Arshi OS: Never **Awarded**

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Cute6

@Cute6

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

beautiful os..

stories ritten on random stuff are always a treat to read and this was one of them..

Quote

BS.ILoveYou

@BS.ILoveYou

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

loved the os... Arnav is a dream husband.. 😆 nobody in real life I.knw till now..who wud fulfill his wife's wishes without complaints..

Khushi is really lucky..

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

I really loved the entire idea of 'never' We often go after things that we have never done instead of being content with what we have but it doesn't mean that we shouldn't try :)

Also, I loved the first scene. I had a feeling that there is some sort of role play being done especially when the guy (A) asked the girl (K) for a one night stand.

The background story to the said one night stand was pretty well thought :)

At the end, it did leave me with a feeling of want that I wish I had so much money that I could just take off like this and go anywhere I want :(

The kissing the girl part and the conclusion about the arrival of a baby was a good way to end this story :)

Quote

kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

lovely os...

arnav is arnav he did all the things in his way of course at the end all he wants his kushi to experience each and everything and be happy...and kushi is kushi always...i loved the way u ended this os...kushi ka last wish 😛😛😛😛😛😛 its so beautiful and cute arnav answer...

thank u for the lovely os...

cheers...

Quote

_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Lovely concept and so well written with its own little twists along the way.

I really enjoy reading Arnav and Khushi as a married couple , something about visualizing them in a blissful married environment is always very gratifying!

Thank you !

Edited by _disha_ - 11 years ago

Quote

aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

that was a beautiful os with a beautiful ending...
loved how he could do anything and everything for her... :)

Quote

kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Thank you Nivi and Sami to suggest this OS.

What a beautifully written OS. Actually the gist of the plot brought back memories of the first arhi FF that i read (The GAmes We Play )

And this one was an absolute stellar. A story by itself of a hubby going an extra mile to ensure that his wife has lived life in totality...loved it.

He was diligent in his efforts to ensure that he removes all the complexes that khushi might have ever felt.

Loved it from the beginning to the end...with the end giving wonderful glimpses of hope for the future.

Quote

RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Random idea? Meko aise random ideas q nahi aatey???

I want to mention Arnav first. He didnt want to go to a party which was at a pub because Khushi will be uncomfortable, he was observing her in the party which is strange for her and whisked her away as soon as she looked distressed, when they left he immediately asked what was bothering her (I also noticed that naughty boy noticed the other thingsmore 😉) and then set about to fulfill every unfulfilled wish of hers. Can I please get him?? Pleaseee...

But wait! Khushi at the end already mentioned, I can never have him. His love, care, attention and affection is for Khushi only 😊 Not that I mind. ArHi hamesha ❤️

I loved the finale joke of kissing a girl and then kissing their girl 👍🏼 😃

PS: After so much globe trekking, they went for their honeymoon? Toh woh sab trips kya thi??? 😲 😳☺️

PPS: Either you have visited all these places or you researched, but thank you for the world tour👏

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 11 years ago

Quote

Deepa

@deepa.e

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Nice different OS!!

I really enjoyed reading it!

Quote

Mahnoor

@Mojoo

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Whhattt a brilliant piece of writing...I felt like Im experiencing n visiting thos places...This looked to me like a modern or twited version of a fairytale with realities...
Arnav tried to give her everything...Awesoe Os...Enjoyed it very much...Hats off to u...

Quote

1 ... 4 5 6 7 8 9

Arshi

Arshi OS: Never Awarded - Page 6

Related Topics

Explore Topics

Arshi OS: Never **Awarded** - Page 6

Related Topics

Explore Topics

Arshi OS: Never Awarded - Page 6