IPKKND-ARHI FF - Gypsy - TH II - Chapter 47 Pg 32

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Congrates on new thread updt is asom nw arnav realise hw much damage was done becoz of his anger want to c that he redeem for his mistk wel writen cont thanx for pm

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Finally.

So glad that it happened.

He had to see her in this state.

His mere words caused someone a lot of harm.

And now that someone is his wife.

A constant reminder of his crime.

Fate and destiny works in funny ways.

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Not fair!!!! WHy was it so short??? =P Seriously! I want more!!! Can't get enough of this story!!!! <3

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Liya123

@Liya123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Congratulations on the new thread :-) :-)

It was awesome update...Arnav realizing with each passing days that how his actions did destroyed kushi.

Love ur writing style...

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kajal

@imkt

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

its amazing,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,loved the story concept...

u r such a fab writter...looking forward to read more...

awsome story,,,,,,,,,,,,please pm me

will be waitting

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msmarple

@msmarple

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Loved the update! Arnav finally seeing first hand how much Khushi must have suffered. Very nicely written.

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ashw99

@ashw99

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Beautiful updates...

Now Maharaja knows the extent of damage done to khushi...

Loved the entire scene beautifully penned...

Thanks... 😊😊😊

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ITS_LEENA

@ITS_LEENA

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

congrats on new thread

once again a fab update, beautifully written

he saw the marks, liked the way he gave space for her to comkpose herself

waiting for next one

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seema13

@seema13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

beautifully written update...finally Arnav saw the scars nd u create all the situation very well.Arnav state of mind nd Khushi reaction to see him suddenly all those things u have written very nicely.Allready waiting for ur next update.

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#60

I am blown away every time I read your updates of this beautiful story. Now he has the visual of what she suffered thanks to his anger. How is he going to overcome this shock now? I hope he does not get caught up in the self blaming game as opposed to move forward instead. I think marrying up was a great beginning. He needs to make her feel safe and feel beautiful again. Only then will she be able to feel again. He needs to truly, really love her as a woman deserves to. I can't wait to hear his pov.