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LooneyLuna thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Deerz.
M see updex for chapter 1 on 69, and already tink to the gutterz n bak.

but before M begin... here is the last unres 99556946

and now for the rest

BIG FAT SUHAGRAAT WALA RES.

tfs.

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Quick UNRES wonly on REQUEST,
Read at your own risk..

I love that khushi is the same khushi in terms of obligations and helping people and stuff, but instead of being a air head...she is PRACTICAL and GROUNDED. I love this about her, you need that when u have someone like an arrogant jerkface millionaire to attract.

I LOVED how the excerpt scene played out. SO MUCH FUN. Loving the battle of words.
The writing is FLAWLESS bro.

So she is not really into the idea of love and all, and marriage to begin with..not like the original khushi was. Yet obviously she has the dreams and all, that pop up at random times. I love this khushi for she is really really identifiable.
And I love the Arnav is the same old ASR, except he isnt angry young man..I love that he smiles he smirks.
I have loved to the power of infinity the challenges Arnav and Khushi throw at each other in your FFs, and this seems like one of those arnav and khushi's..perpetually having a battle of words..but not in an annoying way, because the conversation itself is super surprising..like u dont expect him to say certain things..and yet he does and it makes it MORE MORE FUN.

I LOVED THE FAMILY LOGIC OF ASR.
THAT WAS BRILLIANT.
I LOVED THAT IT WAS SIMPLE, UNCONVENTIONAL, AND UNCLICHED.
LIKE LOVE LOVE LOVE.

And I love how slowly u can see..the tires of khushi's brains turning to accept this offer.
BRILLIANT WRITING J. without being in your face.
I am telling you the CONVERSATIONS. ARE A WINNER.

I have always forever wanted to see a "selfish" khushi or rather..one who isnt just a mother teresa, but someone more REAL. and she is FINALLY here.
I like that she excepted the contract in her KKG way ofcourse.
EXCEPT ummm CELIBACY for 1 year...for the world famous "playboy" tycoon. UMM?! Didnt she realise sooner or later the responsibility is going to come to her?

OK now to my favourite bit about this story.
I already told u how i like that khushi doesnt really fully into the rainbows butterflies love and marriage concept.
I LOVED the way arnav put how no one really likes him for him etc (i am not saying it correct..but understand my PHEELZ OK?).
I love that this marriage is sort of for convenience between two level headed people..but I cant wait to see how they are eventually going to "fall in love" and "like each other". Cause with any other writer it would be super predictable. But with you...I feel EXCITED. like i am on this joy ride and i would NEVER want it to stop. (NO pressure!)

wait open marriage with communication?
And I love the idea of what if they find someone else...AHHH. BEST NOT TO EXPLORE, ok?

AND THE LAST EFFING SCENE.
SO MANY ROFLS.
I LOVED EVERY SINGLE BIT OF IT.
ARNAV IS SUPER FUN.
AND I LOVE HOW THIS IS A M&B BUT IN A FUNNY WAY, LIKE A PARODY OF ONE.
AND HOW THIS IS AN ANTI-THESIS OF THE STORY THAT CANNOT BE NAMED.

PLISS update ALREADY.
TFS.
PS. now i have no idea what to say in my UNRES to chapter 1?! I said EVERYTHING here. almost. except how sexy arnav is. I wish does rowing or something. or plays soccer.
PPS. I love that we will get to see a bit of CA maybe and that Anjali might be the neighbour and Shyam might have an inkling of what Arnav is upto.

OH noes M read the note.
Late updex of chapter 2?
I dont know how i am going to survive, unless i ban myself from IF until dan. Which I shall.
And ummm who cum-plains about LONG stuff? Honestly expel?! Yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat thi? Dont u dareee SHORTen things, or else...m ne'er the reads. bas.

Edited by LooneyLuna - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Totally fantastic update! Loved it loads!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Love every single word in this update. Don't you dare shorten your updates, I can never have enough of them. Can I tell you that this shameless Arnav babu is very very interesting? How in god's name did he agree to be put on parade for all the ammas, Mami's, Buaji's, chachis, Nani's, Dadi's of Delhi who are dying to marry their progeny to this man and his money? This shows some dedication to his family and is an excellent trait in his personality. Finding a girl who had nothing but contempt for him must have been a breath of fresh air. Me think he fell for her and hence the contract. I think she is about to be very surprised by who he is in person as opposed to what she read about him. I love the fact that he promised fidelity during the one year. For someone who is so open about sex, it will be very hard to do this if he does not get any at home. Enough drooling over dreamboat Raizada. I also love this Kushi who is so mature and has shouldered all the responsibilities for her family by herself. Yes it is time to be selfish and have some fun herself even if it means not having to think twice about how to pay for that phd. Little brat Payal maybe getting her wish by Kushi's action but this is also freeing Kushi from the load that has been hers since she has started supporting her family. I love the changes she made to the contract and I am sure Arnav loves it too. Shows her true character. I am upset he is leaving her behind though because separate rooms await them in California. How,will he have these sex talks if they are not side by side on their pillows?
I was wondering how you will be able to spin a story without any conflict or mu. Now I can see where you are going with this and can't wait to read more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Woot! This makes so much more sense now! Juhi, have I told you how marvelous you are? I'm craving for the next part asap! I need it. Your writing is like a drug. You should get all your stoires made into e-books and send them to the cast of IPK.
Fabulous chapter!

Love,
Nisha
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Posted: 11 years ago
So it was a search for a bride for ASR party and his granny is for Khushi. He is bowled by her attitude and loves to having her around!
Lovely update Juhi!
Wonder why Arnav is against it being a real marriage for life when he knows that it is difficult for him to be with her in the same room. That means he is attracted towards her and also he knows for sure that he she does not want his money when they separate out, she is not going to be a housebound wife, he is not going to be with another woman as long as he is married to her. When all his concerns and criteria are met, why this kolaveri???? There must be something else knowing how you write. Waiting for you to unravel!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update. Loved confident well educated independent Khushi. Your arrogant womanizing jerk Arnav is swoon worthy. Loved their pillow talk. Pls don't shorten update length even with the longer updates we're so involved end of each update we crave for more. I know it may be hard for you to write sorry your writing are so adicting we can't get enough. Thx 4 d PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
fantabulos update!!!

u have ur own ways to play with words to bring out what u have in mind or more!!!
That was simply superb update..
the way the chapter started and how it was taken to the step of Khushi talking or butchering Arnav's character and fortunately Arnav overhearing that.. Beautiful..

Reason for Arnav marrying Khushi - very different.. the family needs something.. they just need to ask.. wonderful

Khushi's character portrayal is awesome.. she seems to be the ambitious person..
wow..
red rose
Beautiful, awesome, wonderful, cool, amazing, mind blowing.. get me a dictionary someone .. pls.. me short of words...

Waiting for ur call on next update!!!


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Posted: 11 years ago
Sweetheart, any update from you can never be long enough. .. there have been times when reading your storiea I have wished I could read all of it in one go.. in one loong update.
I just love the way this is progressing. why do I get a feeling that arnav is far more involved already than he has bargained for? He might be accepting it as attraction and lust but I would like to see how he would feel if there was an NK in here perhaps.. and hopefully shyam is not the same here.
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Posted: 11 years ago
My husband says I am addicted . Can't disagree shed this story is awesome. I really really like this confident blunt Arnav ... So glad you started another story. Every time I worry your AD will take you away but then you are back with even more of a bang and vengeance ... Updates are NOT long... Why would you think your readers would have a problem when you write a sinfully , seductive and scandalous story which shatters my resolve to stay away from IF...love it girl , bring it on
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful start ! Loving it already

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