I love that khushi is the same khushi in terms of obligations and helping people and stuff, but instead of being a air head...she is PRACTICAL and GROUNDED. I love this about her, you need that when u have someone like an arrogant jerkface millionaire to attract.
I LOVED how the excerpt scene played out. SO MUCH FUN. Loving the battle of words.
The writing is FLAWLESS bro.
So she is not really into the idea of love and all, and marriage to begin with..not like the original khushi was. Yet obviously she has the dreams and all, that pop up at random times. I love this khushi for she is really really identifiable.
And I love the Arnav is the same old ASR, except he isnt angry young man..I love that he smiles he smirks.
I have loved to the power of infinity the challenges Arnav and Khushi throw at each other in your FFs, and this seems like one of those arnav and khushi's..perpetually having a battle of words..but not in an annoying way, because the conversation itself is super surprising..like u dont expect him to say certain things..and yet he does and it makes it MORE MORE FUN.
I LOVED THE FAMILY LOGIC OF ASR.
THAT WAS BRILLIANT.
I LOVED THAT IT WAS SIMPLE, UNCONVENTIONAL, AND UNCLICHED.
LIKE LOVE LOVE LOVE.
And I love how slowly u can see..the tires of khushi's brains turning to accept this offer.
BRILLIANT WRITING J. without being in your face.
I am telling you the CONVERSATIONS. ARE A WINNER.
I have always forever wanted to see a "selfish" khushi or rather..one who isnt just a mother teresa, but someone more REAL. and she is FINALLY here.
I like that she excepted the contract in her KKG way ofcourse.
EXCEPT ummm CELIBACY for 1 year...for the world famous "playboy" tycoon. UMM?! Didnt she realise sooner or later the responsibility is going to come to her?
OK now to my favourite bit about this story.
I already told u how i like that khushi doesnt really fully into the rainbows butterflies love and marriage concept.
I LOVED the way arnav put how no one really likes him for him etc (i am not saying it correct..but understand my PHEELZ OK?).
I love that this marriage is sort of for convenience between two level headed people..but I cant wait to see how they are eventually going to "fall in love" and "like each other". Cause with any other writer it would be super predictable. But with you...I feel EXCITED. like i am on this joy ride and i would NEVER want it to stop. (NO pressure!)
wait open marriage with communication?
And I love the idea of what if they find someone else...AHHH. BEST NOT TO EXPLORE, ok?
AND THE LAST EFFING SCENE.
SO MANY ROFLS.
I LOVED EVERY SINGLE BIT OF IT.
ARNAV IS SUPER FUN.
AND I LOVE HOW THIS IS A M&B BUT IN A FUNNY WAY, LIKE A PARODY OF ONE.
AND HOW THIS IS AN ANTI-THESIS OF THE STORY THAT CANNOT BE NAMED.
PLISS update ALREADY.
TFS.
PS. now i have no idea what to say in my UNRES to chapter 1?! I said EVERYTHING here. almost. except how sexy arnav is. I wish does rowing or something. or plays soccer.
PPS. I love that we will get to see a bit of CA maybe and that Anjali might be the neighbour and Shyam might have an inkling of what Arnav is upto.
OH noes M read the note.
Late updex of chapter 2?
I dont know how i am going to survive, unless i ban myself from IF until dan. Which I shall.
And ummm who cum-plains about LONG stuff? Honestly expel?! Yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat thi? Dont u dareee SHORTen things, or else...m ne'er the reads. bas.
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