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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#251

Nice update Raz and first things first I LOVE RAZ 😃

That was an interesting addition that Asad, Arjun and Sameer are childhood friends. Liked the way Asad and Arjun still know each other so well and can tell by their tone what the other is thinking or feeling.

I liked the bonding between Zoya and Ria. (since had stopped watching Arjun long time back have no clue about the bacteria poisoning that Ria had 😕) Ria is so sweet she could see the love between ASYA 😳.

The kiss was what Asad had been wanting since morning, it was nice and the dialouges Kya hua? and the answer Yeh Hua. WOW, SIMPLY WOW ☺️

Loved the update but it was not the usual length that you give us. But will let it be as you've been busy. Thanks for the pm n please update soon.

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 11 years ago

#252

It is lovely Raaz awesome update

Loved asad n Arjun convo

I am liking the the way u blend the story too loved it

b Asya were too cute 😳

So now etf will be here to protect zoya

I am waiting for Ariya meet

Thanks for the Pm

Continue soon 😊

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#253

Loved the update totally...

Riya and Zoya...

Asad and Arjun...

Really looking forward to the next update

I have two favourite scenes though

"ACP Rawte," he answered.

"It's good to hear from you again," Asad said solemnly. There was silence on the other end before a deep sigh was heaved.

"What do you want, Asad?" Arjun asked. Asad raised his eyebrow.

"What, is that the latest trend for greeting old friends?" He asked.

"I don't have time for games, just spit it out," Arjun snapped.

"Wonderful. Your house is beautiful," Riya replied smiling brightly at him.

"Of course it is, he designed it himself," Zoya supplied. Riya's mouth formed and O' before she giggled.

"You know Asad, when we were younger, Zoe always used to say, "If I ever get married, it will be to an architect." I used to ask her why and she would reply that if she married an architect, he would build her the house of her dreams," Riya told him. Asad chuckled and glanced at Zoya who had turned slightly pink and had shoved Riya as she was laughing.

"Looks like your prayers were heard. I haven't known him for long but seeing the love you two share, I can guarantee that he would build you a castle if you said so," Riya said. Asad looked at Riya in surprise and Riya smile back at him.

"It doesn't take an expert to see that you two are in love," Riya answered his unasked question.

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SovaSana

@SovaSana

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#254

awesome update

the 3 friends are meeting after a long time

all of their lives are intertwined

i wonder what will be arjun and riya's reaction when they will see each other?

and i am eager to know more about the case too

do continue soon

thanks for the pm😊

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manognasai

@manognasai

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#255

Nice update!And I love Raz...😳
Update sooon!

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linta

@Linnet

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#256

Wow

Awesome update

Lovely

Thanks 4 the pm

Love

Linnet

😛😛

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#257

Very nice part
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part

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Live-life

@Live-life

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#258

Omg...That was a fantabulous update (I overuse this word a lot when I comment so don't mind okay 😉)

From the first word to the last...I have to confess I was hooked! LIke literally hooked!

I mean from the first scene to the last was like totally fantabulous! 😃 I love the addition of Mincecraft in this one...when bored with life play mine craft! That's what people in my class do...24 hours bas Mince craft...I mean get a life already peeps! 😆

SO the phone call was really touching though...Arjun...trying to cover his emotions...and he even is good at it..but people like me instantly know when he does that! So Kab tai bachoge bahcu! Well the reunion of the three friends would be interesting to read because..hehe they are all my favorite! 😛 Do you read minds or something??! 😆 The last part when Asad said "Take care of yourself" I was like Oh god!!!! Can you guys hug already this is getting too emotional!...And mujhe apnea tears control bout mushkil hota hai! 😆 Hopefully when they meet they will hug "fingers crossed"

Hmm...Now coming to the ETF...oh god! I miss them like hell everyday..these Fan fictions are the only way to keep them alive! But Arjun is getting more suspicious of Rathore now...heheh..Old habits die hard!😆 Perks of being an Asian/and more importantly Arjun suryakant Rawte! 😉

Now coming to the girlies...well it wasn't like the typical girl talk...hehe Thank god! But It was nice to see Zoya's worry for her friend..that's what friends are for na! 😳 And awww the convo between Riya and Asad and Zoya was sooo adorable...hehe I especially love the part where Riya tells Asad that he would even build a castle for Zoya! So cute!...Pure love..hayeee!

And then I especially love the part where hE goes "Tumse kcuh baat karni hai"

Zoya: "Kya hua"

Asad: "Ye hua"

And then kisses her And i AM just like "Am I in heaven?" It was such a romantic kiss hayeee!!!! ☺️☺️ I love love!

Well this was definitely a fantabulous update Ra.one! Hyaeee! oh and I love how Asad knows that the minute he asked Arjun to come to his house he knew that Zoya's security was in safe hands...it's called trust! 😃 Friends forever!

*Khushi ke aasoon*

What a great update...and excise me for commenting now...just so u know I have read all the parts..u know na that sometimes a big Dq! 😆

Oh btw...I love you Ra.one...and U know that!

🤗❤️ so much that I was about to shoot you today 🤣

But oh well had ek friend kamina hota hai!

Thanks for the pm and pleas eplease please

continue soon!

😃 Love u again!

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Gourav

@Shubh007

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#259

Awesome update...👏

Really like it...😊

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#260

First of all, I Love Raz, so yeah, I did read your note.

Now, to the update. Can't believed Asad used to be best friends with Arjun and Sameer. I'm looking forward to the time when ETF will come over to the Khan Mansion and realise all of them are interconnected cause of one single case !!