Arshi OS: Never **Awarded**

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@A_BA

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Dis was such cute cncpt ..

Random idea was awsm

Waisa i loved d way arnav did everythng to fulfil dose wishes wich khushi never thought of ..

Nd hearing dem wid oder girl .. Khushi was so depressed..

seeing sad wife arnav did everythng to cheerup..

Bt most likely i loved d last part.. Were khushi cnfessed so lovingly ..Her true feeling towards arnav

Loved d os ..

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Raji Senthilkumar

@RajiSobtian

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome os
Simply superb ❤️

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@guggu

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Posted: 11 years ago

This OS was surprise after surprise and I thoroughly enjoyed it. From the initial setting which paused at Khushi's question tp all the adventures they embarked upon together, this left a tingling warm feeling within me. It was so heartwarming to see Arnav trying to fulfil her dormant desires and it was even better to read Khushi's words about how her life, sans all the bungee jumping and one night stands, was nothing less than an adventure itself.

Lovely OS. :) I officially love random One Shots. ;)

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

I love OSes...and the more the random the more I enjoy them...

I was completed surprised. I thought this was about her in a bar drinking and he trying to pick her up ...but then...I realise their relationship and the game...the role play...

Loved how your portrayal of a Khushi, feeling in adequate and out of place at the simplicity of her life and her lack of experience...but then on the brighter side being given the perfect and tailor made opportunities to experience those and more...that too with her Arnavji and thanks to him makes them even more special and memorable ...

As you wrote about her trips and what all her various experiences I felt I was experiencing them along side...the bungee jumping to the water sport to the trip in Europe...what perfection locations.

Loved how he fulfils all her desires...and makes all the complexes she may feel disappear...so thoughtful of him...lets her explore everything she wanted...

The end was sweet where she innocently and naughtily names that one thing yet to be experienced and his never...and he is smart enough to say she can kiss their daughter...

Very enjoyable and totally arshilicious ...right till the end, with her pregnant...and understanding the importance and value of love and real relationships, the feeling of contentment and happiness when you have true love.

Lovely OS...brought a nice happy smile to my face...thanks for the pm.

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

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Posted: 11 years ago

Well it was a very enjoyable idea indeed Aami :)

A small lesson as well, enjoy the haves rather than worry about the not haves. I smiled at Khushi's confession.

This was sweet OS. Arnav and Khushi presented in a familiar yet almost exotic way was a pleasure to read.

I loved the little role playing idea of Arnav's, can just smell how he would have burned in jealousy if she even tried doing this with someone else, lol.

Wonderfully delightful, I'd say :)

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Mints23

@mints23

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Posted: 11 years ago

Interesting Aami... An OS that started with something unique... I wondered why Arnav and Khushi were playing the pretend game... and it turned out to be because Arnav wanted to fulfill Khushi's every demand. It was very real... as Khushi is naive towards what women in social parties discuss. Her background may have given her that complex... but I love how Arnav tries to give her all the experiences that she had missed out on... The fun and adventurous journey of the couple was fun and I am itching to do all of it... NZ and Paris are two destinations on my immediate traveling list... Loved how this sweet OS ended... with a pregnant Khushi... We shall forget Arnav and Khushi... NEVER!! 😳

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

WOW...loved the way Arnav helped her explore the world unfamiliar to her...I always love him this way...beautiful OS...thanks for the PM...

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Aisha

@Aisha1996

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Posted: 11 years ago

AWESOME 👏👏

FANTASTIC 👏👏

SUPERB OS 👏👍🏼

LOVED IT 😛

ARNAV IS SUCH A LOVELY HUSBAND

ARNAV AND KHUSHI BOTH ACTING FOR ONE NIGHT STAND 😆

LOVED D WAY ARNAV FULFILLS HER UNSAID DESIRES 😊

END WAS SO CUTE 😳

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Wow 👏

Amazing 👍🏼

Arnav is a wonderful n lovely husband.

Like Khushi who introduce him to her world of love, peace and simplicity, he also introduce he to his exotic n luxurious world.

The way you describe them exploring places, enjoying adventurous sports and tasting new food and Arnav fulfilling khushi's every wish so that she couldn't feel odd in his company and social life is so beautiful. The best part is that Arnav also get chance to explore new things, all thanks to Khushi.

He successfully fade away all the insecurities Khushi felt that party night.

Life is too big to explore these things, time doesn't matter and the enjoyment and fun increase with family being part of it.

I was laughing out loud reading Arnav and Khushi acting for one night stand. 😆

The end was very cute. 😳

Love the shot.❤️