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Posted: 11 years ago
I love the way everyone from Maan's family make Antara run away.. but she is still so shameless girl... that she comes back.. Loved their family moments.. Past seems Geet wants him to remember her... N his ignorance hurts her.. Hope Maan will remember her.. loved teasers..
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Waiting for an update after reading the wonderful teaser.
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RECAP

PRESENT

Geet said,"Maan i asked abt this to Annie and she approved!"

Maan was happy hearing it and he cradled Mariah in his arms and kissed her forehead and asked lovingly,"Butterscotch (It was his name when he had caught her eating butterscotch)r u ready to join school?"

Mariah nodded understand his words and chewed her finger once again.Geet had convinced her so there wasnt any problem.

PAST

Maan was amazed and he thought,"Girls throw themselves on him but when i danced with her then she never complimented or drooled but she felt pain.Do i know her?I feel i know her when i feel her body against me.When i stroke that soft skin which says that it is only his.It feels scarlet becoz of my touch.I feel melting and soothing whenever i touch her flesh.Her skin is so soothing!"

Geet dint say anything to him and walked backwards and turned and ran from there.

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PART 14

Present

Bhoomi gave a sharp cry and pouted her cute lips.The three Maaneet & Mariah looked up and smirked to each other as they saw their adorable kid pouting angrily at them not getting attention.Geet went near her and lifted her and kissed her chubby cheeks.When Geet kissed her anger vanished into thin air and she giggled softly.Both Maan and Mariah were amused looking as Bhoomi was showing anger previously and now she giggling feeling her mother near her.

Both Mariah and Maan moved towards them and Maan grabbed Geet's waist and Mariah grabbed Bhoomi and started tickling them.Geet and Bhoomi giggled loudly and the staff who saw the scene admired the family along with Sasha.Geet was sportive so she made Bhoomi to secure behind the pillows on the couch and started tickling Maan.Maan also laughed out loud but more he groaned with desire seeing his wifey acting so mischievously.

He stopped his laugh and glared her with so much intensity that Geet glanced after few minutes and blushed furiously.Then accidentally her left hand brushed on his hardness in the series of turning when she was blushing and shivered hearing the long groan when she felt his hardness standing erect.It was an embarassing moment as kids were there and Maan was no way to leave Geet with his intense gaze.Meanwhile Geet was looking more adorable with that red apple cheeks.He wanted to bite those red cheeks and suck it like a juice and crush her with his demand there and then.But he heard kids giggling and controlled himself with enormous difficulty.

He whispered in her ears softly,"Tonight,dont sleep straightway after ur work!"

Geet nodded softly blushing furiously and he moved so much slowly that he brushed his entire body to her small petite frame.She moaned feeling his rough chest pressing her soft curves and his hands brushed her bu** with so much intensity that she heaved for breath.His hands lingered on her bu** for sometime and cant able to resist gave a light squeeze.Geet suppressed her moan and her big brown eyes turned into dark desires and it burnt like a big chunks of Coal.Maan smirked seeing the effect he hold when he's near her and pecked her soft lips.

Her eyes widened and she lowered it with shy when red hue lingered on her chubby cheeks making her more adorable.

He groaned and whispered,"Jaan,i want to eat u alive today!"

Geet widened her eyes hearing it and pouted seeing towards kids.

Maan controlled his spilling brewing desires and said,"Kids,let's go back to home!"

Geet asked,"Maan ur meetings!"

Maan said,"Sasha is there she will handle!If some problem comes then she will call me now let's go darling before i lose myself and eat u here only!"

Geet pouted and turned that side and lifted Bhoomi in her arms.Maan lifted Mariah in his arms and both walked outside the building while Maan spoke with their two kids in babyish tone and made them giggle with his funny faces.At night Geet was thinking abt Antara who slapped Mariah and her look abt Bhoomi and then going away.She was puzzled becoz of her behaviour and a small feet kicked her other curves.Geet was broke into trance feeling soft foot and looked up to get Bhoomi was suckling her milk from her left curve.Geet stared at her lovingly and she was cutely throwing her legs in the air and was suckling the milk from her breast.Geet dint say anything but started shaking her left thigh to help Bhoomi to go to sleep.She was tired of her morning plays so she was cutely snuggling to her mother's warmth having her feed.After sometime Bhoomi closed tiny eyes and slept still stuffing Geet's nipple inside her mouth.Geet saw that and and slowly took her nipple from her mouth and lifted her on her shoulder and rubbed her back.After few seconds Bhoomi burped in her sleep.Geet was abt to get up to cradle Bhoomi in crib Maan came forward and took Bhoomi in his arms.Bhoomi instantly went to her dada feeling his warmth and slept more comfortably inside his chest.

Maan chuckled seeing his angel while Geet giggled but asked,"Did Mariah slept?"

Maan smirked,"With their grandparents!"

Geet knew what his smirk meant and blushed profusely.Maan made Bhoomi to sleep in crib and wrapped her inside a warm blanket.Bhoomi cutely snuggled to it and he kissed her forehead.Geet went inside the washroom and after few minutes she came outside and saw the room was empty.Bhoomi wasnt there in her crib too.She looked for her when she saw a note on her bed and took it.

Geet,

Come to our hidey hole,now.

Maan

Geet was amazed and was blushy thinking what he had planned and came to her hidey hole looking when she caught the beautiful tree house which stood between the very same garden where she had confessed her love to Maan when he was present here in addiction state.





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Geet walked inside and felt something move and she walked towards it to get there was a cute cradle with bells tied around and saw Bhoomi sleeping there.

Geet thought,"He think of everything!"

Maan knew Bhoomi is only 3 months and she needs her feed every 2 hrs or 4hrs and if they r here then she wakes and starts crying then it complicates the situation and had brought her here.Geet slowly shook the cradle for which bells tingled and Bhoomi snuggled to blanket.Her soft hairs r spreading over her small face.Geet moved it softly and kissed her forehead.Bhoomi sighed in her sleep getting the kiss from her mother and snuggled to the blanket.Then Geet saw around her and saw a note entangled to the crib.She took it and saw a packet beside the crib.She took it and saw it was a Cotton Silk blue color sari



which was so light.Geet wore it and came to the balcony as per the letter.Maan was standing with his usual casual cotton shirt with denim jeans.



He heard her anklets and turned around to get an blue angel descending from the heaven.Maan drooled her.Geet caught his drooling and blushed furiously.But she was herself going gaga seeing his transparent shirt where she saw greek god body.Maan chuckled seeing her drooling over his body and he came forward.

Geet blushed walking backward and when she banged to wall Maan held her trapped between his hard frame and his mouth went near her ear and spoke,"U look beautiful jaan!"

Geet blushed and turned that side to give access to her neck which was nuzzled by his long nose.Geet lifted her hand and it went on his bisceps and he felt he's in hot air oven feeling her soft fingers as his hot blood rushed thru his veins.His one hand slid inside her soft bare waist and pulled her towards his hardness.He groaned feeling her softness and she blushed furiously.She felt his hardness poking and pressing her softness and she came forward and pecked his lips and that's it his control broke and he kissed her passionately taking the breath and heaving her gorgeous curves to move up and down rubbing it to his rock hard chest.



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Maan lifted her in his strong arms and took her to the bed beside Bhoomi's crib.Bhoomi was sound sleep and she dint had any idea what her parents r doing right now! ;-) Before Maan would take her to bed he let her on the ground in front of the mirror.Maan saw her from the mirror with piercing gaze while Geet lowered her eyes with total blush.After sometime she felt something cold slip around her slender neck and she looked up to get Maan was putting a blue diamond necklace.



She asked with shock,"Maan,what's this?"

Maan answered,"Its an necklace jaan!How is it tell me?"

Geet answered still touching and feeling the necklace,"It beautiful,but is there any special occasion?"

Maan answered,"Jaan,there is no need of special occasion to give love from husband to his beloved wife.But if u expect the occasion then this is the occasion...!"He pointed his finger towards Bhoomi who was sleeping soundly.He continued,"Thanks for giving me this precious gift,my angel and am so grateful to god that he made me to come across u on that fateful day and made the bond stronger in between us by entangling our soul as one!We r one jaan with our angel!"Geet had tears hearing his words and hugged him tight and said,"I love u!"Maan frowned seeing the tears and wiped it.She kissed his left chest where heart lies and made him groan and lower his lips to kiss her passionately.

Geet said darkly,"Maan,i want u now!"

Maan dint ask for any word next as he lifted her in his arms and spoke with mischievous yet dark eyes,"When i bought this necklace then i had the fantasy to see u naked only wearing this,so let me do that jaan!"

Geet blushed and he made her lie on the bed and brushed his hand on her waist stroking and pulled her plaits at once,The sari got loosen and he kissed her front waist.She moaned feeling his fingers and now his lips.His right hand held her left hand in an fist and he loosened her inner skirt and inserted his hands inside the skirt.His hand went inside her p***y and felt her softness.His lips were still kissing her soft front waist.He bit there in several places marking her his and inserted his finger inside her softness.

Geet screamed,"Maan!"

And he groaned feeling the wetness.Without any hesitation he freed her lower part from the clothes and licked her softness to please her.He coaxed her and pleased her till she gives her first orgasm.The room was filled with moans and groans.He attacked her upper part which was still closed with clothes.He took off all the clothes which was closing her upper part.When she was devoid of clothes and he too was then he saw her naked beauty with intense dark eyes.She was indeed beautiful and the blue diamond necklace was enhancing her beauty more.Her cheeks which was reddened becoz of her first orgasm...her prominent curves with nipples erecting...her belly button which was full of his saliva as he had licked there till his satisfaction and the blue diamond necklace which was ruling her slender neck along with mangalsutra...her soft thighs which had some scratches and bites and her feet which had wetness as he had sucked every finger and finger pad and had eaten her feet hungrily.

Geet saw him drooling and smirked,"I see u r getting hard jaan!"

She looked at his prominent sex which had stood erect and was getting more harder.

He growled feeling the pain and said with hoarse voice,"Get ready jaan!"

Geet got the warning and immediately she felt he lower his lips on her erect buds.She screamed feeling his lips which was sucking her nipples with sheer ecstacy.His hands were coaxing her softness giving her another orgasm and after that she gave him the second orgasm.

Geet screamed as he was pleasing her breasts,"Maan,i want u now!"

He knew now he cant able to control so he positioned himself near her softness.He inserted his thick crown slightly inside and made her scream in pleasure.She cutely glared at him for teasing her and he only chuckled seeing her plight.But without further ado he rammed his hardness inside her softness.She caught her breath as her softness was full with his huge bulge.She felt the very same pinching pain whenever he did the love making but soon it overcame with the pleasure when he rammed his inside her once again.He stopped and pecked her lips to get relaxed and she adjusted herself for his huge bulge.Then he rammed inside her once again and she moaned with strangled breath.He was stroking her breasts to ease her and she squeezed his bu** giving some scratches.She then pulled himself inside her by pressing his bu**.He groaned feeling this and immediately rammed his rigid penis.She came with the slow pace now it was his turn to be in fast pace so he rammed his penis inside her one last time and started rubbing it in fast pace.She moaned and her whole body started to tremble due to his fast pace.He rammed his hardness rapidly and at once she gave the third climax and then he too followed suit by spurting the come hotly inside her.Then he collapsed on her soft body taking refuge of her breasts inhaling the sweat mixed his scent.She was dipped inside his sweat as his whole body was shining with beads of sweat.Cool breeze blew inside their room and cooled their body.After sometime he looked up to get blushy Geet who was staring at him lovingly with shy.

Maan pecked her forehead and lied beside her and took her on his chest and asked,"Are u alright?"

Geet moved her thighs and winced and he noticed it and squeezed her body more soothingly.

Geet chuckled,"I guess u hv overdone!But am sure its gonna be ok when i have shower tomorrow so dont worry!"

Maan pouted,"Am sorry jaan,i was in pleasure since u tickled me!"

Geet smirked mischievously and spoke,"Well,i will look forward to this orgasms when i tickle u everytime!"

Maan smirked and said,"Well jaan if that is what u want then i would like to warn u after this next day u wont be walking in ur legs!"

Geet blushed furiously hearing his words and hid her face inside his chest.Maan cocooned her and drift away calmly.Geet looked up to get he had gone sleep and pecked his forehead and she too slept inside his chest.

Past

Darkness creeping around a voice was heard.A man started to run towards it.It was a female voice which was coming.It was a soft voice but when he ran towards it,it became sharp.He dint know where he was going as he thought that it was some kind of home as he ran further he felt he's crossing numerous rooms.Still voice came as sharp.He ran and ran and ran.He was down with drugs and he dint know what was going on.He ran and ran and then he felt the end of the house as there came a big wall.A thought came,"I need to cross it!"

His vision was hazy as he had down with the drugs.He looked here and there and in a flash there was a ladder.He took the ladder and climbed it.When he climbed the wall then he saw that he's standing on the wall and there was a big lake in front of him.Someone was attempting to swim.A voice came,"Save me Maan!"

The man looked to the voice and saw a girl attempting to swim in that big lake.A thought came,"I need to save her!"

Before he would jump inside the lake the girl who was screaming stopped attempting to swim and drowned and the man screamed,"Almondy!"

Immediately a man got up from the sleep stretching his hands in front of him calling for that girl.That man woke with start and was sweaty.His chest was heaving and his face was full of beads of sweat.He wiped the sweat from his hands and got up and drank a glass of water and came towards the window to glance the full moon which was glowing gloriously and for him very soothingly.He was Maan Singh Khurana when his body reflected in the moonlight.

He looked up and asked,"Another nightmare and the same am getting since 17!But who's Almondy?"

Next morning Geet came to the office in dilemma.Geet pouted to babaji,"Oh god,why r u making me restless?I dint get a wink of sleep last night becoz i spoke harshly with Maan!Why have u made me so helpless and weak?Now till i ask apology i cant able to rest!Kahan fasa diya aapne?"

She was blabbering cutely and dint notice that Maan had entered KC and his cabin.Maan looked up towards his secretary's cabin which was full by his secretary who was cribbing making funny faces looking upwards.He had came there deciding that he wont bother Geet but seeing her cute faces he was melting.

But he decided and took his phone and said,"Geet,come to my cabin!"

Geet nodded and went inside his cabin.Maan dint even seeing said,"Geet,i dont know what u want from me!But i want to clear some facts.Last night it was a bad day for both of us.I behaved weirdly with u and for that i want to ask sorry!"

Geet's eyes widened hearing the sorry.

Then he spoke once again,"I wont bother u further anymore.U do ur work and u can go,just stay away from me!"

Now Geet was irritated and looked upwards cribbing to babaji as his fault that he made her stand in this situation.Geet dint say anything just went away not answering him.But he had seen a bead of tear coming from her right eye.

Maan cursed himself,"God,i need to hurt her once again!I cant even scold her as she's in tears becoz of me!"

Maan tried to work when he was disturbed by his mobile phone.He saw the caller and groaned in frustration as it was from his little sister.

He answered the call and said,"Yes Annie!"

Maan heard her next demand and rolled his eyes and said,"Ok be ready at 9pm!Am gonna take u to my favourite night club!"

Then she said something for he roared,"No!"

Annie said something when he spoke once again,"Annie,i dont want to take Ms.Handa there!"

Annie asked non stop questions which was not answerable by him so he pouted and said,"Ok,bring her!"

Annie screamed in excitement and he held the phone at his arms length cant able to hear her screams and squeals and shut off.He banged his hand to the table and looked so angry but in dilemma that why Geet binds herself to his destiny or the time to tantalize him.

Precap-Past-Both Maaneet r going to the night club along with Annie and next one is teaser

Present-Same

PART 13

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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
On second thoughts now is better
Holy molly
That was hot or what
Haila he can't help it when it comes to geet huh
But be little bit careful too
Woh kya hai naa if she can't walk then will be problematic
Damn he was all aroused in office
No wonder he took them I mean his family home
He can't control when it comes to her
Well duh of. Course he can't
Haiyye that had me. Blushing
And fainting too
Damn that was passionate or what
And no your English isn't bad
Oh come on who is perfect
We get what you are saying
And its not like we need Queens English man
I rather it be simple than be complicated
Which yours isn't
Hope I didnt offend you sorry if did
So maan had been trying to avoid geet in the past
Dream on dude
Not when she is back in your life
So he did dream about her
She was asking him to save her
And well he woke up with her name for her
He has really forgotten her naa
Poor geet she has her love in front of her
And yet she can't say anything
Hmmm taking geet with him to disc
And that's why he is drunk
Well he said sorry to her for his behaviour
But that's not what is worrying her
Let's see what happens next
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome maaneet passionate moments were fab and maan can't see her in pain bcoz of him
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Cntrl maan dekho to tumhare saath tumhare do do bache h phir bhi tum offooo
iska bas chale to ye to geet ko bilkul bhi na chode
hot hot hot super hot update
wating for nxt
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

On second thoughts now is better

Holy molly
That was hot or what
Haila he can't help it when it comes to geet huh
But be little bit careful too
Woh kya hai naa if she can't walk then will be problematic
Damn he was all aroused in office
No wonder he took them I mean his family home
He can't control when it comes to her
Well duh of. Course he can't
Haiyye that had me. Blushing
And fainting too
Damn that was passionate or what
And no your English isn't bad
Oh come on who is perfect
We get what you are saying
And its not like we need Queens English man
I rather it be simple than be complicated
Which yours isn't
Hope I didnt offend you sorry if did
So maan had been trying to avoid geet in the past
Dream on dude
Not when she is back in your life
So he did dream about her
She was asking him to save her
And well he woke up with her name for her
He has really forgotten her naa
Poor geet she has her love in front of her
And yet she can't say anything
Hmmm taking geet with him to disc
And that's why he is drunk
Well he said sorry to her for his behaviour
But that's not what is worrying her
Let's see what happens next




Aah dont worry dear u dint offend me but some readers r also present who want to give only humiliation just becoz we asked them to lyk our ffs and that too after taking all the benefit of my story entertainment!😉😉😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: geetsrir.maan




Aah dont worry dear u dint offend me but some readers r also present who want to give only humiliation just becoz we asked them to lyk our ffs and that too after taking all the benefit of my story entertainment!😉😉😛




bach gaye i didnt offend
would never wanna do that to you
forget it some peeps are like that only
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Posted: 11 years ago
They both love each other so much.. Maan having some nightmares.. means past moments.. Maan doesn't remeber abt his almondy.. So Annie may knew abt them...Ab jaldi do next update.😛

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