !!:)

Dev & meera knws NT frm earlier ..how & what NT is planning to do with Dev ??

Maan taking geet to his guest house & also gave her secrataries job ..

precap is superb NT got a slap [3:)]
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Posted: 11 years ago
Maan saved her when she was young... so later he felt that attraction for her... Geet has gone thru so much torture becoz of her family.. upaqr se maan's arrogant behaviour added to her miseries.. But liked her.. she never complained abt anything...nice updates..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update. Maan is back as the CEO. But why did he leave the post in the first place.
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Happy Ugadi and new year to u all guys!😃

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RECAP

PRESENT

Here in Maaneet's room,Maan was inside her and she was moaning continuously.He started to thrust inside her ranting sweet words as I love u...I love u...I love u!And at once Geet reached her climax and Maan too followed after her.Both were sated and cuddled up inside each other's embrace.Both Maan and Dev had found solace inside their wives but they dint know that what's gonna come tomorrow as storm.

PAST

Maan parked the car in the footpath and bent down towards her glaring angrily.Geet saw his glared and was scared and went back for which he pulled the seat strap angrily and bound her to the seat.She was shocked to see him binding her to seat tightly while he spoke angrily,"And where r u gonna sleep tonight?Here in footpaths right?"Geet who was scared of his anger nodded yes meekly and he glared more like sounding what and then she meekly nodded no to him.Then he went back and said,"Good!"And drove towards his company guest house.But Geet was in her own storm of emotions where she wanted to kiss those sculpted lips which were moving in front of her.She pouted inside her mind cursing Maan for messing things.

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Part 08

PRESENT

After 2 hrs of their love making and after next 2 hrs of sleeping in each other's embrace,Geet stirred in her sleep and opened her eyes as it was her time to feed Bhoomi.She stirred in his embrace and was abt to get up when he tightened his arms around her waist.She looked up to get he was wide awake.Before he would ask her further they heard the sharp cry once again.

Maan pouted,"Am sorry!I will bring her lie down jaan!"

Maan got up and pulled his tracks when he saw Geet pulling his shirt and wearing it immediately and covering her lower pt from the sheet.

Geet saw him seeing darkly when she said,"Dont!We need to be more discreet now we have two children in house!"

Maan knew she was right and nodded and went towards the crib.He immediately took Bhoomi inside his chest when she stopped crying.She knew one thing that her dada cant see her tears and immediately she saw him walking towards her mother.

When he came near Geet then she jumped cutely towards her and she was cradled inside the lap and nipple was stuffed inside her.Bhoomi cutely latched the milk making weird noises and holding her heavy curve in her tiny hand.Maan immediately held her curves for which Geet yelped and pouted glaring at him.Maan pecked her forehead with the mischievous smile.Bhoomi was observing her parents who was exchanging the expressions and cutely kicked her tiny legs to Maan's chest.Maan looked up and chuckled seeing Bhoomi pouting and accusing that they dint give attention towards her.Maan kissed her tiny feet when Geet saw Bhoomi lovingly.Bhoomi giggled cutely still sucking the milk and groaned softly.She pouted feeling his stubble on her feet and once again she scratched her tiny legs to his cheek.

Maan complained cutely,"Jaan,look at her she is scratching me.Why is it so?"

Geet giggled,"That's becoz she dont like ur stubble,its getting longer,u need to shave it!"

Maan once again rubbed his stubble to her tiny feet and asked,"Is it?"

Bhoomi giggled cutely and kicked her tiny feet once again.Maan chuckled and kissed her feet.When she finished drinking milk on that time she was dozing once again.

Maan pouted and asked,"How much she sleeps?"

Geet said,"That's becoz she's still adjusting to the time jaan!"

Maan dint understand so she clearly explained.

Geet said,"Jaan,she's only one month old baby!She needs to adjust to this type of environment.When she was in my womb,she always slept and she dint had any work to do except to kick when she reached her 6th month.But now she has lot more to concentrate but they need time to adjust to this environment.Moreover Babies grow when they sleep only.That's why when Bhoomi sleeps every night she needs her mother's warmth.If she wont get it then she may have fever.This is an pshychological feeling of the baby where she needs her mother's warmth to go to sleep and she only gets when she latches the milk.On that time she feels mother's warmth and food too,that's why she goes to sleep once again when she gets these two!"

Maan was fascinated to hear this and nodded in approval.Geet changed her diaper to fresh one and made her to sleep inside the crib.Bhoomi snuggled to the blanket and he kissed her forehead lovingly.Then he came back to his bed and pulled her on him hugging her lovingly and dozed off.

Next morning Maan got up to see his angel already was having her feed.He tickled her tiny feet to gain her attention.Geet smiled broadly seeing him smiling pleasantly.Then Bhoomi showed her gummy smile and cutely kicked her legs which went on his bony cheek.He kissed her feet and softly tickled.Bhoomi giggled for his sculpted lips widened with broad smile.He sighed hearing her soft giggle and went away for bathing.Geet had set up everything in the bathroom-his shaving set,his toothbrush with paste,his bathrobe and then his fluffy towel.He took his bath and shaved his stubble and came outside.

Geet was shocked to see her handsome husband back and said without thinking,"U look so hot!"He had shaved his stubble as per his daughter's demand. ;-)

Maan who saw her narrowed his eyes and then she has been pulled towards him and was asked,"How much hot?"

Geet blushed profusely and turned away when he lifted her chin and took her lush lips.He kissed her passionately and saw Bhoomi cutely throwing her socks which Geet had wore.Maan went to her and grazed his soft cheek to her tiny feet and asked,"How is it now angel?"Bhoomi who felt the softness stretched her hands towards him and he came near her.She kissed his cheek with wet kisses and he chuckled.He kissed her forehead and wore the socks which she threw due to the feel of warmth.

Maan chuckled seeing her pouting lips and asked Geet,"What's the plan of Bhoomi today?"

Geet said in babyish tone,"Bhoomi will take head bath!"

Maan smiled broadly and pretend to pout,"Then i cant be able to participate,will u send me the video!So that i can enjoy my angels bath!"

Geet knew what he was saying and immediately whacked his head and said,"Behave!"

Maan chuckled seeing her cute blush and said,"Show me the video when i come back!"

She nodded and he walked away pecking Bhoomi's forehead and this time Geet pouted for not getting any kiss.Maan was walking towards the door when he turned and looked back to Geet.He knew he had forgot something and came back and immediately pecked her lips tightly and went away making her blush furiously.

Here Dev asked,"Meera,when is Ansh gonna come,am missing him.Call ur mother,i want my Ansh in KM,today!"

Meera said,"I talked with mom today early morning,they're coming to KM with him today!"

Dev sighed controlling his anxiety.Ansh is not the biological son of Dev but the love which Dev has towards Ansh was priceless.Meera who had been abandoned by her lover came across Dev in her life.Dev won her trust and love when she was devastated in her life due to her love's betrayal.When Meera and Dev were classmates from law college from that time Dev had some attraction towards Meera.That attraction turned as true love for him towards Meera and today Dev though dint give any genes is the father of Ansh who he loves beyond his life.

Meera kissed his back and asked,"U miss him!"

Dev said holding her hand,"He's my son,jaan!"

Meera said crying softly,"And he's lucky to have father like u!"

Dev nodded dismissively not approving her comment and walked away.Meera wiped her tears and went to kitchen to prepare breakfast.Geet too helped Meera and Soumya who was already present there preparing breakfast.

Soumya said to Geet,"Beta,ur father has gave approval to stay here only but we will take guest room!"

Geet protested immediately and said,"I will speak to him!"

Soumya tried to stop her but she immediately left the kitchen and entered Siddharth's room.

Geet asked politely,"Why dad u want to take one of the guest room?"

Siddharth who was engrossed with some university papers looked up to see his daughter-in-law seething in anger.He gulped his saliva seeing her anger as she rarely get angry and when she gets angry then it can destroy anything.Maan was aware of it and he only tolerated it.

Siddharth said,"Beta,listen to me!"

Geet said angrily now,"No,u listen to me dad!We barely use this house as we will be here for vacations and moreover u r the head of the family and i cant digest the fact that u r taking one of the guest room.I want u guys here dad so that whenever we bring our children so that u can show them good ways and love them.Dad,whatever u r doing please give us some space to fulfill ur debts!"

Now Siddharth was angry and he snarled,"What do u mean fulfilling debts?We dint took Maan to fulfill any debts,we dint accept u as our daughter-in-law to fulfill any debts!What more u want from us beta?"

Geet snarled angrily,"That u take the position of head to this family and lead us in right paths and if u accept the original rooms of it then it will be proven that u r leading us as a family or else i will think that u never thought like that in the case of Maan and u r detaching us from ur family."

Siddharth said painfully,"Not like that beta!"

Geet said angrily,"It is like that only dad!U saved Maan by clearing his drug debts by taking loans on this house and he wanted to do something to this family so he bought the house back by saving ur house so that u can cherish it till the death but u think that we r no one then that means that u r detaching us from ur family na!"

Siddharth was shocked to hear this piece of information and was proud to get Geet as his daughter-in-law.

Siddharth hugged her tightly kissing her forehead and said,"Am sorry beta for troubling u.I thought u were tolerating us becoz we are Maan's parents.What more i can expect from u?Though we're not biological parents of Maan but still i love Maan so much.But i dint know that u respect us to such an extent that u r ready to sacrifice this 100 crore valuable house which is in ur name."

Geet said painfully,"Dad,u understand me this much only?U r my family dad!From childhood,i always craved for love.I too have family now also but my luck is so good that i grew up in Orphanage.I only asked love from my family but they despised me that becoz of am a girl.But when i saw ur family dad,Annie and Dev's quarrel and Maan's innocence i thought dont i get family like this.Then god fulfilled my wishes,i came to this house as ur DIL,Maan's wife.I thought Dev and Annie as my siblings and Meera as my sister and Maan as lover and u guys as my mom and dad.I never was permitted in my family to call my mother as mom.They thought me as disgrace but here when i called u both as mom and dad then am meant u guys as mom and dad.It was not pretence but u understood me like this?"

Geet went away from there feeling hurt and Maan saw this.He knew how much she misses her family and she was trying to see her family in his family but Siddharth's words made her so hurt.In this case Siddharth wasnt wrong,he dint wanted to fall on the hands of his DIL that's why he refused to stay and when Geet insisted then he decided to stay in guest rooms.Maan came back to his room where she was crying silently holding Bhoomi to her heart.Bhoomi was all the way cutely wiping her tears and was trying to kiss her cheeks.

Geet said to Bhoomi still crying,"No one loves me jaan,am an unfortunate girl to get family but they dont trust me!"

Soumya who heard their convo glared at Siddharth for making the situation like this.

Siddharth said,"I will handle the situation!"

He came to her room and sat beside her.Bhoomi looked up to get her grandpa who smiled at her lovingly.She threw her arms and legs towards him when Geet looked up.

Geet pouted seeing Bhoomi's enthusiasm and gave her to him.

Siddharth took Bhoomi and cradled her on his chest and spoke,"Bhoomi beta,ur mother is so stubborn and mu me always!"

Geet glared at him and walked away to the bathroom to set up the bath tub for Bhoomi's head bath.Siddharth tried to speak to her but she dint let him and then at once he convinced that he was wrong.Siddharth was happy to get Geet as DIL as she was patient,understandable woman.

Maan saw everything has come to its place and left for the office with Dev having breakfast.With the siren Maan entered the KC with dev with attitude and glared at his staff who once again ran helter skelter.Dev who saw this chuckled to himself thinking how much they're scared of his bro.Dev was working as temporary till Veer comes and resumes his post.Veer Shekhawat who is in his honeymoon with his beloved Naina had switched off his mobile so that no one disturbs him from that day when Maan had dialled to him to talk abt something.Maan was irritated with his behaviour but was calm as he need privacy with his newly wed wife.Naintara knew about this so she was trying to trap Dev in her crutches.

It was abt 11,when Maan was busy in his cabin trying to finish his recent project when Naintara entered Dev's cabin.Naintara was smiling for himself as she had wore a short maroon dress with matching shoes.Her talons were long and shaped and her face full of make up as if someone had put make up overly on a ghost.Naintara saw around her and saw Dev working with some file intently.Naintara want to surprise him(Am thinking,yeh kuch zyaada nahin ho gaya?Na jaan,na pehchaan,she's getting comfortable with him?)Naintara came so near to Dev who was working in his cabin and immediately she got a strong slap.

Naintara widened her eyes with shock while Dev was shocked or pretended to be shocked and said,"Am sorry,i thought someone is here to harm me!"

Naintara held her cheek with pain.On that time they heard a tiny scream and Dev ran outside his cabin with broad smile.There staff saw a boy running towards Dev.Dev stretched his arms and immediately lifted the boy in his arms and kissed him all over his face.Naintara still stood holding her cheek with shock seeing the scene.Then she saw a woman coming towards Dev and she hugging Dev and the boy.Dev speaking to that woman lovingly.His eyes which eyed her lovingly made Naintara jealous.

Naintara grabbed the family's attention by snarling at the woman,"What is going on here?"

Dev narrowed his eyes thoughtfully and spoke politely,"Am really sorry Miss Khurana,it was an accident.I asked u sorry!"He said that with attitude.

But Naintara was eyeing Meera with jealousy and asked,"Who's she?"

Dev dint answer and turned away with attitude but Naintara wasnt the woman to be ignored and she pestered.At last Dev snarled,"She's my wife Meera and he's my son Ansh!Now u understood who r they so stop ur cheap tricks."

Naintara was stunned but dint give up and said,"U r lying me,u dont want me that's why u r trying to ignore me and for that u created this lie.U want to brush me off so that i wont follow u but u cant dispose me telling this lie."

Meera looked with incredulity and said,"We're not telling any lies.It is truth,so its better u stay away from my husband.Dont make Maan veerji to be ashamed of u by behaving like this!He have some dignity becoz of his achievements and dont destroy it!"Naintara still not convinced and asked with the compassion in which Dev felt uncomfortable.

Naintara asked huskily,"Tell me its a lie and she's not ur wife!"

Dev snarled,"If u dont want to believe then dont but this is true and if u wont believe me then u can ask Maan!He will surely show u the right path!"

Dev went from there pulling Meera inside his cabin.

PAST

Maan reached the company guest house and stopped in front of an luxurious apartment.Geet saw that and asked scared of expense,"Mr.Khurana,how much the rent is?"

Maan said casually,"Call me professor,if we r in our office or in our class!Dont worry abt the rent.I will pay that for u!"

Geet immediately,"Professor,i dont want to trouble u.So please tell me how much the rent is?"

Maan fisted his both palms and swallowed his anger and said angrily,"Dint i tell u...?"

But Geet cut across him,"Professor,what is the relationship between us?"

Maan said incredulously,"Do u have memory problem Ms.Handa?We're in the relationship of Professor and student and now another relationship is gonna develop which is called as Boss and Secretary in business world...!"

But once again Geet cut him,"Then why r u getting liberal to spend money on me!Do u have any intentions then let me tell u that am not interested?So u can find another girl who salvate ur hunger and thirst...!"

That's it...that's f***ing it...what do she think of herself and what do she think of myself?Maan glared at her angrily but his cheeks had reddened unknowingly and spoke,"Fine as u wish,whatever u think?But i wanted to help u till u get the scholarship.But seems u dont want my help then good!Tomorrow u need to be in my office at abt 8 in morning and dont be late.I hate latecomers.Sleep tight Ms.Handa!"And he went away not even glancing towards her.Geet sighed when he went away in his car.She took her luggage and opened the lock of the room which he had given before his exit and walked inside seeing around her.She was lucky to get another shelter and that too becoz of the great MSK.

She cleaned the room and kept her things in its places.She had a painting which was a replica of Ravi Verma's which showed the Lord Krishna preaching King Arjun about the life's cycle.She saw that painting and thought that she was Arjun who needed help and Lor Krishna was MSK who helped her.But she was in love with MSK who helped her but what she saw the man who was MSK had totally personality disorder.

She slipped into her bed and took a photo from under her pillow and saw a young man.He was so handsome and the chocolate eyes and M shaped lips always enhanced his beauty.He was 18 yr old who had won the cup to his college Hockey tournament and that was his victory.Those chocolate eyes had happiness which was not there now.Only pain he had which Geet felt.Geet spoke to the photo,"What's the pain which u r hiding Maan?"

Precap-Past-Same

Present-Maan pouting seeing Bhoomi who is all the way snoring on her chachu's shoulder.Maan walked towards Dev and gestured to give Bhoomi when Bhoomi opened her doe eyes and glared at Maan.Maan gulped his saliva seeing the glare and Bhoomi hid her face inside Dev's neck.Dev patted her back and she sighed eyeing her dada cautiously.


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