Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 22) - Page 9

Congos on the new thread :) amazing story so far!

Congrats on new thread...last chapter is fabulos, v can understand arnav. That is much neeeded conversatn between dem...hope kushi remembers arnavs confessn with d kiss

congrats on d new thread...nd true pls update soon..u did say that u will update sooner once the next year starts pls update regularly...nd ur story is amazing just luv it...

after reading the chapter a few more times...

congrats on the new thread. be generous ...give us another update soon

congrats on new thread...A
Jaldi jaldi update CLG & MKM...

woah

congrats 22nd thread good going

Fantttasstttiiic Update...
Four days Missing-part from Arnav's POV...Khushi-Rishabh friendship from Rishabh's POV...n their DISCUSSION over loyalty,,sincerity,,love n Rishabh...
Fanttassttiic Update Anony...
Loved it...As u already knw frommy scrap that How i enjoyed this update...Loved each n every bit of it...
So Arnavjii pe b Shadi ne asar dikhaana shuru kr diya hai...Hmmm...Missing his wife...this was forst time he noticed her absence N actually missed her...
But his insecurities n complex have refused to take a backseat...He just wants to feel belonged n maybe loved too.this is the thing he lacked in his life...feeling of being longed by some1 seflessly...n Khushi has somehow provided him this feeling but still his mind refuses to accept that someone specially longs for him or there is some1 out there always looking out for him..this clearly shows in this line *But he would be damned if he ends up as a liability to her as well, like he was to his esteemed parents*...they have really messed up his emotional life...following lines made my heart melt with tenderness for Arnav...
*it does not escape his notice that he was not really wanted.Will history repeat itself?*
The whole Rishabh's thoughts part was too good...Atleast he is trying to see beyond his hurt n heart break...n he is ready to bury his emotions to revive their friendship with Khushi becoz she is a gem of a person...:)...He has accepted that he cannot get her but atleast he can look out for her for the sake of old times...:)
but I got goosebumps when Khushi hugged him near gate...
Beczo I was expecting Khushi to jump with glee on seeing Arnavji n when she hugged Rishabh..Then I was like *facepalm* *gayi Bhains Paani mein*...hahhaa...
Or wohi Huwa jiska darr thaa...
I felt like Arnavji was burning with rage n smoke was coming out of his ears...
Whie reading this line I wanted to wring Arnavji's neck
*Here she was dyingto see him, and he refuses to speak even a word to her*

Their Conversation/Discussion/Arguement...
I have started thinking that Arnavji *ina nger* cant speak whole dialogue without hurting Khushi...Sometimes He goesall rude n harsh to hide his insecurities n complexes behind his anger...He should atleast learn to let go of past...Let his trust:..atleast Khushi if not all...
But then I read this line n U have written awesome...
*Contradictions. Betrayals. Heartbreaks.The sum total of his life.*
n My anger faded away so I somehow find myself giving him extra points due to his past...
But after reading arguement I have realised that living with people like him is much more difficult...becoz He refuses to process anything rationally in his anger...like the hug part...
He only saw hug n then all rational thoughts flew out of his mind...He started seeing Rishabh as her ex-lover...
After he said nasty things to Khushi in car about hugging n Kissing and not time for talk I wanted Khushi to cry...To show some anger n resentment to make him realise of his mistake...
But Khushi has this deep urge to make him trust her that she behaved maturely n face his wrath courageously...
When she confeesed that she belong to him only n Arnav replied *To what do I owe the pleasure of such devotion'*...I wanted to hit him in head...If some1 would have said anything like this to my confession I would have hit him in response...*but definitly I would not hit Arnavji...hehe*
N Im marveled at her maturity in this relationship to take even nasty things in a mature way...She even agreed to never hug Rishabh...This show that how much she is willing to invest in this relationship...I hoep Arnav will realise this...
Last part aheemm aheemmm...Arnavji mnipulated whole situation according to his wishes...I guess his desperation to feel his wife close to him after four days,,,his anger at seeing her hugging Rishabh...His mixed feelings after earing her confession...his intentions to take their relationship forward...made him demand such thing from her...
Awesome part It was Anony...Hatts of To U for brilliantly writing it...
P.S would U update after 10 days now...??