UNTAMED DESIRES-MG FF-UPDATED PT 22 PG 114 ON 16-08-14

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#291

she is right though
they have young kids naa
so its gonna leave impression on them
and with their eldest being through so much doesnt help
poor maan having to be treated with silent treatment from his jaan
and bhoomi so naughty
bless that was funny
hmmm so its some girl antara that had him this agitated
poor maan
that woman sure isnt leaving maan
gosh what a headache
as if they dont have enough
no fair on them right
so she is the reason maneet married the way they did
does maan know who she is
doesnt seem like it
i mean still know
hmmm she was sad seeing with some girl
and was crying
he saw it too but he saw prem there with her
which of course burned him
will sasha come back
lets see
cheers for pm

Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#292

wow lovely emotional update.. te way in present, my naughty and his beti teasing his geet making her to bang her head was lovely cute.. te way geet ki gussa making my maan to frown and wen she said abt kids he was conviced wa lovely.. again they past ki bitter memories started to haunt my maaneet life was lovely emotional..te way in past geet ki jealous seeing my maan with some one and te way she crying , my maan was hurt to see like tis but he is fuming seeing her with prem was lovely emotional.. buddhu maaneet hiding they feelings and crying in pain..te way now anni dragging geet with her, wat will my maan do..i love te update

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Sia

@lovesia

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#293

awesome update

aww baby bhoomi was angry on her mumma bcoz she was sleeping peacefully when her tummy was hungry

u know i just love bhoomi's antic, u write them so cutely

God yeh antara kitni beshrama hai shaadi ho chuki hai phir bhi maan ka peecha nahi chod rahi hai

lagta hai NT aur iska koi connection raha hoga peechle janam me, dono ek jaise hi hai ek no. ke besharam, dusro ke pati ko seduce karte hai

now me confused with sasha's character is she in +ve role or -ve

Past

ooo Geet was feeling bad seeing maan with another girl nd maan saw her hurt eyes nd went after her but he saw prem standing outside of ladies washroom nd then he got J seeing Geet with prem nd walking out hand in hand

ooo annie is geets best friend nd when she introduced maan with geet , maan was having blank look nd geet again got hurt seeing his blank look

wow annie kuch toh accha kam kiya dono ko dinner par bolakar hayee now they can meet again at dinner

but maan why were u cursing geet

yeh toh geet ka haq hai to curse u

waiting for next

pluueejj update soon

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shri12

@shri12

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#294

Awesome geet angry on maan was right but he also understood it

now waiting for the dinner together

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custodian75

@custodian75

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#295

Nice to know that is ore worried about the children than her pleasure.

Maan is jealous to see her with prem but not willing to call her home for dinner.

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Shalini Mogha

@shalinimaaneet

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#296

Superbbb yaar
OMG bhoomi kitni naughty h
geet so rhi thi isliye bhoomi angry ho gyi

aur ye antra NT ki behan h kya
jaise NT dev ko line marti rheti h
waise hi ye bhi h maan pr line maar rhi h
married hone ke baad bhi
ufff
wating for nxt

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jeyanthi123

@jeyanthi123

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#297

wow lovly update... past geet was hurt alot ...

continue soon waiting

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#298

awesome part
bhoomi is just like her daada teasing geet
geet is right they should be careful as they have two kids
so maan married geet by this

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fariya20

@fariya20

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#299

awsum update

geet made him understand that they should care ful infront of kids

thier intimate moment effct mairah

if she see

maan understand

antraa is back

ek chudail say bachnai k liya dosri

past geet is hurt

maan also saw her state

he is angry

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

#300

hi dear! Lovely update! Well written! Geet upset with Maan! Bhoomi is so adorable! So Antara is back! Maan tells Geet abt her! Maan looking 4 Sasha! Past n present well incorporated! update soon